Color Poems
Submitted November 3, 2007 Updated February 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | Ok so... these are the only poems I can write lol and J.T. (bookworm369) suggested I post them so... here goes. Worth a shot, hope you like them ^^ (PS: I need more colors. Someone give me a suggestion please lol)
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Red
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 43 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 198
Chapter 2 - Yellow
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 36 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 218
Chapter 3 - Green
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 39 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 176
Chapter 4 - Blue
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 30 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 183
Chapter 5 - Purple
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 28 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 176
Chapter 6 - White
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 177
Chapter 7 - Black
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 32 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 192
Chapter 8 - Brown
Submitted: November 10, 2007 • Updated: November 10, 2007
Word count: 69 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 187
Chapter 9 - Gray
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 52 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 195
Chapter 10 - Gold
Submitted: February 26, 2008 • Updated: February 26, 2008
Word count: 23 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 171
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KelekiahGaladrian on February 29, 2008, 6:27:10 AM
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Optimism. I love optimism, though I'm not very good at it. You did an awesome job with this Wulf-chan, very good. ^^DeathNoteSurvivor on February 26, 2008, 9:39:20 AM
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wonderful as always^^ i duno how you do these i tried one and it sucked XP i like the "dawns first light" line^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 12, 2007, 6:44:58 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 9)
AW!!! THAT'S SO COOL! AND IT'S FOR JT-KUN! AWESOME! *glomps you* YAY!bookworm369 on November 11, 2007, 10:44:48 AM
bookworm369 on (Chapter: 9)
^_^ i love it!!!!!!!!!^^ my favorite one yet! thanks super bunches! *hugs u super tight*YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 10:46:36 AM
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^/////^ You're welcome! *hugs you back* I'm glad you liked it!! ^^YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:24:26 AM
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I love it..... just awesome. O_O *In awe*YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:21:04 AM
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Thanks Reshea-chan! *glomps you*YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:25:34 AM
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Yellow...I dislike yellow, but the poem is lovely ^^YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:20:43 AM
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lol, Yellow is my favorite color. lolYamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:27:49 AM
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Purple also depicts revenge and betrayal, But this is sooo good! ^^YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:20:16 AM
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Yeah, purple means a lot lol. I just did what it makes me think of though ^^YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:28:31 AM
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Snow, I love snow, almost killed me once but I still love it ^^YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:19:43 AM
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*kills snow for trying to kill Jenny*YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:30:01 AM
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Your making me cry...;_;YoriXYamiForever on November 11, 2007, 3:19:23 AM
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I'm glad you like them Reshea but don't cry!!!! *hugs you*YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:29:05 AM
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Lovely ^^ Dark and Mysterious.YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:26:57 AM
YamiRevea on (Chapter: 4)
Blue reminds me of sadness, my Bestfriend loves blue. awesome.YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:26:23 AM
YamiRevea on (Chapter: 3)
Like a brand new flow of newly born fields, very nice ^^bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:21:44 AM
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XP darn it....i was sure u couldnt do it, but YOU PROVED ME WRONG! lol excellent job!YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:22:56 AM
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I have proved you all wrong, mwah ha ha ha ha!Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 9:53:17 AM
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OOH! I LIKE!!! GREAT JOB YORI-CHAN! That one's great! I don't really have much else to say now....YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 9:54:10 AM
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lol THanks Kel-chan! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:16:14 AM
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YOU'RE WELCOME!bookworm369 on November 6, 2007, 12:28:37 PM
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wow....i mean....WOW...ur really good, and i LOVE[/u] the part about superstition^^ =D great job!bookworm369 on November 6, 2007, 12:27:02 PM
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i love it...the only thing i would change is the word "fluffy", but thats just me XD seriously tho awesome job!^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:02 AM
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*blinks* I hate you so bad, you know that? So bad.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:03:14 AM
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You know... that's why I was afraid to post these. *frowns at you* Whatever happened to constructive criticism?KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:21 AM
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I HATE YOU BECAUSE YOU CAN ACTUALLY WRITE POEMS!! DUH!!!! I can't use correct constructive critism. It doesn't work.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:07:31 AM
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*laughs* I'm sure you can write poems too. I didn't think I could until I tried... even now these are all I can do ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:08:53 AM
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Psh, yeah right.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:59:09 AM
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lol Thanks but I've actually had the Black one finished since before I started HS. I'm glad you like it though ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:02:05 AM
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I'm guessing HS stands for high school.... OF COURSE I LIKE IT YOU DIM WIT!!YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:06:07 AM
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Yes is does stand for high school... ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:28 AM
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^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:54:57 AM
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Ooh, purple's good too. Purple and blue are by far my top favorites.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:00:15 AM
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Kool ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:57:16 AM
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*blinks* Wow. That's really good. I think you got insiration from J.T.-kun. You guys really think alike. ^^YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:59:56 AM
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Oops, that other comment was supposed to be a reply *looks sheepish*KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:01:36 AM
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That's ok.KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:55:41 AM
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I like the end, but not the snow part. Hate the snow part.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:57:39 AM
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Why? I thought it was nice symbolism if you think about the other things I said about white...KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:01:22 AM
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Yes, it's nice symbolism... BUT I HATE SNOW!!!YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:04:53 AM
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*tsks at you* *reminds you* Constructive criticism...KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:45 AM
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I FREAKIN' HATE SNOW!! SO LAY OFF!!YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:08:01 AM
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As you wish...KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:08:28 AM
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>.<KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:28 AM
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I like friendship. ^^ Awesome.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:55:03 AM
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What happened to "I hate you"? *laughs*KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:56:00 AM
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Shut up.KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:54:19 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 4)
Blue is by far my favorite.KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:47 AM
KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 3)
Hmm, interesting.AnimeAngel87 on November 3, 2007, 11:53:11 AM
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There is White SeeJust so
[ color = white]
w/o the spaces
YoriXYamiForever on November 3, 2007, 11:54:50 AM
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Thanks! ^^AnimeAngel87 on November 7, 2007, 8:48:37 PM
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^_^ ywAnimeAngel87 on November 3, 2007, 11:54:00 AM
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Same 4 yellowjust do
[ color = yellow ]
w/o teh spaces
bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:08:51 AM
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short sweet, and to the point^^ very good jobbookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:07:13 AM
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ooh i like this one best, not sure what, but theres something about it^^bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:06:38 AM
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ooh i like it^^bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:06:12 AM
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lol pixie dust^^ its good, keep it upBlackwolfmoon on November 3, 2007, 11:06:00 AM
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this are very nice ^^bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:05:33 AM
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i love it! great job!^^