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Heartbreaker Poems

These are little poems, most likely an offshoot from ShinobiWolf's Broken Song. If anyone reads this who knows ShinobiWolf, please tell him/her to read this. I'd like the critiscm so I can write better.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Broken Seal: Uzumaki Naruto
Submitted: January 2, 2006 • Updated: January 2, 2006
Word count: 101 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 223

Chapter 2 - Lovesick Kunoichi - Haruno Sakura
Submitted: January 2, 2006 • Updated: January 2, 2006
Word count: 138 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 188

Chapter 3 - Without Family or Friends - Inuzuka Kiba
Submitted: January 2, 2006 • Updated: January 2, 2006
Word count: 146 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 213

Chapter 4 - Whispers of Love - When Sasuke turns Evil
Submitted: January 2, 2006 • Updated: January 2, 2006
Word count: 162 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 238

Chapter 5 - Snake Beats Frog (When Sasuke and Naruto are being
Submitted: January 3, 2006 • Updated: January 3, 2006
Word count: 148 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 198

Comments

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Narufan on January 29, 2006, 11:55:25 AM

Narufan on (Chapter: 3)
NarufanKIBA!I AGREE WITH NARUTOGIRLNINJA!

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:43:42 AM

i_luv_kyo on (Chapter: 5)
i_luv_kyothis one is probably my second favorite.

this is a nice one...

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:39:35 AM

i_luv_kyo on (Chapter: 4)
i_luv_kyothis one's good too...

you're extremely talented.

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:38:39 AM

i_luv_kyo on (Chapter: 3)
i_luv_kyothis one has to be my favorite so far.

i love Kiba, but this one's is probably the best i've read.

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:34:27 AM

i_luv_kyo on (Chapter: 2)
i_luv_kyocaptured*

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:34:18 AM

i_luv_kyo on (Chapter: 2)
i_luv_kyohmm..

very depressing..you have really caprutred the esscence of sorrow...

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:33:19 AM

i_luv_kyo on (Chapter: 1)
i_luv_kyoooh...very nice.

you have great talent in writing.

narutogirlninja on January 7, 2006, 3:27:47 AM

narutogirlninja on (Chapter: 5)
narutogirlninjapoor naruto...... sad. -_-

narutogirlninja on January 7, 2006, 3:26:24 AM

narutogirlninja on (Chapter: 4)
narutogirlninjareally really good! wow u make poems better than me.=^-^=

narutogirlninja on January 7, 2006, 3:24:38 AM

narutogirlninja on (Chapter: 3)
narutogirlninjaNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! MY LOVE! KIBA CAN'T DIE!