Naruto: The Story Retold

Chapter 1 - Welcome To Konohagakure!
Submitted: May 14, 2008 • Updated: May 14, 2008
Word count: 3181 • Size: 17k • Comments: 4 • views: 117

Chapter 2 - Alone: The Teamless Genin!
Submitted: May 16, 2008 • Updated: May 16, 2008
Word count: 3109 • Size: 17k • Comments: 5 • views: 242

Chapter 3 - The Test Continues: Worthy Opponents Step Up!
Submitted: May 18, 2008 • Updated: May 18, 2008
Word count: 3074 • Size: 16k • Comments: 4 • views: 192

Chapter 4 - Mission 1: The Land of Waves!
Submitted: May 18, 2008 • Updated: May 18, 2008
Word count: 3288 • Size: 18k • Comments: 4 • views: 140

Chapter 5 - The Hidden Mist Rises
Submitted: May 21, 2008 • Updated: May 21, 2008
Word count: 3167 • Size: 17k • Comments: 4 • views: 108

Chapter 6 - The Hunter-nin's Secret Agenda!
Submitted: May 23, 2008 • Updated: May 25, 2008
Word count: 3351 • Size: 18k • Comments: 3 • views: 131

Chapter 7 - The Threat of Companionship
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
Word count: 3155 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 112

Chapter 8 - The Hero: Gato's Shadow Extended!
Submitted: May 30, 2008 • Updated: May 30, 2008
Word count: 3231 • Size: 17k • Comments: 1 • views: 137

Chapter 9 - The Demon and the Innocent Soul
Submitted: June 6, 2008 • Updated: June 6, 2008
Word count: 3220 • Size: 17k • Comments: 2 • views: 217

Chapter 10 - Naruto's Surprise: The Knucklehead's True Strength!
Submitted: June 8, 2008 • Updated: June 8, 2008
Word count: 3156 • Size: 17k • Comments: 3 • views: 146

Chapter 11 - Courage in the Land of Waves!
Submitted: June 27, 2008 • Updated: June 27, 2008
Word count: 3694 • Size: 20k • Comments: 1 • views: 101

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andr28a on September 2, 2008, 7:57:38 PM

andr28a on September 2, 2008, 7:57:38 PM (Chapter: 11)

Ryouko seems a bit transparent in this story don't you think?

Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 17, 2008, 2:44:40 AM

Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on June 17, 2008, 2:44:40 AM (Chapter: 10)

I really liked the scene with Ryouko and the mist-nins. You're doing really well at adding another character without changing the storyline too drastically. Plus i like the way you didn't try to make him best at everything, as people tend to do with their OCs

andr28a on June 8, 2008, 5:59:55 PM

andr28a on June 8, 2008, 5:59:55 PM (Chapter: 10)

Damn your good at writing.  Keep it up

hflp on June 8, 2008, 7:23:29 AM

hflp on June 8, 2008, 7:23:29 AM (Chapter: 10)

Whoa. Awesome job.

hflp on June 7, 2008, 4:47:01 AM

hflp on June 7, 2008, 4:47:01 AM (Chapter: 9)

DA~MN!!

andr28a on June 6, 2008, 10:30:45 PM

andr28a on June 6, 2008, 10:30:45 PM (Chapter: 9)

YEAH THATS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT
Ahem sorry about that, twas a good chapter, look forward to the next.

andr28a on June 1, 2008, 5:57:30 PM

andr28a on June 1, 2008, 5:57:30 PM (Chapter: 8)

Alright time for a fight

andr28a on May 28, 2008, 12:00:07 AM

andr28a on May 28, 2008, 12:00:07 AM (Chapter: 7)

Keep this story going