Hidden Sparks (A Naruto Fanfic)
Submitted June 26, 2007 Updated August 12, 2010 Status Incomplete | A story about the Hidden Sparks team! Dont be scared of the # of chaps!!! Most of them are Super Short! So really, its like there is 20-24 chapters!!!! The ratings are just to be safe, its better to be too high with them than too low ^_^ ~JJ
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - The New Team 7
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: May 29, 2008
Word count: 271 • Size: 1k • Comments: 13 • views: 410
Chapter 2 - Ding Aling
Submitted: June 26, 2007 • Updated: May 29, 2008
Word count: 641 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 376
Chapter 3 - Team 7 Tournament part 1
Submitted: June 28, 2007 • Updated: June 28, 2007
Word count: 716 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 245
Chapter 4 - Team 7 Tournament part 2
Submitted: July 12, 2007 • Updated: July 12, 2007
Word count: 500 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 275
Chapter 5 - C-rank disappointment
Submitted: July 19, 2007 • Updated: July 19, 2007
Word count: 337 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 216
Chapter 6 - A Bad Demon Brings Love
Submitted: July 22, 2007 • Updated: July 22, 2007
Word count: 365 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 276
Chapter 7 - Gennin-napped
Submitted: July 28, 2007 • Updated: July 28, 2007
Word count: 283 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 219
Chapter 8 - The Attempt to Escape
Submitted: July 30, 2007 • Updated: July 30, 2007
Word count: 251 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 262
Chapter 9 - The Two Human Obstacles
Submitted: July 31, 2007 • Updated: July 31, 2007
Word count: 236 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 226
Chapter 10 - Quick Note (not part of the story)
Submitted: July 31, 2007 • Updated: July 31, 2007
Word count: 37 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 206
Chapter 11 - Shadow Clone Comet Lotus
Submitted: August 20, 2007 • Updated: August 20, 2007
Word count: 635 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 287
Chapter 12 - The Demon of the Mist
Submitted: August 21, 2007 • Updated: August 21, 2007
Word count: 613 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 281
Chapter 13 - Inside the Cage
Submitted: August 24, 2007 • Updated: August 24, 2007
Word count: 202 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 200
Chapter 14 - Mew vs. Tenno- Sensei's Blood Line Trait!
Submitted: August 29, 2007 • Updated: August 29, 2007
Word count: 784 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 336
Chapter 15 - Recap (MUST READ THE LAST PARAGRAPH!!!)
Submitted: August 30, 2007 • Updated: August 30, 2007
Word count: 407 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 231
Chapter 16 - A New Life
Submitted: September 12, 2007 • Updated: September 12, 2007
Word count: 711 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 262
Chapter 17 - Walk Into Random Peoples Houses Day
Submitted: September 18, 2007 • Updated: September 18, 2007
Word count: 495 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 194
Chapter 18 - 3:00 A.M. 2nd Attempt
Submitted: September 19, 2007 • Updated: September 19, 2007
Word count: 286 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 212
Chapter 19 - Dan's 1st Exam
Submitted: October 3, 2007 • Updated: October 4, 2007
Word count: 735 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 234
Chapter 20 - Should I or Should I not?: Its Now or Never!
Submitted: October 17, 2007 • Updated: October 18, 2007
Word count: 434 • Size: 2k • Comments: 11 • views: 223
Chapter 21 - Emo Corner
Submitted: October 28, 2007 • Updated: October 28, 2007
Word count: 213 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 259
Chapter 22 - Binded and Blinded: Pass The Obstacle Course
Submitted: October 28, 2007 • Updated: October 28, 2007
Word count: 381 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 214
Chapter 23 - Don't Die
Submitted: October 29, 2007 • Updated: October 29, 2007
Word count: 298 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 204
Chapter 24 - Zeus and Ares
Submitted: December 8, 2007 • Updated: December 8, 2007
Word count: 309 • Size: 1k • Comments: 6 • views: 206
Chapter 25 - Note: This isnt a real cahpter but still...read it
Submitted: December 9, 2007 • Updated: December 9, 2007
Word count: 94 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 193
Chapter 26 - Quizyish thing for readers
Submitted: December 23, 2007 • Updated: December 24, 2007
Word count: 38 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 184
Chapter 27 - Winnie's New Jutsu
Submitted: December 31, 2007 • Updated: December 31, 2007
Word count: 196 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 224
Chapter 28 - The Best Way To Start a New Year...Or is It?
Submitted: January 1, 2008 • Updated: January 1, 2008
Word count: 490 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 208
Chapter 29 - A 3rd Uchiha!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Submitted: February 10, 2008 • Updated: February 26, 2008
Word count: 430 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 213
Chapter 30 - I Feel bad for the Man TT___TT
Submitted: February 11, 2008 • Updated: February 11, 2008
Word count: 715 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 202
Chapter 31 - Ryo's past pt 1
Submitted: February 12, 2008 • Updated: February 12, 2008
Word count: 553 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 209
Chapter 32 - Ryo's Past pt 2
Submitted: February 22, 2008 • Updated: February 22, 2008
Word count: 599 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 186
Chapter 33 - An Offer
Submitted: February 22, 2008 • Updated: February 22, 2008
Word count: 453 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 216
Chapter 34 - A Completed Day
Submitted: February 22, 2008 • Updated: February 22, 2008
Word count: 628 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 200
Chapter 35 - 1 More day til decision
Submitted: April 23, 2008 • Updated: April 23, 2008
Word count: 311 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 186
Chapter 36 - 1 Minute
Submitted: April 25, 2008 • Updated: April 25, 2008
Word count: 642 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 201
Chapter 37 - The Decision
Submitted: May 11, 2008 • Updated: May 11, 2008
Word count: 530 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 180
Chapter 38 - The Decision pt 2 - The "Help"
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
Word count: 448 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 156
Chapter 39 - Deidara vs Dan! pt 1
Submitted: May 28, 2008 • Updated: May 28, 2008
Word count: 434 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 217
Chapter 40 - The Two-Way Conflicts
Submitted: September 29, 2008 • Updated: September 30, 2008
Word count: 840 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 168
Chapter 41 - Werewolf Hunters: Jamal, Ryo, and Nova
Submitted: October 16, 2008 • Updated: August 12, 2010
Word count: 389 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 287
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kogalover2013 on March 7, 2008, 7:31:41 AM
kogalover2013 on March 7, 2008, 7:25:37 AM
coo coo like how they worked 2gether not like narutokogalover2013 on March 4, 2008, 1:18:19 PM
coo sounds good i like u made da teams biggerrlkitten on March 3, 2008, 1:59:40 PM
It seemed to go rather quickly. More detail will help keep readers hooked. For instance,Â
"This sucks...Sis dont be stupid...you know you cant beat her!" Jamal whispered and then he saw a truly shocking sight!...Nova snuck up behind Mew and got a bell! "What the-" Jamal said
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How did she get the bell?
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edited slightly:
"This sucks,...Sis don't be stupid...you know you cant beat her!" Jamal whispered and then saw a truly shocking sight! Nova was silently creeping behind Mew and with one swift movement of her hand, snatched a bell! Simple as that! "What the-" Jamal stammered.
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Words like "stammered" and "whispered" (which you already used >_o) help describe a lot. Use them when you can, but not too much or a reader may become too overwhelmed with trying to cram it all into their brain.
rlkitten on March 3, 2008, 1:51:59 PM
It's nice, though the use of "zsdt...easdrtet...sderesrt..." is a little...er...misused. The very last paragraph, I noticed, is all one sentence, only seperated by "..."s and stuff. Maybe breaking them into separate sentences?mew54 on February 26, 2008, 11:00:21 AM
Itachi777 on February 23, 2008, 1:15:58 AM
ha hamew54 on February 23, 2008, 12:04:55 AM
Konohasdarkshadow on February 22, 2008, 11:49:09 AM
AAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKK!!!!!!!! MY GOAL WAS 600 WORDS!!!!!! THATS SSSSOOOOO NOT FAIR!!!! (if you cannot see....this chapter was excatly 599 words) THAT IS SSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MMMMMMMEEEEAAAAAANNNNNN!!!~Jamal
Konohasdarkshadow on February 22, 2008, 2:12:47 PM
its messed upItachi777 on February 22, 2008, 9:20:14 AM
ur welcome
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