JessieEnduro

Okay-kers,I'm sorry,but it's REALLY bad...I'm not creative...this is an excerpt from the very beginning of the story..I thought it might be easier than explaining it all.I'll describe the plot and the charries next.


A thousand years ago,there had been a great war in the sky.No,not between the modern machines we know today,like planes,but instead,in a still thriving civilization that hangs above the Earth we know.They have been there as long as humans,but have never been discovered.They watch from above.They know as we progress in technology,and smirk when we fight wars over things they consider 'silly'.A great kingdom in the sky,like in the many fairy tales we read we we were children and still read to our children today.Populated only with Wings.Are they Angels?Demons?Humans?Extraordinarilly powered beings?All that is known about them...are their precious wings.Wings,sprouting out of their backs...beautiful,feathered,powerful wings.Used for flying?Used for wind power?No,only their wings.Just the fact that they are there.A feather found on the ground.Unusual?From a bird,maybe?A new,rare species?A kinda of animal we didn't even know about?Maybe some concieving pranksters?Or...maybe....the feather is from elsewhere.Above?From the sky?From a kingdom no human can even comprhend existing?Thriving,flourishing,growing,for longer than human's own imagination?A grand city,split into thirds?From war,maybe?Like a human's own civilization.Maybe it is full of fighting, spats, crime, murder, hate, love, happiness, saddness, gloom, envy, lust, gluttony, war?Resembles a human society?Could be.Maybe they are peaceful.If that were the case though,why,WHY would they be divided?Lies between former allies?Lusts for grand power?Hatred amogst bretheren?Maybe...a misunderstanding?Or,maybe,maybe, prejudice?A quest for reconition?A resolve to conflict blown out of proportion?.....To redeem lost loved ones?Revenge for the fallen?Maybe....

War.A powerful,terrible,painful thing.It will bring death and hatred.It may solve a problem temporailly,but soon,soon,the hatred will only arise again.No one has ever been able to comprhend this.Why should they?People will fight no matter what.Nothing will solve that.Its in their nature.Why should it be in a Wings?Maybe they are human themselves?Maybe....but what was the war started about?What?

Love.Beautiful,lovely,envied,deciving?Love,could it just be an image?Nothing?Just a will of humans and Wings alike?Nothing more?There are no feelings except hate and melonchonly?

War and Love?How are they connected?How do they bond with each other?Relate?Is there even anything between them?Are they even existant?Do they float aimlessly in the mind,waiting to be discovered?Do they hypnotize the weak and weary,creating a ruse in our minds that stir our souls to perform drastic actions?Nothing more than tricks of the mind?

How,then,are humans so eaisily entriced?How about Wings?What is War and Love?Images or not,they are disturbing ideas that throw the center of civilization off key,off balance.What makes them so strong?So beautiful?So ugly?Why are people so eaisly tricked?What is it about our attraction to these things that fool us so easily,decieve us,making us think they are right and okay?

There are two sides to everything.Another side of a coin.There could be opposites to War and Love.Reasons that cannot be comprehended.Maybe there are reasons that they exist for good.Maybe they...are real.Not and illusion.Not a trick of the mind,of the imagination...

Wow...thats really sad..=( Poor Gallows...

Do you mind if I say an idea for a story I've had had for a long time,and see what you think?Cause,you're like,really good and can probably help some...

Umm,the greif from his parent's death broke the seal and he killed alot of peoples?o_o Sorry if my guess is wrong...

Lol,yeahs!I want a hint,please o_o' Oh my.

Lol,I want to know Gallow's big secret thingy that left his past thingy with a scar..thingy....or was that his parent's death and I'm just being stupid...o_o Oh my...

*twitches*I have to know....o_o But alas,I cannot know.I think.Man!It sounds so dang awesome!!So far from what I have read and seen,you're a really great artist/author,and creative,too.The manga's gonna be awesome.

..wowies.That sounds awesome....wows..o_o And thats only the beginning?Wow,I so want to read it,now....

Nothing much really ^^
And yourself?

Lol,sure.Put what you can up on FAC.I want to see!

Seriously?!Shweet!Lol,I'll buy a copy of your manga.*nodz*And thankies for commenting on so many pics and adding me to your favs.That totally made my day.Tee-hee.