Slave Hero
Submitted March 13, 2006 Updated March 14, 2006 Status Incomplete | A mouse named Vian is a slave who escaped from a temple. When he escapes others learn of his great achievment. They ask him to help some secret assiints to aid him in bringing down the temple once and for all.
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Proluge
Submitted: March 13, 2006 • Updated: March 13, 2006
Word count: 316 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 139
Chapter 2 - Chapter 1
Submitted: March 13, 2006 • Updated: March 13, 2006
Word count: 357 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 164
Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: March 14, 2006 • Updated: March 14, 2006
Word count: 398 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 156
Chapter 4 - Chapter 3
Submitted: March 14, 2006 • Updated: March 14, 2006
Word count: 547 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 142
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Tane on March 15, 2006, 9:04:39 AM
Tane on (Chapter: 1)
hey, if anyone could help me with me paragraphs, that would be a lifesaver. thanks!Redwall_Artist on March 15, 2006, 1:01:53 AM
Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 4)
Keep up the good work. I do agree with the paragraph thing, but it's still good.Tane on March 14, 2006, 7:55:13 AM
Tane on (Chapter: 4)
Oh, darn! im not good with paragraphs!, and its tooken not token.Tane on March 13, 2006, 7:21:28 PM
Tane on (Chapter: 1)
i chganged the words so the dialogue would be more realistic.Redwall_Artist on March 13, 2006, 1:13:16 PM
Redwall_Artist on (Chapter: 1)
Oh gosh! That's good. Just check your spelling on a few things.