Out of the Shell
Submitted November 7, 2007 Updated September 27, 2011 Status Incomplete | This story is based off of a fiction written by my good friend Nextguardian (NG). The OC characters are property of Nextguardian and My friend Keiko (A.K.A. Shadowthe_hedgehog) It details the experiences of NG's Fan character Ryouko.
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Anime/Manga » Naruto series |
Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - So it begins
Submitted: November 7, 2007 • Updated: September 27, 2011
Word count: 3961 • Size: 20k • Comments: 7 • views: 175
Chapter 2 - Councils regard
Submitted: February 1, 2009 • Updated: December 20, 2010
Word count: 4074 • Size: 21k • Comments: 3 • views: 105
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YunieXTidus on September 26, 2011, 3:48:08 PM
YunieXTidus on (Chapter: 2)
YunieXTidus on September 26, 2011, 3:35:28 PM
YunieXTidus on (Chapter: 1)
You're quite a good writer. A lot of the fics on FAC just aren't really up to snuff. You captured the essence of the Naruto world without being annoying about it like a lot of Naruto writers tend to do. I love the way you portray each character, it's very true to their personality.Please, more!
nextguardian on February 1, 2009, 12:38:17 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
'Extending the session' with Sakura is quite open to interpretation...sorry, sorry, I HAD to say it. If I didn't, someone else would!Nicely done (and a long time coming! :p ). It's good to see Ekyt get a break. It's good to see Ebisu get broken. This chapter has so many excellent points...definetly lol at Kakashi and Ryu's antics. Pakkun is, of course, priceless.
hflp on February 1, 2009, 12:23:46 PM
hflp on (Chapter: 2)
How the hell does that guy manage not to explode with joy. I would have pictured him moonwalking out the doors after that bit of news.Neopetgirl on December 29, 2007, 4:53:43 PM
Neopetgirl on (Chapter: 1)
Wow A1 I've learned something today: You're a very talented writer.I mean wow,you captured Ekyt whole personality perfectly!
I love the analogies you used,brilliant. And Naruto is just like he is in the show! -giggle- Awesome work! I love the descriptive detail,it's rare I find that factor in others' work. -claps- Great job! ^__^
uchihagirl on November 15, 2007, 7:58:47 AM
uchihagirl on (Chapter: 1)
so freakin awesome, i totally agree with nextguardian, excellent work^^lopez107 on November 11, 2007, 7:01:43 AM
lopez107 on (Chapter: 1)
i liked itkogalover2013 on November 10, 2007, 3:53:14 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 1)
lol i luv it see i read it;) lol lol lolShadowthe_hedgehog on November 7, 2007, 9:36:21 PM
Shadowthe_hedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
LOL ^^ loved it! lmto, I'm glad you put that part where Ekyt gave Naruto the bill in, that was funneh!Nice job Nii-san, Ryu-Sensei, er... whatever ^^'
nextguardian on November 7, 2007, 12:04:44 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
A1, I predicted that your fic would outshine darn near anything else I have ever read, and certainly anything I have ever written. I am happy to say my prediction came true! You captured Ekyt's personality expertly, not to mention Naruto and Pakkun! lmao, the Neutering thing did thing cracked me. And the "recyclyed noodle". And...heck, just about everything! Absolutely beautiful work!
If you're not going to pump out more of these, I (and needless to say, NG) am going to be severely disappointed!