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A Washed Up Friendship

It's about a sea otter named Strike Speedwater, once a cabin boy to a band of sea rats, and a river ottermaid maid named Barkwater Streamtail, a lone traveling otter, and where the road of friendship takes them.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Prolouge
Submitted: December 31, 2005 • Updated: December 31, 2005
Word count: 292 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 203

Chapter 2 - Barkwater Streamtail
Submitted: December 31, 2005 • Updated: December 31, 2005
Word count: 539 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 186

Chapter 3 - Pasts Told
Submitted: January 13, 2006 • Updated: January 13, 2006
Word count: 751 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 173

Chapter 4 - Lunch and Company
Submitted: March 5, 2006 • Updated: March 5, 2006
Word count: 745 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 196

Chapter 5 - Words of Wisdom
Submitted: March 5, 2006 • Updated: March 5, 2006
Word count: 527 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 209

Chapter 6 - Sea Rats
Submitted: March 13, 2006 • Updated: March 13, 2006
Word count: 786 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 205

Chapter 7 - Salamandastron
Submitted: March 29, 2006 • Updated: March 29, 2006
Word count: 1133 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 268

Chapter 8 - The Galedeeps
Submitted: April 14, 2006 • Updated: April 14, 2006
Word count: 889 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 196

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Redwall_Artist on February 3, 2006, 11:44:22 PM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 2)
Redwall_ArtistReally!!! So you've met him? Do you live in England? Sorry so many questions.

Redwall_Artist on January 1, 2006, 7:05:12 AM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 1)
Redwall_Artistok I'll remeber that.

Pennybrite_Moonsparrow on January 1, 2006, 6:54:44 AM

Pennybrite_Moonsparrow on (Chapter: 1)
Pennybrite_MoonsparrowHmmm, I like it! Poor Edider.

U asked me 4 advice right? All I can say is work on describing your chars a little more. That's it.
Oh yeah, and don't ferget slight accents. For example:

"Come back here or the vermin will see you!"

+ otter accent =

"Come back 'ere or the vermin'll see ya!"

Redwall_Artist on December 31, 2005, 2:32:16 PM

Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 1)
Redwall_Artistthankee