Chronicles of a New Titan

That's sooo sweet! No problem-o! ^_^

wow you really are talented! sorry 4 not commenting earlier but i haven't have time!^^

An orange? Okay then...lol

Ooh!!! cliffie!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Although I'm a strict S/R and R/BB fan (I support BB/R more than BB/T), I must say, I'm liking the romance in this!

I wish there was more to read...now I only have an orange to attack....

OH! That's good! I mean... maybe... *shifty eyes*

Thanks for the comments. I read them all. I think I'll give you credit in my next chapter, you've really helped me out! ^_^

yaa add more, maybe she's sycic (i know i spelled that wrong)

i like the mental smacking, maybe you should add bestboy having a mental arugement because last time he fell in love with some on she turned evil and he just dosen't know what to do

good, i wonder dose she have certen powers or is she just a Kung-Fu black belt?

Yay 1st comment *Does 1st comment dance* awasome story u rock!!

LOL! That made me laugh, the date one, cheat on the other! LOL!


Anyway.... WHOOPS! Didn't mean to spell Terra wrong! Thanks for pointing that out. ^_^

Sorry it took me such a long time to comment but, hey, that's what you get when you take such a long time to put a chapter up! :P I'm just kiddin!...mostly (j/k)

A really good chapter! Hey, y'know how Holly seems to go with both Robin AND BB? well maybe she could be dating one, then cheat on him and go to the other! Or...not...

I'm not sure if I liked or disliked how you said "Tara" instead of "Terra"...

Yay i love ur story please make more PLEASLE (faves)

dude! all the chapters are great cant w8 for the next 1. hurry up will ya lol

Next chapter will come out soon! Promise! I just have to type it up... I'll be done by the weekend's end (sunday) PROMISE!

ooh its getting good!

wow! congradulations on finishing a chapter *claps* it was well worth the wait
i have fan-art i mad a long time ago 4 this story, but i have no idea were it is. T_T i'll find it....somewhere

Yeah, sorry 'bout that. I was kinda ignoring it for a while. Whoops... ^_^

Wow, this is awesome.
It took you long enough to write this chapter!
:D

Thanks! ^_^ I love constructive critisim and you inspired me to write more!!!

yeah. i just looked at ur profile... sorry... lets get HER!

ROBIN ROBIN ROBIN ROBIN ROBIN! BB+Terra= happy BB+Holly+:( Robinisawesome, lets get him!

By the way plainntall, wanna do a colab? i've got a cool idea for a new char. im gonna enter some titan writing soon, mabye some art. wait and see...

RavenGothGirl, you live in a scary family. i fell very sorry 4 u. you are right about crying and kissing. the chapter was great. WHOS IT GONNA BE? i say robin. what do u guys think?

NICE you have fixed all the errors of the first two! cute, cuddly, and mental smaking! lol! i love mental smacking!

what are her powers? if shes another martial artist, that will be lame. ROBIN IS ALREADY ON THE TEAM!

completly honest eh? okay here goes... good idea, however, it was choppy and a little predictabel :EVIL PERSONALITY KICKS IN: i have read better prose on the back of a shampoo bottle! :RE-ESTABLISH NORMAL PERSONALITY: it was ok, but needs fine tuning

*blush* Thankyou.

your descriptions are incredibly detailed.

Awww.... Thanks RaeandBB! That's sooo sweet! I can't find the journal I was writing my story in, but if I can't find it soon, I'll just type it up.

you have to make a next one this is sooo awsome, my attempt at writing a story failed:P i have to read this more!!!

hehehe i like a lot!!!

fuzzyfuzz- I never really planned on this to be a SF& Robin story. I'm still not sure who will get Holly, but I think I know what I'm going to do with the story. ;)

I thinks i knows whats gonna happen...buts i won't say....good job!^^

Is Star Fire gonna be jelous that Robin likes Holly? I guess i'll have 2 read the next chapter....dum, dum, dum!

golfcoursedemongopher- YOU FINALLY READ IT!!!!!!!

I'm working on the next chapter (kinda)I'll work on it some more soon.

awesome story plainntall.try to update fast your leaving my brain on cliffhanger and that isnt a good idea!anyways good story cant wait to read the next chapter

monkey_chunck, Thanks! Your making me blush! *blush* I'll check out that story you mentioned! Thanks again.

Nice story it is really good, I wish I could come up with a story that good,if you wont to read a good story you should read The Apocolyps Chime by Articbigfoot it is good.

koolmasha- I've been playing around with ideas for couples and I'm still not sure, but I'll keep that in mind. I also totally agree! ^_^

Kirby93, thanks for more comments! : )
I don't have a Boyfriend either, so I don't know.
And the descriptive words, yeah, usually my friends don't know what I'm saying so they call me dictionary head or thesoraus (sp?) girl.

Thats awesome once again. i guess i sorta like crying to.... the other day i kicked a boy where it counts and felt really bad after that and i started to cry. i don't have a boyfriend(and glad i don't) so i guess i really don't know how it fells to be kissed when ur hurt. Anywho!... great story!

Once again rob and star 4 ever! anywho, great chapter once again! I'm gonna read the next one now!

Awesome! i really like the words u chosed to make the story more intresting. i like how there is a new character and every thing, i think i know where this is going. rob and star 4 ever! no offense

I still have more chapters to write, but I tink it will take a while. I'm nearing the end of 8th grade so I'll wait until summer. Only about a week.

I'm not done yet.

wow!! very nice ending. not lame at all!

okies half of ur request is done and posted but it's not the best cause of the sensetive paint program^^

hehe! i can really relate to holly!! i think you're a really good author. write more fanfics ^-^;; *adds to favs*

o my gosh i like this chapter the best so far!! and Holly kinda reminds me of my self lolz cuz partially what she said about her dad.....my dad is a totaly j@ck@$$ and i hate him and he's really mean and yea you get the picture. his mom too.so when she said stuffz about her dad, i totally felt the connection. i also like the crying. i dunno why, but i always like crying and kissing. i thinx i like crying because it makes the other person feel bad and then they kiss you and it's all romantic. or they just hold you for a long time. or they wanna protect you or something. i love romance too, and this might turn out to be a pretty romantic story! humor is alwayz good too.sometimes.yeaa.....anyway i really wouldnt know about the crying thing. i mean, i dont even cry when my dad&grandma yell at me in the worst ways and make me totally ubeerly upset, so if i can withstand that $hi+, then i dont think i can cry that much. i mean, even in gym class about a month ago some kid literally plowed me over when we were doing this running exersise, and even though my large wounds on my elbow and knee were dark purple (a beautiful shade) in less than 30 seconds, not a tear fell from my eyes that day. i can get emotionally hurt, though. some dayz when i have fights with my dad and/or gradnma in the morning, ill sit in my room at night and write depressing poems and be very sad.any way that has nnot much to do with this so GREAT JOB ::D
~btw, Rae&Holly both have issues with their fathers...any chance they could become like really good frinds or w/e?~

i like this story so far (i usually try to wait till the last chapter to review it all but i cant take the chance of you not finishing an awesomely writtan story!) i like the different POVz i hope BB getz Holly!

wow!! this is a great story!!
i really like your character and how she's all mysterious like me. hehe!!

omg that is sooo good (i read this cuase i felt kinda rude you lookin at all my pics and me not anyway IM GLAD I DID)this is so good *adds to fave authors* BYE!

awesome! when i was reading it, it reminded me of the episode hen they first meant terra. anywho great story or chapter or whatever u want to call it