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Tokyo Mew Mew Undone

This is finally my mew Mew story, so, read if you want, if ya like, tell me! ^U^



Chapter 1 - The Start of A Journey...
Submitted: November 15, 2008 • Updated: November 15, 2008
Word count: 1165 • Size: 6k • Comments: 7 • views: 362


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shinypikachu2608 on December 13, 2008, 6:28:25 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: index)
shinypikachu2608*Throws natasha at you*

sailoraqua13 on December 15, 2008, 9:54:26 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Fine. Natasha shall make an appearance as soon as my computor's fixed! ^U^

shinypikachu2608 on November 17, 2008, 2:10:24 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: 1)
shinypikachu2608Umm you know how you said 'Mint Aiziwa, more commonly known to most as Mew Mew Mint' right?
Well thats almost exactly like how it is in my fic.
And I know its a lil thing but I don't apreciate theft of my writing style. D:

Otherwise great chapter

sailoraqua13 on November 17, 2008, 5:25:39 AM

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sailoraqua13Sorry! I totally forgot that was in your story! T_T I'll try and think of some other way to put it ok?

shinypikachu2608 on November 21, 2008, 1:45:12 AM

shinypikachu2608 on (Chapter: index)
shinypikachu2608Thank you aqua-chan.

sailoraqua13 on November 21, 2008, 7:55:37 AM

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sailoraqua13U is very welcome Shiney-chan! ^U^

swampertgirl0504 on November 15, 2008, 11:57:10 PM

swampertgirl0504 on (Chapter: 1)
swampertgirl0504kewl. Will Lucia make an appearance in this later? *hopefull, as kaili and Lucia are half sisters*

sailoraqua13 on November 16, 2008, 1:58:40 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 1)
sailoraqua13Yes, she will! ^U^ She will make an appearance around chapter 3 or 4! ^U^

StrawChan on November 15, 2008, 11:04:38 AM

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StrawChanHey Aqua, I don't mean to rude, but you should probably start breaking your fics into paragraphs. It gets a wee bit hard to read the giant blocks of text.

sailoraqua13 on November 15, 2008, 12:44:13 PM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 1)
sailoraqua13You have a point, I kind of lost my place rereading this a few times myself...^^U So, I shall start typing in paragraphs! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on November 15, 2008, 10:31:49 AM

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sailoraqua13Guys, the maid Hikari will be a more crucial oc later, so don't ignore her! ^U^