emoageness

***I would really appreciate any comments on my stories as i do pour my own feelings into them and would like to know how i can improve my writing***

Looking back at this profile a few years later some of the stuff i've written just hurts my eyes and is irritating/boring to read. The pictures suck too. But this just means that I can see the progress i have made and so i'm going to be keeping all my old and unfinished work here as proof of such.

A place where i can vent my feelings and such:- http://mytornheart.wordpress.com/

Something that took me bout 30 seconds to write (and this was many, many years ago)... 
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At the minute i can't live this live,
i can't live through all this pain and strife.
The only reason i am still here,
is because of her who i hold dear.

She has the sweetest kiss,
she takes me to eternal bliss.
She knows herself just who i mean,
i look into her eyes in the sunlight they gleam.

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20. Finished sixth form and am seeking work.

Thanks to Mrs Barnes from Sewell Park Collage for much inspiration and support.
Wanna chat? email me at jamesn3962@gmail.com or find me on facebook.