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Pendragon- Forest of Flames

I couldn't help myself. I made a second string of territories.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Second Earth
Submitted: March 6, 2008 • Updated: March 6, 2008
Word count: 313 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 211

Chapter 2 - Gararu
Submitted: March 6, 2008 • Updated: March 6, 2008
Word count: 339 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 207

Chapter 3 - Garau (1)
Submitted: March 6, 2008 • Updated: March 6, 2008
Word count: 529 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 220

Chapter 4 - Garau continued
Submitted: March 18, 2008 • Updated: March 18, 2008
Word count: 307 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 204

Chapter 5 - Gararu (continued)
Submitted: April 6, 2008 • Updated: April 6, 2008
Word count: 338 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 208

Chapter 6 - Gararu (Continued)
Submitted: May 6, 2008 • Updated: May 7, 2008
Word count: 600 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 200

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FlameShadow on May 7, 2008, 7:25:53 AM

FlameShadow on (Chapter: 6)
FlameShadowVery funny. "'United States, is that a country?'"

FlameShadow on April 12, 2008, 12:38:52 AM

FlameShadow on (Chapter: 5)
FlameShadowHaha... "cartoon-like affair" that's good

FlameShadow on March 18, 2008, 9:30:42 PM

FlameShadow on (Chapter: index)
FlameShadowVery nice. I especially like your verbs. You've always been good with vocabulary, but you should probably work on punctuation and grammer a little more. Over all, great!