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Hospital Induced Sickness

Sars and Ecstacy, Do i REALLY have to expalin this one?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Awakenings
Submitted: August 2, 2004 • Updated: August 2, 2004
Word count: 2168 • Size: 12k • Comments: 13 • views: 611

Chapter 2 - Realizations
Submitted: August 3, 2004 • Updated: August 3, 2004
Word count: 2282 • Size: 12k • Comments: 8 • views: 399

Chapter 3 - Home
Submitted: August 8, 2004 • Updated: August 8, 2004
Word count: 1961 • Size: 10k • Comments: 8 • views: 427

Chapter 4 - Sickness
Submitted: August 10, 2004 • Updated: August 10, 2004
Word count: 1580 • Size: 9k • Comments: 8 • views: 381

Chapter 5 - Sex education
Submitted: August 26, 2004 • Updated: August 26, 2004
Word count: 1575 • Size: 9k • Comments: 34 • views: 740

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FatalFay on June 5, 2008, 7:41:31 AM

FatalFay on (Chapter: index)
FatalFaythis story is the best!!!

BrazillianPaula13 on March 17, 2007, 5:38:59 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 5)
BrazillianPaula13This story is soo cool! Why don't you write more? I'm sure other people would love it, too. ^^
*faves*

Hieis-true-wife on December 30, 2006, 5:17:50 AM

Hieis-true-wife on (Chapter: 5)
Hieis-true-wifelove it!!! that is all there is to it... hehe IV and Sutcher was funny and the ranting was funny too

fuzzy_the_bear on July 29, 2006, 3:28:38 AM

fuzzy_the_bear on (Chapter: 5)
fuzzy_the_bearthis is awesome please add more *faves*

InvaderRebecca on June 9, 2006, 6:09:58 AM

InvaderRebecca on (Chapter: 5)
InvaderRebeccait's great! i love this story *favvaasss*

Blood-Thirsty-Kitten on March 10, 2006, 11:50:48 PM

Blood-Thirsty-Kitten on (Chapter: 1)
Blood-Thirsty-KittenDAM! I luv it... pls tell me more... exspecially with Sars and Ecstasy hittin it off... that was pretty intense shoot there...

Sasaki on February 27, 2006, 9:23:43 PM

Sasaki on (Chapter: 1)
Sasakiohmygod!
I'm so glad I found this story, I love your work with Hospital introduced sickness!! XD (gah my spelling sucks)
Looking forward for more

Sly_Cooper on February 20, 2006, 1:30:34 PM

Sly_Cooper on (Chapter: 2)
Sly_Cooper This is really good, I am loving the way you write. *wishes he could write so well, then shakes his head and returns to reality*
Sars is my favorite character, he reminds me of... someone I knew a million years ago.. Well, anyway, 'tis a great story. *thumbs-up*

Sly_Cooper on February 18, 2006, 1:48:44 PM

Sly_Cooper on (Chapter: 1)
Sly_CooperThis is simply bloody brilliant! Um.. is that a play on words?
*staring at the "She pointed to the dark red puddle that was slowly growing beneath him" part*
If it is, lol.
That's an awesome story! *keep up the good work!

i_luv_freckled_pancakes on February 17, 2006, 2:55:24 PM

i_luv_freckled_pancakes on (Chapter: 1)
i_luv_freckled_pancakesthats fracking awsome! *favs*

inuyasha902105454 on November 4, 2005, 10:46:53 PM

inuyasha902105454 on (Chapter: 3)
inuyasha902105454 I want to know what whoud hav hapend if her litle sister hadent come home!

wolfchick on October 25, 2005, 2:35:37 PM

wolfchick on (Chapter: 5)
wolfchickYOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STOREY!! ritalin reminds me of myself....heh i hate things liek that...:P anyways please!!!!! for the love of hail marry continue!!!

**Daray**

allergic on October 12, 2005, 4:28:18 PM

allergic on (Chapter: 5)
allergicWow. Sars sure does have a bunch of fangirls.. but I have to admit that I like Ritalin just a little bit more than Sars. Anyways, I love H.I.S. and I hope you update soon.

final_flash on August 29, 2005, 6:05:41 AM

final_flash on (Chapter: 5)
final_flash0.0

waaa...

i love this story. i can't quite figure out the plot just yet, but i love it.

shamenteen on August 1, 2005, 2:36:53 PM

shamenteen on (Chapter: 5)
shamenteenI'm not going to kiss your @$$ but I am going to become a fan. Sars is the best hands down. Hope you update soon. Agree with your rant about the human population and all. Hope you update this soon. *favs*

ZheMustace on July 22, 2005, 4:41:01 AM

ZheMustace on (Chapter: 5)
ZheMustacepimp.

Areya on May 29, 2005, 8:21:02 AM

Areya on (Chapter: 5)
AreyaYES ALL

Areya on May 29, 2005, 8:21:01 AM

Areya on (Chapter: 5)
AreyaYES ALL

S_dragon_master on May 26, 2005, 8:53:06 AM

S_dragon_master on (Chapter: 5)
S_dragon_mastergreat story ive been a fan of ur art for ages but i neva read ur storys dunno y i just diddent dwi but anyway i hav now and plzzzz up date this is a great story and far from finished

Areya on February 28, 2005, 12:13:13 PM

Areya on (Chapter: 5)
AreyaI WILL Worship!! *Hands and knees and bows up and down* all hale SLIVER! FOR SHE NEEDS TO POST CHAPTER SIX!!!!!!!!

Nenshou_Nai_Kon on February 19, 2005, 4:17:39 AM

Nenshou_Nai_Kon on (Chapter: 5)
Nenshou_Nai_Kon-__- I want to slap VR I hate smartasses but sadly i am one of them. I don't act it though. If you met me you'd think i was a dumd idiot retard ,but if you saw my reportcard you'd be suprised at the results. By the way I worship you , but i kiss no @$$. others kiss mine, but not the other way around.Oh yeah and RITALIN ROCKS @$$!!!

Talin on February 16, 2005, 9:10:04 AM

Talin on (Chapter: 5)
TalinI read this whole story and it was really good! I loved it so much I added it to my favorites, I hope you still update, even thought you've left....If you do I will be very happy!

sars_is_my_friend on February 2, 2005, 6:39:43 AM

sars_is_my_friend on (Chapter: 5)
sars_is_my_friendc'mon.....Sars is the sexiest one of them all! He's mine! *grabs Sars and bares fangs* So back off!

sars_is_my_friend on February 2, 2005, 6:39:33 AM

sars_is_my_friend on (Chapter: 5)
sars_is_my_friendc'mon.....Sars is the sexiest one of them all! He's mine! *grabs Sars and bares fangs* So back off!

sars_is_my_friend on January 31, 2005, 7:02:38 AM

sars_is_my_friend on (Chapter: 5)
sars_is_my_friend*clinging to the computer monitor screen thing* must..........read........more..........ABOUT SARS!sorry, got a little carried away...duh you did. shut up! no! then leave me alone. I don't think i will*throws a chair*Okay, then.....
well, write some more!

KichigaiNeko-Chan on January 7, 2005, 5:48:55 PM

KichigaiNeko-Chan on (Chapter: 5)
KichigaiNeko-ChanMeh is learning!

Rei_Anul_Sama on November 26, 2004, 10:58:02 AM

Rei_Anul_Sama on (Chapter: 5)
Rei_Anul_SamaMORE!!!!!

GO RITALIN!!!!!

He's right about how humans should just die off...but about the rest, i'm not so sure...

demonsaintdante on November 14, 2004, 2:06:16 AM

demonsaintdante on (Chapter: 5)
demonsaintdanteWhy girls go after the one that is willing to kill them without a thought it beyond me. 0_o.

=and i think VR Jays idea would work better like this.=

The human anatomy does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave

The human form does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave

VR_Jay on November 6, 2004, 6:59:18 PM

VR_Jay on (Chapter: 5)
VR_JayIncorrect, mskchick, Ritalin is *not* yours. You see, Ritalin is a fictional character created by the twisted mind of our dear Sliver. He exists on paper alone. Therefore, it is both impossible and improbable for you to have any sort of relations with him, sexual or otherwise, as you so adamently seem to think.

On a different note, I find Ritalin to be a most facinanting character. More in depth than your others. That little speach he gave really meshed well with the personna you were trying to create. Couldn't have done it better myself. One thing to say is watch the repetition of certain words. Example:

”The human body does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty body against someone else…” He turned to leave.

Instead of saying body twice, try useing another word like "form".

”The human body does nothing for me…I find absolutely no excitement in grinding my sweaty form against someone else…” He turned to leave.

Meh, just a suggetsion, and feel free to smack me if you see fit.

VR_Jay on November 6, 2004, 6:37:22 PM

VR_Jay on (Chapter: 3)
VR_JayPuting Sars in a fetal position was a nice touch. Gives you whole new outlook on sexual roles.

VR_Jay on November 6, 2004, 6:24:02 PM

VR_Jay on (Chapter: 2)
VR_JayAwww, how insightful. I think Ritalin’s just a dick. ^^

mskchick on October 22, 2004, 12:08:56 PM

mskchick on (Chapter: 5)
mskchickp.s. Ritalin is MINE *grabs him and runs out of fanart right in to a tree*@_@

mskchick on October 22, 2004, 12:04:56 PM

mskchick on (Chapter: 5)
mskchicknoooooooooo this can't b the end KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!!!!!! ur stories r the BOMB!!!!!!!

demonsaintdante on October 5, 2004, 8:20:28 AM

demonsaintdante on (Chapter: 5)
demonsaintdante"Out of all the times you screamed my name...I enjoyed the last one the most.”
-Ritalin

Love the story keep it going.
Exstacy kicks @$$... she has to be my favorite character.

You know your getting to popular when annoying fan girls start going after you art.

Dion_Michaeline on September 12, 2004, 12:15:48 PM

Dion_Michaeline on (Chapter: 5)
Dion_Michaelineu kick @$$!! please write more!!

necromancer_boy on September 9, 2004, 5:48:53 AM

necromancer_boy on (Chapter: 5)
necromancer_boyAAHH! i need closure AGAIN! And my needle doesn't work!
Eliza: that's cause you've built up a resistance to sedatives.
Me: And why did you not see fit to tell me this?
Eliza: it was funny to watch you freak out.
Me: Tolstoy!
Tolstoy: Oh, god, you built up a resistance again? *sighs*\
me: I'm surrounded by the dead and THEY CAN'T HELP ME!

hard_rocker on September 3, 2004, 1:16:41 PM

hard_rocker on (Chapter: 5)
hard_rockerwow. this chapter was short, but it was good. anyways. ritalin's wrong. ecstacy isn't a whore she's awesome lol. ok well keep up the good work and make more... i'll defiently worship you... but i'm am NOT kissing your @$$. lol. keep it up!!!

Shikikami on September 2, 2004, 4:07:44 AM

Shikikami on (Chapter: 3)
Shikikami i like it yet my brain is still empty of ideas for a story do u think u can help me i have charechter i added two more check um out

Shikikami on September 2, 2004, 3:51:35 AM

Shikikami on (Chapter: 2)
ShikikamiI think Ritalin is just lonly and feels that he can only trust himself beacause of past expieriences

Shikikami on September 2, 2004, 3:34:24 AM

Shikikami on (Chapter: 1)
Shikikamii so toatally love it i was wondering how they got thier names now i can possibly start my own story maybe i will siriouslly need help, but thats whats school is for one more week and and im an official 6th grader yay for me!

Dion_Michaeline on September 1, 2004, 6:07:45 AM

Dion_Michaeline on (Chapter: 5)
Dion_Michaeline^.^!! YES!! I CAN FINALLY COMENT!!!! lol im ok i think ....ne way keep updating!! O.O must have more....

ratbrat on August 29, 2004, 9:57:42 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 5)
ratbratmmmm ritilan is growing on me......hes soooooo....perfect.....not like i think sars is perfect....like the way you make ritilan think...its...soo perfect......mmm......yes...he is growing on me.......they do always go after the pretty ones.......



jessica eh? well...ok then....

more my friend...supply my drug...

Vendetta on August 29, 2004, 6:22:09 AM

Vendetta on (Chapter: 5)
VendettaWhoot whoot, the familiar 'Love = Bullshoot' rant. I didn't get the first part, but I guess I didn't need to keep... Now, just to wait for the next chapter.

Demon_Rune on August 28, 2004, 6:04:48 AM

Demon_Rune on (Chapter: 5)
Demon_RuneThat was well...interesting. Never stop updating. Even if it takes awhile to do. Don't stop!

Koolkat6968 on August 26, 2004, 11:29:21 PM

Koolkat6968 on (Chapter: 1)
Koolkat6968awesome!

Furby_Killer on August 26, 2004, 8:36:22 AM

Furby_Killer on (Chapter: 5)
Furby_KillerRITALIN IS SO RIGHT!!!Go him!!!!! MWHAHAHAHHAHA! great chappy....... gret story.... go you , you rock! ^^

EddyBones on August 26, 2004, 7:04:29 AM

EddyBones on (Chapter: 5)
EddyBonesOOOOO.....YUMMY CHAPTERNESS!!!......i like chapters....and no....i will not worship you and/or kiss your @$$......i dont like touching ppl....ever

GO RITALIN!!!!!

HieiandJ-chan on August 26, 2004, 1:39:33 AM

HieiandJ-chan on (Chapter: 4)
HieiandJ-changreat story sliver!!!!!!!y'know i was just thinking about it and the you make sars talk sorta makes him seem to have an english accent. Does he? I was just currios.seeya!!

Demon_Rune on August 13, 2004, 12:22:55 PM

Demon_Rune on (Chapter: 4)
Demon_RuneYa, know...for some strange reason, this reminds me alot of my life. I wander why?

Black_Crow on August 12, 2004, 12:28:54 PM

Black_Crow on (Chapter: 4)
Black_CrowI'm LUVS this story! Sars oddly reminds me of my own boyfriend, 'cept he don't wear skirts. That's probably only because I live in the deep south and the school board's a bunch of redneck loonied who can't handle different people. Oh, well. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Vendetta on August 12, 2004, 4:40:21 AM

Vendetta on (Chapter: 4)
VendettaHmm... Ritalin's got a dirty little past, now dosn't he? Yeah, good story. *two thumbs up*

sum1whosnvrthere on August 11, 2004, 2:08:45 PM

sum1whosnvrthere on (Chapter: 4)
sum1whosnvrthereI love your story! It's so... whats the word... interesting!! I COME BEARING GIFTS!! *hands Ecstasy a whip and bozooka* the bazooka is for fangirls! *hands Sars, a... um... uh... a ton of dog collars, and skirts* *hands silver grenades and ice cream* Heh heh!! have fun!! *goes on killing rampage with sniper rifles in hands*

EddyBones on August 11, 2004, 6:52:28 AM

EddyBones on (Chapter: 4)
EddyBonesi agree with with furby_killer,GO YOU GO!!!!! AND GO SARS!!! A WINDOW CANT BEAT YOU!!!! EEEEHAAHH!!!!!....im a retard

ratbrat on August 11, 2004, 2:54:39 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 4)
ratbrat*cries silantly for Ritalin* aww i feel sooo sooo horroibly bad for him.....*hugs him although he would prolly kill her* whaaa!! i feel sooo bad!!! i totally understand why you did it ritilan!!! i do!!! WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!

Furby_Killer on August 10, 2004, 12:25:42 PM

Furby_Killer on (Chapter: 4)
Furby_KillerTHIS STORY'S SOOOO GREAT!! IT ROCKS!!! GO YOU!!!

Furby_Killer on August 10, 2004, 12:18:14 PM

Furby_Killer on (Chapter: 3)
Furby_KillerThis story's awesome!! I did that with a straw once....

PirateQueen on August 10, 2004, 12:19:43 AM

PirateQueen on (Chapter: 1)
PirateQueenYes, yes i am liking this alot, poor Sars is acting like a wimp! XD I knew this would be good because your characters are good, but this is being cool, carry on!

Ps: You do NOT SUCK! ^_^

Sliver on August 9, 2004, 3:16:11 PM

Sliver on (Chapter: 3)
SliverPorno fest???

HA!

..hardly...

Vendetta on August 9, 2004, 1:25:26 PM

Vendetta on (Chapter: 3)
VendettaWooo... a porno-fest...

ratbrat on August 9, 2004, 3:08:33 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 3)
ratbratyay!! i loveth it!! woot awesome job my allmighty awesomeness!!!! *&steals sars* mine!! mwhahaha!! i [L.O.V.E.S.A.R.S] EEEEE sars!! wheeewhoooo!!!!

Sliver on August 9, 2004, 2:11:48 AM

Sliver on (Chapter: 3)
Sliveruhh..sure...


Human sacrifices are not nessisary Xp

Des_the_healer on August 7, 2004, 6:05:36 AM

Des_the_healer on (Chapter: 2)
Des_the_healerAll right! You made it a story! I love it!

Furby_Killer on August 6, 2004, 2:52:05 PM

Furby_Killer on (Chapter: 2)
Furby_KillerYour story kicks @$$, ALREADY. It's gonna be great, I can already tell. Go you. ^-^

Vendetta on August 6, 2004, 1:01:04 AM

Vendetta on (Chapter: 1)
VendettaOooh... squee. This is turning out to be interesting, indeed.

demon_loki on August 5, 2004, 7:31:40 AM

demon_loki on (Chapter: 2)
demon_lokiloving the story so far....ive been looking forward to reading this for awhile because i love sars and ecstasy....its wierd because as im reading this the two of them seem more and more like me and my boyfriend...except that i dont do drugs and we arent quite as dirty as they are in your fanart...anyway...loving the story...especially ritalin...hes an awesome dude....puppy thingy...very good very good

Inus_lover on August 4, 2004, 9:02:44 AM

Inus_lover on (Chapter: 1)
Inus_loverHORRAY!!!!!! MORE STUFFS TO READ!!!!!!! I SO LUV THIS!!!!! *adds to favs.* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SarsAndRum on August 4, 2004, 5:55:05 AM

SarsAndRum on (Chapter: 2)
SarsAndRumI just saw you wrote a story about Them and I must say I'm already hooked. Your skills at writing are wonderful and you can really see how the characters act. I must say I really like this Ritalin. Do you have a picture of him? I'll have to go check and see. ^_^

Wonderful story miss Sliver. Truely is.

Can't wait to read more!

ratbrat on August 4, 2004, 3:37:04 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 2)
ratbrateee im soooo loving this!! you are soo great at this!! were do you come up witht hte ideas!?!? oh yes i am working on a story too!! bee looking for it!!Ritalin thinks sars is coot!! i like that!! mwhahaha!! more more!! its like a drug..for me at least!! *hugs her allmighty ruler sliv**gets her insane look* more......

Sumari_Kitsune on August 3, 2004, 12:11:53 PM

Sumari_Kitsune on (Chapter: 1)
Sumari_KitsuneWonerful! I hope you continue soon! That was a great, seriously one of the best stories I've read!!!!

Magical_Stan on August 3, 2004, 3:54:58 AM

Magical_Stan on (Chapter: 1)
Magical_StanBatman...this is a cool story. o_O

ratbrat on August 3, 2004, 2:55:55 AM

ratbrat on (Chapter: 1)
ratbratomigod!! this kix!!! write more my great all mighty ruler goddess thing!! i love it!!*is obseesed**needs to print it out* wow!! poor lil sars!! i feel sooo bad for him!!*huggles the poor lil sars* and omigod!! ecstacy has a boyfriend.....a B.O.Y.F.R.I.E.N.D. other than sars!!! wow...tell me they find out their real names!! tell me!! i wanna know sars'!! and ecstacy didnt need to say sars was adorable!! i knew that!!! keepppp going...or i will ramble on forever!!!!

bishyboylover on August 2, 2004, 11:11:01 AM

bishyboylover on (Chapter: 1)
bishyboyloverHAHAHAHA!!!!Sars is acting like such a baby!!!HAHAHA!!!!Awesome!!!Hope u continue!!!