Hospital Induced Sickness

this story is the best!!!

This story is soo cool! Why don't you write more? I'm sure other people would love it, too. ^^
*faves*

love it!!! that is all there is to it... hehe IV and Sutcher was funny and the ranting was funny too

this is awesome please add more *faves*

it's great! i love this story *favvaasss*

DAM! I luv it... pls tell me more... exspecially with Sars and Ecstasy hittin it off... that was pretty intense shoot there...

ohmygod!
I'm so glad I found this story, I love your work with Hospital introduced sickness!! XD (gah my spelling sucks)
Looking forward for more

This is really good, I am loving the way you write. *wishes he could write so well, then shakes his head and returns to reality*
Sars is my favorite character, he reminds me of... someone I knew a million years ago.. Well, anyway, 'tis a great story. *thumbs-up*

This is simply bloody brilliant! Um.. is that a play on words?
*staring at the "She pointed to the dark red puddle that was slowly growing beneath him" part*
If it is, lol.
That's an awesome story! *keep up the good work!

thats fracking awsome! *favs*

I want to know what whoud hav hapend if her litle sister hadent come home!

YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STOREY!! ritalin reminds me of myself....heh i hate things liek that...:P anyways please!!!!! for the love of hail marry continue!!!

**Daray**

Wow. Sars sure does have a bunch of fangirls.. but I have to admit that I like Ritalin just a little bit more than Sars. Anyways, I love H.I.S. and I hope you update soon.

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waaa...

i love this story. i can't quite figure out the plot just yet, but i love it.

I'm not going to kiss your @$$ but I am going to become a fan. Sars is the best hands down. Hope you update soon. Agree with your rant about the human population and all. Hope you update this soon. *favs*

pimp.

YES ALL

YES ALL

great story ive been a fan of ur art for ages but i neva read ur storys dunno y i just diddent dwi but anyway i hav now and plzzzz up date this is a great story and far from finished

I WILL Worship!! *Hands and knees and bows up and down* all hale SLIVER! FOR SHE NEEDS TO POST CHAPTER SIX!!!!!!!!

-__- I want to slap VR I hate smartasses but sadly i am one of them. I don't act it though. If you met me you'd think i was a dumd idiot retard ,but if you saw my reportcard you'd be suprised at the results. By the way I worship you , but i kiss no @$$. others kiss mine, but not the other way around.Oh yeah and RITALIN ROCKS @$$!!!

I read this whole story and it was really good! I loved it so much I added it to my favorites, I hope you still update, even thought you've left....If you do I will be very happy!

c'mon.....Sars is the sexiest one of them all! He's mine! *grabs Sars and bares fangs* So back off!

c'mon.....Sars is the sexiest one of them all! He's mine! *grabs Sars and bares fangs* So back off!

*clinging to the computer monitor screen thing* must..........read........more..........ABOUT SARS!sorry, got a little carried away...duh you did. shut up! no! then leave me alone. I don't think i will*throws a chair*Okay, then.....
well, write some more!

Meh is learning!

MORE!!!!!

GO RITALIN!!!!!

He's right about how humans should just die off...but about the rest, i'm not so sure...

Why girls go after the one that is willing to kill them without a thought it beyond me. 0_o.

=and i think VR Jays idea would work better like this.=

The human anatomy does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave

The human form does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave

Incorrect, mskchick, Ritalin is *not* yours. You see, Ritalin is a fictional character created by the twisted mind of our dear Sliver. He exists on paper alone. Therefore, it is both impossible and improbable for you to have any sort of relations with him, sexual or otherwise, as you so adamently seem to think.

On a different note, I find Ritalin to be a most facinanting character. More in depth than your others. That little speach he gave really meshed well with the personna you were trying to create. Couldn't have done it better myself. One thing to say is watch the repetition of certain words. Example:

”The human body does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave.

Instead of saying body twice, try useing another word like "form".

”The human body does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty form against someone else…” He turned to leave.

Meh, just a suggetsion, and feel free to smack me if you see fit.

Puting Sars in a fetal position was a nice touch. Gives you whole new outlook on sexual roles.

Awww, how insightful. I think Ritalin’s just a dick. ^^

p.s. Ritalin is MINE *grabs him and runs out of fanart right in to a tree*@_@

noooooooooo this can't b the end KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!!!!!! ur stories r the BOMB!!!!!!!

"Out of all the times you screamed my name...I enjoyed the last one the most.”
-Ritalin

Love the story keep it going.
Exstacy kicks @$$... she has to be my favorite character.

You know your getting to popular when annoying fan girls start going after you art.

u kick @$$!! please write more!!

AAHH! i need closure AGAIN! And my needle doesn't work!
Eliza: that's cause you've built up a resistance to sedatives.
Me: And why did you not see fit to tell me this?
Eliza: it was funny to watch you freak out.
Me: Tolstoy!
Tolstoy: Oh, god, you built up a resistance again? *sighs*\
me: I'm surrounded by the dead and THEY CAN'T HELP ME!

wow. this chapter was short, but it was good. anyways. ritalin's wrong. ecstacy isn't a whore she's awesome lol. ok well keep up the good work and make more... i'll defiently worship you... but i'm am NOT kissing your @$$. lol. keep it up!!!

i like it yet my brain is still empty of ideas for a story do u think u can help me i have charechter i added two more check um out

I think Ritalin is just lonly and feels that he can only trust himself beacause of past expieriences

i so toatally love it i was wondering how they got thier names now i can possibly start my own story maybe i will siriouslly need help, but thats whats school is for one more week and and im an official 6th grader yay for me!

^.^!! YES!! I CAN FINALLY COMENT!!!! lol im ok i think ....ne way keep updating!! O.O must have more....

mmmm ritilan is growing on me......hes soooooo....perfect.....not like i think sars is perfect....like the way you make ritilan think...its...soo perfect......mmm......yes...he is growing on me.......they do always go after the pretty ones.......



jessica eh? well...ok then....

more my friend...supply my drug...

Whoot whoot, the familiar 'Love = Bullshoot' rant. I didn't get the first part, but I guess I didn't need to keep... Now, just to wait for the next chapter.

That was well...interesting. Never stop updating. Even if it takes awhile to do. Don't stop!

awesome!

RITALIN IS SO RIGHT!!!Go him!!!!! MWHAHAHAHHAHA! great chappy....... gret story.... go you , you rock! ^^

OOOOO.....YUMMY CHAPTERNESS!!!......i like chapters....and no....i will not worship you and/or kiss your @$$......i dont like touching ppl....ever

GO RITALIN!!!!!

great story sliver!!!!!!!y'know i was just thinking about it and the you make sars talk sorta makes him seem to have an english accent. Does he? I was just currios.seeya!!

Ya, know...for some strange reason, this reminds me alot of my life. I wander why?

I'm LUVS this story! Sars oddly reminds me of my own boyfriend, 'cept he don't wear skirts. That's probably only because I live in the deep south and the school board's a bunch of redneck loonied who can't handle different people. Oh, well. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Hmm... Ritalin's got a dirty little past, now dosn't he? Yeah, good story. *two thumbs up*

I love your story! It's so... whats the word... interesting!! I COME BEARING GIFTS!! *hands Ecstasy a whip and bozooka* the bazooka is for fangirls! *hands Sars, a... um... uh... a ton of dog collars, and skirts* *hands silver grenades and ice cream* Heh heh!! have fun!! *goes on killing rampage with sniper rifles in hands*

i agree with with furby_killer,GO YOU GO!!!!! AND GO SARS!!! A WINDOW CANT BEAT YOU!!!! EEEEHAAHH!!!!!....im a retard

*cries silantly for Ritalin* aww i feel sooo sooo horroibly bad for him.....*hugs him although he would prolly kill her* whaaa!! i feel sooo bad!!! i totally understand why you did it ritilan!!! i do!!! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

THIS STORY'S SOOOO GREAT!! IT ROCKS!!! GO YOU!!!

This story's awesome!! I did that with a straw once....

Yes, yes i am liking this alot, poor Sars is acting like a wimp! XD I knew this would be good because your characters are good, but this is being cool, carry on!

Ps: You do NOT SUCK! ^_^

Porno fest???

HA!

..hardly...

Wooo... a porno-fest...

yay!! i loveth it!! woot awesome job my allmighty awesomeness!!!! *&steals sars* mine!! mwhahaha!! i [L.O.V.E.S.A.R.S] EEEEE sars!! wheeewhoooo!!!!

uhh..sure...


Human sacrifices are not nessisary Xp

All right! You made it a story! I love it!

Your story kicks @$$, ALREADY. It's gonna be great, I can already tell. Go you. ^-^

Oooh... squee. This is turning out to be interesting, indeed.

loving the story so far....ive been looking forward to reading this for awhile because i love sars and ecstasy....its wierd because as im reading this the two of them seem more and more like me and my boyfriend...except that i dont do drugs and we arent quite as dirty as they are in your fanart...anyway...loving the story...especially ritalin...hes an awesome dude....puppy thingy...very good very good

HORRAY!!!!!! MORE STUFFS TO READ!!!!!!! I SO LUV THIS!!!!! *adds to favs.* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just saw you wrote a story about Them and I must say I'm already hooked. Your skills at writing are wonderful and you can really see how the characters act. I must say I really like this Ritalin. Do you have a picture of him? I'll have to go check and see. ^_^

Wonderful story miss Sliver. Truely is.

Can't wait to read more!

eee im soooo loving this!! you are soo great at this!! were do you come up witht hte ideas!?!? oh yes i am working on a story too!! bee looking for it!!Ritalin thinks sars is coot!! i like that!! mwhahaha!! more more!! its like a drug..for me at least!! *hugs her allmighty ruler sliv**gets her insane look* more......

Wonerful! I hope you continue soon! That was a great, seriously one of the best stories I've read!!!!

Batman...this is a cool story. o_O

omigod!! this kix!!! write more my great all mighty ruler goddess thing!! i love it!!*is obseesed**needs to print it out* wow!! poor lil sars!! i feel sooo bad for him!!*huggles the poor lil sars* and omigod!! ecstacy has a boyfriend.....a B.O.Y.F.R.I.E.N.D. other than sars!!! wow...tell me they find out their real names!! tell me!! i wanna know sars'!! and ecstacy didnt need to say sars was adorable!! i knew that!!! keepppp going...or i will ramble on forever!!!!

HAHAHAHA!!!!Sars is acting like such a baby!!!HAHAHA!!!!Awesome!!!Hope u continue!!!