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Hiden in the dark

when two people become one, it is irisistable<3

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Hakura
Submitted: June 3, 2007 • Updated: June 3, 2007
Word count: 810 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 134

Chapter 2 - The Question
Submitted: June 3, 2007 • Updated: June 3, 2007
Word count: 603 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 100

Chapter 3 - the Dance
Submitted: June 3, 2007 • Updated: June 3, 2007
Word count: 528 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 97

Chapter 4 - When tears fall down
Submitted: June 5, 2007 • Updated: June 5, 2007
Word count: 434 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 106

Chapter 5 - a new friend
Submitted: June 13, 2007 • Updated: June 13, 2007
Word count: 348 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 97

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SoraCooper on June 13, 2007, 7:32:59 AM

SoraCooper on (Chapter: 5)
SoraCooperOh My shoot...Merde!! That's Small Rigting Like You Said!!

DarkAngel1 on June 13, 2007, 3:44:01 AM

DarkAngel1 on (Chapter: index)
DarkAngel1the chapter i just typed out is not complete....i will finish it someother time....but, in the mean time go 2 my pro and check out my contest for this storyu not that you know about the characters......thx, DarkAngel1

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DarkAngel1 on June 13, 2007, 3:41:51 AM

DarkAngel1 on (Chapter: 5)
DarkAngel1This is Chapter 5....i had 2 type it out because of the small typing error.....it will not let me change the size....it just messes everything up....so here is chapter 5
so sorry, DarkAngel1

Ar school keromia went into her looker, as usuall. But, something felt different. Keromia remembered what was so different, instead of hanging out with Hakura at her looker, she was talking 2 Saki Chiper, her former friend from lounch the other day. "Sorry i didn't call you back yesterday Saki" Keromia said as they walked down the hall. " It's ok" Saki said " it's just because" she grew louder as they past Hakura "Of that jerk!" she finished.The teo girls laughed as the past Hakura. Keromia looked back at him. He was confused , and looked alone, that is until Akura came to greet him with a kiss on the lips. Keromia felt as though she was going to cry but, she didn't.

That whole week of school she didn't once talk to Hakura, she knew they we're niether friends, or more anymore, it was over she reminded herself. After school on friday she arived home with Saki. "Well, hello there Saki! Long time, no see" Keromias mom told Saki as they walked up stairs. Saki just smiled and simply said "Helly Ms. Carson" then walked up with Keromia. "You know" Saki said as she walked into Keromias room " We need bestfriend nicknames, like bugur, or apple, or something stupid like that" Saki said. The two girls laughed. "Hmmm.....your's is....Hersy!" Keromia replied. Saki laughed and said"And.....your's is......Skittles!" They both laughed and started to do eachothers hair. "So, do you like anyone at school Saki?" Keromia smiled as she was braiding Saki's hair. "Well, duh!" Saki laughed. "I like Makura"



SORRY FOR THE INCONVENIENT SMALL TYPING......IT WILL NOT LET ME CHANGE THE SIZE....IT JUST MESSES EVERYTHING UP! I WILL COPY THE CHAPTER AND LEAVE IT AS A COMMENT ON THIS CHAPTER......SO SORRY, DarkAngel1

DarkAngel1 on June 13, 2007, 3:19:25 AM

DarkAngel1 on (Chapter: index)
DarkAngel1guess you'll have 2 find out soracooper
i luv suspence
haha

SoraCooper on June 8, 2007, 11:09:51 AM

SoraCooper on (Chapter: 4)
SoraCooperWait wait wait...Is that Hakura was talking of Keromia or the other gill whene he said "Never liked her?"

SoraCooper on June 4, 2007, 11:19:09 AM

SoraCooper on (Chapter: 3)
SoraCooperAwww...Cute Cute Love!!

SoraCooper on June 4, 2007, 11:12:56 AM

SoraCooper on (Chapter: 2)
SoraCooperI'm Like Themes...I HATE MATS!!!!AND I GOT SOME FOR ALL THE FUKING DAY!!!

SoraCooper on June 3, 2007, 12:23:30 PM

SoraCooper on (Chapter: 1)
SoraCooperWow!!Thay's WAAAAAAAY beter than my Lamos storys!