Dig Deep
Submitted October 2, 2007 Updated December 13, 2008 Status Incomplete | I write some poetry but not often, this is some of my work.
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Sapphire Angel
Submitted: October 2, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 89 • Size: <1k • Comments: 13 • views: 359
Chapter 2 - I don't have the key
Submitted: October 16, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 50 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 348
Chapter 3 - Rage
Submitted: October 16, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 50 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 325
Chapter 4 - Am I alone
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 56 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 290
Chapter 5 - Demons
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 61 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 304
Chapter 6 - Why cant I
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 60 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 326
Chapter 7 - Rights and Wrongs
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 17, 2007
Word count: 67 • Size: <1k • Comments: 9 • views: 306
Chapter 8 - How you changed me
Submitted: November 30, 2007 • Updated: November 30, 2007
Word count: 137 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 330
Chapter 9 - Ripples in the Water
Submitted: December 21, 2007 • Updated: December 21, 2007
Word count: 163 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 282
Chapter 10 - Friends
Submitted: December 31, 2007 • Updated: December 31, 2007
Word count: 166 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 319
Chapter 11 - Alone
Submitted: March 23, 2008 • Updated: March 24, 2008
Word count: 115 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 310
Chapter 12 - Tonight
Submitted: May 14, 2008 • Updated: September 8, 2008
Word count: 139 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 285
Chapter 13 - All year long
Submitted: December 13, 2008 • Updated: December 13, 2008
Word count: 282 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 227
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shadowpiplup on August 4, 2008, 1:35:41 AM
shadowpiplup on (Chapter: 1)
oh my gosh! this SO good so far!crystalwindbunny33 on May 14, 2008, 9:48:52 AM
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crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 11:04:14 AM
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i like this now i feel like crying! your poems are awesome mancrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 11:02:28 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 10)
this is so cute dude you so rockcrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:57:29 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 7)
this had to be for someone!!zerotimberwolf on April 30, 2008, 11:02:23 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 7)
No one in particularcrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 11:00:19 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 9)
you were depressed when you wrote this one to well it sounds like itcrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:58:55 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 8)
you should keep going with this one!crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:55:59 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 6)
aaww did you or still like someone?zerotimberwolf on April 30, 2008, 10:57:13 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 6)
I did at one point...crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:55:20 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 5)
this sounds like someone was being used and they were crying out for helpcrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:54:26 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 4)
were you depressed when you wrote this other than that cool!crystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:53:10 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 3)
DUDE KEEPZ ON GOING WITH THE POETRYcrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:52:41 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 2)
dude your awesomecrystalwindbunny33 on April 30, 2008, 10:51:42 AM
crystalwindbunny33 on (Chapter: 1)
omg this is so cutealex772 on April 5, 2008, 1:22:05 AM
alex772 on (Chapter: 11)
zero thats so sadfiretempesttakashi on March 30, 2008, 1:31:20 AM
firetempesttakashi on (Chapter: 11)
thats is so sad but i love it and i no so many ppl who could relate
even me at times
zerotimberwolf on March 31, 2008, 7:23:22 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 11)
thats what I was going forvash13 on March 26, 2008, 6:02:49 AM
vash13 on (Chapter: 11)
Man I fell your pain brother.aeris7dragon on March 24, 2008, 12:13:43 PM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 11)
sad!!!!!! I luvvers it, zero-chan!!!aeris7dragon on March 24, 2008, 12:11:32 PM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 10)
Exactly!!!!! ^^ I agrees!!!!!!aeris7dragon on March 24, 2008, 12:10:35 PM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 9)
awww sad......that's how i feel sometimes........aeris7dragon on March 24, 2008, 12:09:38 PM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 8)
Awwwww how cyoot!!!...have I said that before?I luvvers it!!!!!!!!!!
finalfantasy on January 18, 2008, 9:33:48 PM
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wow...ur such a good poet!^^i only write random free verse stuff...for some reason, i just cant get words to match up. -_-
firetempesttakashi on January 2, 2008, 11:14:58 AM
firetempesttakashi on (Chapter: 10)
wow that really good love it and so trueFreezingRain on November 4, 2007, 10:17:29 AM
FreezingRain on (Chapter: 7)
aww, if only i could write poetry that good. i tried, once, but i accidentally threw away the folder it was in and when i tried to remember it i had to fill in alot of stuff with different words cause i couldn't remember the original ones. ~.~ it was pretty good at first though, if only i could remember it. *sigh*zerotimberwolf on December 22, 2007, 2:30:21 PM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 7)
yeah I hate it when that happenesalex772 on December 21, 2007, 11:41:31 PM
alex772 on (Chapter: 9)
yay good poemalex772 on December 1, 2007, 7:48:50 AM
alex772 on (Chapter: 8)
Zero omg that was so beautifulzerotimberwolf on December 1, 2007, 11:43:26 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 8)
alex omg thanks lolFreezingRain on November 4, 2007, 10:11:11 AM
FreezingRain on (Chapter: 5)
Yeah this is one of my faves toofiretempesttakashi on November 2, 2007, 11:19:25 AM
firetempesttakashi on (Chapter: 7)
awww so sweetaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:43:09 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 1)
wow this is good...so you liked my poems?zerotimberwolf on October 24, 2007, 12:27:05 PM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 1)
yeah I did and still doaeris7dragon on October 25, 2007, 9:25:09 AM
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SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!alex772 on October 18, 2007, 11:20:50 AM
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zerotimberwolf on October 18, 2007, 11:25:08 AM
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well thank you very muchalex772 on October 21, 2007, 5:06:21 AM
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0_~zerotimberwolf on October 21, 2007, 3:54:56 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 7)
ops sorry about that 0_0'FreezingRain on October 21, 2007, 2:04:06 AM
FreezingRain on (Chapter: 1)
how sweet.;-)zerotimberwolf on October 21, 2007, 3:54:29 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 1)
thanksaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:43:57 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 2)
is it just me or is this a despair poem?its good either way, tho!
zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 10:56:55 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 2)
now I wouldnt say that. these are just based off of childhood painaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 11:31:06 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
oh i see! ya i could relate...or i would if i hadnt subconsciously repressed my memory...zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 11:36:48 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
it would be hard for me to do thataeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 11:44:12 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: index)
well this stuff happened about ten or so years ago...zerotimberwolf on October 28, 2007, 11:13:44 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: index)
oh okaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:46:51 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 5)
ya we ALL hav demons somewhere...hey u dont hav 2 make it rhyme, ya kno.zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 9:07:48 AM
zerotimberwolf on (Chapter: 5)
i knowaeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:47:50 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 7)
aww how sweet!aeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:47:21 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 6)
I dont kno.aeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:45:30 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 4)
ooh...depressing. kuhl!!!aeris7dragon on October 17, 2007, 7:44:58 AM
aeris7dragon on (Chapter: 3)
aww i luv luv poems!!!! but could u try doing longer poems?and i forgot what a haiku is. can u remind me, pwease?
xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:21:24 AM
xkaitlyn25x on (Chapter: 5)
now this one is probably one of my favorites they are all my faves but this sounds somewhat like someone i knew a long time ago before he died.....=[xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:28:06 AM
xkaitlyn25x on (Chapter: 5)
he died at 14...... demons remind me of him because he had such a bad past his name was Kevin Willow Daniels i knew him since 1st grade to 6th his past was so horrible because his father and mother both died in fact i am tryin to make a story about him...... then his foster parents abused him and he died from his foster father shooting him with a shotgun and he ran and was blinded by it and he almost survived but ..... you will find out in the story..... it makes me so sad because he was soo nice and smart and he was really really good looking and cute!!!=[FreezingRain on October 21, 2007, 2:07:17 AM
FreezingRain on (Chapter: index)
Kaitlyn what is your problem, you say every boy you used to know is cutexkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:34:54 AM
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he didn't have any other family both his mother and father were only childs and his granpa and grandma an great aunt and uncle hadc already died..... he was alone but he was one of my best friends.....zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:32:41 AM
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thats something nobody should go through =(zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:23:11 AM
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who?xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:31:40 AM
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kevin daniels {yes his middle name is willow it was originally adam but he didn't like and changed it for his parents....}zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:33:39 AM
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dealing with someones death is not easyxkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:35:33 AM
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ya..... especially since he was so kind and caring of others...zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:36:39 AM
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my father was like thatxkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:38:15 AM
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thats nice to here you seemed to be like that nice and allzerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:39:51 AM
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yeah he was my best friendxkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:46:36 AM
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was...? i am sorry did something.... happen??? sorry if i am bringing something you don't want to talk about.... you don't have to!...=[zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 4:56:44 AM
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he died a few years ago but I'm fine now. I understand deathxkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 5:03:12 AM
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o i am so sorry.... how old are you now???
zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 5:03:43 AM
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15xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 5:06:40 AM
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oooooooooo just wonderin just cause... i still feel sad for you though...zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 11:37:38 AM
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cause what?zerotimberwolf on October 17, 2007, 5:36:05 AM
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no its ok dont bexkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:19:04 AM
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wow this si cool!!!=]xkaitlyn25x on October 17, 2007, 4:18:02 AM
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i really like this you should really be a poet!!alex772 on October 16, 2007, 9:16:00 AM
alex772 on (Chapter: 3)
deep go deepper if u darezerotimberwolf on October 16, 2007, 12:38:41 PM
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why would I darealex772 on October 18, 2007, 11:22:10 AM
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THE DEEPER YOU GO THE MORE STRONGLY YOU FEEL its not a bad thing but it gets you some times
zerotimberwolf on October 22, 2007, 12:03:21 PM
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oh trust me Ive been diggingalex772 on October 23, 2007, 8:52:27 AM
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oh how deep do u plan on going??don't get lost in the forest of memories you may lose yourself
zerotimberwolf on October 23, 2007, 10:11:35 AM
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but one can always find refuge in the lake of guidance=)alex772 on October 24, 2007, 7:19:05 AM
alex772 on (Chapter: index)
your learning quick for some one who is just starting to dig deepmaybe i'll have to start a story of peoms?
zerotimberwolf on October 24, 2007, 12:28:37 PM
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XDzerotimberwolf on October 24, 2007, 9:28:12 AM
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maybealex772 on October 16, 2007, 9:15:12 AM
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my past is a daze as i such for u hahah you good
xkaitlyn25x on October 14, 2007, 6:47:26 AM
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awwwwww thats so sweet.......... who is your Sapphire eyed angel  you should be a poet!!!!o.O O.o
zerotimberwolf on October 14, 2007, 6:53:05 AM
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I wrote this for one of my old girlfriendsxkaitlyn25x on October 14, 2007, 6:54:33 AM
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awwww thats so cute!!!! you seem very niceyou are a terrific poet!!!X3
zerotimberwolf on October 14, 2007, 7:11:37 AM
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well thanksfiretempesttakashi on October 9, 2007, 7:30:22 AM
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thats so awsomezerotimberwolf on October 9, 2007, 8:12:43 AM
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thanksalex772 on October 3, 2007, 9:59:13 AM
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my idea's great if my friends fight i'm first thing they fight overalex772 on October 3, 2007, 9:35:42 AM
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very good !!!< whose eyes shine as brite as the moon above my head and a touch so smooth it would make you sigh the touch of your lips brush my cheek tell me is this love >
its one of my old ones maybe you could add to it.
zerotimberwolf on October 3, 2007, 9:50:03 AM
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not a bad idea