Summer

Chapter 1 - Summer
Submitted: March 29, 2008 • Updated: March 29, 2008
Word count: 67 • Size: <1k • Comments: 9 • views: 167

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DeathNoteSurvivor on March 31, 2008, 9:58:42 AM

DeathNoteSurvivor on March 31, 2008, 9:58:42 AM (Chapter: index)

very good!^^

pinkEnVxo on March 30, 2008, 12:09:02 AM

pinkEnVxo on March 30, 2008, 12:09:02 AM (Chapter: index)

Check out my other poems and stories too

pinkEnVxo on March 29, 2008, 11:03:49 PM

pinkEnVxo on March 29, 2008, 11:03:49 PM (Chapter: index)

Thanks for all the comment!

erandor3 on March 29, 2008, 10:06:02 PM

erandor3 on March 29, 2008, 10:06:02 PM (Chapter: 1)

nice poem :D

kogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 2:34:52 PM

kogalover2013 on March 29, 2008, 2:34:52 PM (Chapter: 1)

awsome dude now i miss summer lol

zerotimberwolf on March 29, 2008, 1:25:32 PM

zerotimberwolf on March 29, 2008, 1:25:32 PM (Chapter: 1)

now this is a cool little poem

GreyPichu on March 29, 2008, 12:43:59 PM

GreyPichu on March 29, 2008, 12:43:59 PM (Chapter: 1)

oh that's a really pretty and nice poem, good job. :]

nextguardian on March 29, 2008, 12:03:43 PM

nextguardian on March 29, 2008, 12:03:43 PM (Chapter: 1)

You did a great job! Poetry's not normally my thing, but this is great!

winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 12:00:31 PM

winxgirl21 on March 29, 2008, 12:00:31 PM (Chapter: 1)

That was really pretty. I love how you tied in a lot of the best elements of summer. =)

sailoraqua13 on March 29, 2008, 11:40:51 AM

sailoraqua13 on March 29, 2008, 11:40:51 AM (Chapter: 1)

Woh...That was so deep yet so beautiful, I loved it! I'm a friend of eelchic's by the way! :3