Pack of One
Submitted July 3, 2004 Updated August 9, 2004 Status Incomplete | The okamikinjuclan is a pack of wolves on earth trying to hide their existence from humans that want to kill them the pack is led by the hisakata family kairay raykai and katsumi as well as kairays partner Hiaro Makurazaki. They are always in a const
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Chapter 1 - Pack of One: chapter one
Submitted: July 3, 2004 • Updated: July 3, 2004
Word count: 616 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 183
Chapter 2 - chapter 2
Submitted: July 27, 2004 • Updated: July 27, 2004
Word count: 648 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 134
Chapter 3 - chapter 3
Submitted: July 27, 2004 • Updated: July 27, 2004
Word count: 780 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 136
Chapter 4 - chapter 4
Submitted: August 9, 2004 • Updated: August 9, 2004
Word count: 680 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 144
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Clueless on April 10, 2005, 11:21:16 AM
Clueless on (Chapter: 1)
sounds well...plain needs more action!OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on September 16, 2004, 10:53:36 PM
OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on (Chapter: 6)
THAT WAS GOOD!! But again........i must point only ONE thing out this time. and that thing is, i wouldnt get confused if you told me about your past. i would have instead just listened and looked at you with a straight face. then i wouldve sighed....whos, thats more than one. sorry! ^^ but yeah, good chapter, lil mess up here and there, but its all good! OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on September 16, 2004, 10:48:03 PM
OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on (Chapter: 5)
That is great! But i will have to point some things out. 1) Katsumi doesn't take orders from those (im sorry if this offends you) thos that are in lower classes. 2) Katsumi GIVES the orders and i just justify them then pass them to you to tell them. 3) Hokuto wouldnt comfort you, she would stand by and watch you and feel sorry. 4) how could a wofl hunter use a kunai?! itsnot natural! but anyways, thats me, and some things you mnight want to know.OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on July 27, 2004, 12:55:53 PM
OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on (Chapter: 2)
i love this chapter better...I SEEM SO COOL!!! jk, but i love it Hiaro. its kick-@$$!! i cant wait to read the next one. ^^OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on July 14, 2004, 2:19:14 PM
OneWingedDemon-WH_KaiRay on (Chapter: 1)
you did a good job on this! i like it, but you kinda made yourself seem kinda....main, you know? well other than that, it was good. cant wait to read more. ^^