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Username ErdeKaiser Gender Male
Date Joined Location New York
Last Updated Occupation I play video games
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I'm mostly doing RPG stuff so don't look for me in any other section.
Once my computer stops frezzing I can get pictures up but for now I have to stick with stories. STUPID COMPUTER!


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Yuna1244 on July 11, 2006, 11:54:24 PM

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Yuna1244this will make you cry...

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.


Please listen to this angel's request......

If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you. it for Jenny.

Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.

Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.................................

Dagger_93 on May 6, 2006, 12:44:39 AM

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Dagger_93... Is it nearly done? I s'pose not.. Hehe, sorry. I'm so impatient. Anyways, I just posted two more pics! One's for you, by the way. It turned out really bad though..

TehKupoKween225 on April 13, 2006, 10:30:30 AM

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TehKupoKween225Oh ok ^___^ Sorry about that, but I've been getting alot of flames on my older art & Iwas just trying to make sure this wasn't another one.
Sorry! ^_^;;;

-KATZ o^_^o

TehKupoKween225 on April 13, 2006, 3:11:26 AM

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TehKupoKween225Uh, yeah I was kind of thrown off by your comment, wtf does that mean? Just so we're clear that was an older picture, so if you were intending to flame me you wouldn't look too smart...

-KATZ o^_^o

UT_Inuyasha on April 10, 2006, 3:24:57 PM

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UT_InuyashaFrom what I can tell, you really seem to mainly like RPGs. Going on that, I can't say whether you'd like UT04( it's a cheap online Sc-Fi FPS w/ 4 installation discs). However, I can reconend Golden Sun + its sequal. According to X-Play, their both "5 out of 5" rated games, and despite being out since 2K and 2K3, and thus a little hard to find, they're great games.
the story revolves around the laws of alchemy(not FMA-style, but close), w/ phycics..I think. THe games are also known for utalizing extremely impressive overkill within 3D fight sequences, and that it was the first game to use that scrolling text sound. Anyway, I highly recomend it.

UT_Inuyasha on April 6, 2006, 4:11:07 PM

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UT_InuyashaHey, thanks for being so nice to me on the forums. In that weird place, even the so called "welcomers" tend to have an attitude problem. Anyway, I was wondering, since your profile says that you like RPG's, have you ever played a game called Golden Sun. I've beaten both twice + the fact that they're a few years old, and I'm still so obsessed w/ them that I won't buy a GBA-DS or Micro until Camelot releases one for them. Also, U wouldn't happen to play UT04 for PC, would ya? (cuz I wanna start up a UT team like on G4's Arena)

demonslayer_99 on April 6, 2006, 1:41:00 PM

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demonslayer_99Thats cool can't wait to get it thanks it seems alot better then the first.

setsuna_marie_meioh on April 6, 2006, 5:39:15 AM

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setsuna_marie_meiohHi! Thanks for commenting on my story! I promist KH Bloopers will be up soon, and so will Lost in Mall, I plan on working on them this weekend, I'm preoccupied with KH2 at this point in time, heh. Thanks again! If you have any ideas for my stuff, don't hesitate to tell me, those are my way of doing requests.

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