My Sickness
Submitted July 19, 2008 Updated July 21, 2008 Status Incomplete | Experimenting with combining poetry, dairy writing, and song lyrics (not my own!). A way of expressing mixed feelings in a different type of way.
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Chapter 1 - 'Whispers in the Dark'
Submitted: July 19, 2008 • Updated: July 21, 2008
Word count: 1181 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 286
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mangacheese1818 on July 20, 2008, 1:17:09 PM
mangacheese1818 on (Chapter: index)
zeldafan92 on July 21, 2008, 12:22:25 AM
zeldafan92 on (Chapter: index)
Okays ^^ Thank you for your comment, I'll fix that immediately.mangacheese1818 on July 21, 2008, 6:38:34 AM
mangacheese1818 on (Chapter: index)
Ah, much better.ladychaos on July 20, 2008, 9:38:33 AM
ladychaos on (Chapter: 1)
This is beautifully written, i can feel the depth of the emotion which gets emphesised at the end with the song lyricsi thing you should write more pieces like this
zeldafan92 on July 20, 2008, 12:26:27 PM
zeldafan92 on (Chapter: 1)
And I'm think of other songs to do... Originally I was contemplating if I should put 2 together but that'lll probably be too much. ^__^ thanks again btw.zeldafan92 on July 20, 2008, 11:16:16 AM
zeldafan92 on (Chapter: 1)
Wow O.o thank you so much. I'm just kinda sketch out a little bit were things should go, probably change the order and add a couple ideas and expand my description ^^ thank you again though for your comment. I'll let you know when it is complete ^____^zeldafan92 on July 20, 2008, 12:25:01 PM
zeldafan92 on (Chapter: 1)
Trying to not sound like I'm complaining and relate to the reader, will somebody let me know how I'm kinda doing so far? ^^ Thanks a bunch.
Just one thing. Could you italicize the original lyrics so people who don't know the song (like me) can tell who wrote what?