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Isolated

Frankie and the gang decided to go on a road trip, but something went wrong. Read and find out what happened!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - First day, Part 1
Submitted: November 26, 2006 • Updated: November 26, 2006
Word count: 1939 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 465

Chapter 2 - First day, Part 2
Submitted: November 26, 2006 • Updated: November 26, 2006
Word count: 1447 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 430

Chapter 3 - First day, Part 3
Submitted: December 3, 2006 • Updated: December 3, 2006
Word count: 2581 • Size: 14k • Comments: 3 • views: 414

Chapter 4 - Second day, Part 1
Submitted: February 25, 2007 • Updated: February 25, 2007
Word count: 1736 • Size: 9k • Comments: 4 • views: 409

Chapter 5 - Second day, Part 2
Submitted: February 25, 2007 • Updated: February 25, 2007
Word count: 692 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 430

Chapter 6 - Third day, Part 1
Submitted: April 1, 2007 • Updated: April 1, 2007
Word count: 1509 • Size: 8k • Comments: 4 • views: 432

Chapter 7 - Third day, Part 2
Submitted: January 4, 2008 • Updated: January 4, 2008
Word count: 1450 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 408

Chapter 8 - Third day, Part 3
Submitted: January 5, 2008 • Updated: January 5, 2008
Word count: 1286 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 418

Chapter 9 - Third day, Part 4
Submitted: January 6, 2008 • Updated: January 6, 2008
Word count: 549 • Size: 3k • Comments: 4 • views: 411

Chapter 10 - Fourth Day, Part 1
Submitted: January 28, 2008 • Updated: January 28, 2008
Word count: 1194 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 432

Chapter 11 - Fourth Day, Part 2
Submitted: February 15, 2008 • Updated: February 15, 2008
Word count: 1277 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 430

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ginathehedgehog on September 7, 2009, 11:31:22 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: index)
ginathehedgehogI'm eager for more XDD Are you still gonna write this story? :3

Gee on September 9, 2009, 4:50:05 AM

Gee on (Chapter: index)
GeeI'm glad to hear that. Well, I don't know. If there's a demand, yeah.;D

alitta2 on February 20, 2008, 12:37:10 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: 11)
alitta2Awesome! I'm eager to know to Mac's idea, it can even save their lives if it's good!

Falconlobo on June 14, 2008, 5:50:36 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 11)
FalconloboI am curious too^^

Gee on June 14, 2008, 9:56:35 AM

Gee on (Chapter: index)
GeeAll right, all right, I'll continue the story as soon as my exams are over on next week.;D

Falconlobo on June 14, 2008, 10:06:11 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobookay^^ we just want to see what happens good luck with your exams

Gee on June 14, 2008, 10:36:10 PM

Gee on (Chapter: index)
Geeokay, thnaks!;D

Falconlobo on June 15, 2008, 1:23:34 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobonp^^

ginathehedgehog on February 15, 2008, 9:00:43 PM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 11)
ginathehedgehogAwesome! I hope Mac's idea works! Can't wait for the next chapter! =D

ginathehedgehog on February 15, 2008, 8:54:09 PM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 10)
ginathehedgehogLol, Bloo's so dumb! “Help! We need a big pepperoni pizza!” Lol. Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Falconlobo on February 15, 2008, 10:01:21 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 11)
Falconloboyay idea in the works but how will it turn out^^

Falconlobo on January 29, 2008, 12:33:09 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 10)
Falconlobonice intense chapter going crazy a bit they were^^

alitta2 on January 29, 2008, 12:31:23 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: 10)
alitta2heh, Bloo just forgot one thing: there wasn't any kind of sea or river in the environement of the bus.  Nice chapter again! ;)

alitta2 on January 24, 2008, 1:00:27 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: 9)
alitta2This story is getting to be more and more stirring! I could imagine that Bloo's going to drink the remained water, spit it out a moment later and yell: "Where's the juice?!" Then they could loose their only hope to alive XD 
 I can't wait for the next day!

alitta2 on January 24, 2008, 1:02:23 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: 9)
alitta2Azok az Â-k nem szándékosak. Nem értem, hogy a fenébe kerültek bele?

Falconlobo on January 15, 2008, 2:12:18 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 9)
Falconlobocool he's very worried^^

he does care the old softy^^

LOL Tom his voice actor is also a Tom^^

ginathehedgehog on January 6, 2008, 8:52:28 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
ginathehedgehogWow, intense chapter! I can't wait for more! ^^

ginathehedgehog on January 6, 2008, 8:49:36 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 8)
ginathehedgehogOmg, Bloo's so funny but stupid! XD
"You bet we won’t, without the pizza!" Lol, awesome chapter! I hope they make it out ^^

Falconlobo on January 5, 2008, 8:55:47 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 8)
FalconloboLOl Bloo You fool^^

Herriman is gonna now be extra worried^^

Gee on January 5, 2008, 9:29:25 PM

Gee on (Chapter: 8)
GeeYup.;D His love's in trouble.;D;D

Falconlobo on January 5, 2008, 9:35:26 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboyup^^

Falconlobo on January 5, 2008, 9:07:20 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 7)
Falconlobocool nice chapter yay updated^^

ginathehedgehog on January 4, 2008, 9:28:48 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 7)
ginathehedgehogthat was a really awesome chapter!Bloo was so funny XD I don't think youv'e lost inspiration at all, it's awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter ^^

Gee on January 4, 2008, 11:03:31 PM

Gee on (Chapter: 7)
GeeOh, thank you very much. I've adapted your idea and watched a Foster ep.;D

ginathehedgehog on January 5, 2008, 8:43:42 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: index)
ginathehedgehogLol that's cool! Glad I could help ^^ Man, I need to watch some more Foster's eps! XD

Falconlobo on January 1, 2008, 1:07:33 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
FalconloboIs this fic canceled?

Gee on January 1, 2008, 1:34:44 PM

Gee on (Chapter: index)
GeeNo. I will continue it after I finish my Ben 10 fic. New chapters will be up soon.;D I just don't want to make up two different story's two different plotlines, that's all. Probably I'll start workin on this one next week. I fell behind with my fic-work in the holidays.;D

Falconlobo on January 1, 2008, 1:35:32 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobooh okay^^

ginathehedgehog on April 10, 2007, 9:50:51 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 6)
ginathehedgehogcool chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Falconlobo on September 22, 2007, 8:55:00 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
Falconlobome too it's a long wait lol^^

ginathehedgehog on September 22, 2007, 9:57:44 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: index)
ginathehedgehogYeah lol XD

Falconlobo on September 22, 2007, 9:58:08 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobo^^

Falconlobo on April 1, 2007, 7:53:12 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
Falconlobosorry i meant intense at least herriman

now is more worried as he should be^^

Falconlobo on April 1, 2007, 7:52:16 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 6)
Falconlobowow intese nightmare Frankie had

and Call me Tom LOL Which one Kane or Kenny^^

ginathehedgehog on March 31, 2007, 7:38:05 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
ginathehedgehogawesome! I can't wait for you to write more, this story is great and really catchy! It's wierd that Coco doesn't just lay a new cell phone or an escape rope or something but that wouldnt be much of a story eh? Besides, she doesn't take requests lol ^^

ginathehedgehog on March 31, 2007, 6:11:19 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 4)
ginathehedgehogawesome! This story is getting good. If I was on the bus, id'e be sooooo scared right now!

ginathehedgehog on March 31, 2007, 5:33:20 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 3)
ginathehedgehogThe field sounds so nice! Great job!

ginathehedgehog on March 31, 2007, 5:12:08 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
ginathehedgehogawesome! Frankie didn't seem too pleased with Goo coming lol ^^

ginathehedgehog on March 31, 2007, 5:02:46 AM

ginathehedgehog on (Chapter: 1)
ginathehedgehogI finally got to read this, it's great! Just like a real episode, i'm gonna read te next chapter right now!

alitta2 on March 24, 2007, 8:45:13 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: 4)
alitta2What a great chapter! I'm sure if Frankie isn't there, Bloo could drink all of the water, like in episode CAMP KEEP A GOOD MAC DOWN (but there he drank two bottle of that)

Falconlobo on March 24, 2007, 2:45:27 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 4)
Falconlobonope he spat it out and said where's the juice^^

alitta2 on March 26, 2007, 1:19:07 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: index)
alitta2Oh, yeah! Really, you're right, sorry for that, I watched it a long time ago :(

Falconlobo on March 26, 2007, 4:51:38 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconloboit's okay i watch em alot^^ i like that eppie cuse Herriman is so funny and cute in it^^

Falconlobo on February 25, 2007, 11:04:03 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 5)
FalconloboBloo Goo you sneaks^^

nice job

i hope Herriman relizes the dire sitch and hops into action^^

Falconlobo on February 25, 2007, 11:01:52 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 4)
Falconlobowow awesom chapter^^ i love the Herriman hint dreaming about Farnkie are we Mr. H LOL
great dialog get me water why cuse i'm thirsty^^

Candycane9 on February 12, 2007, 3:00:09 PM

Candycane9 on (Chapter: 1)
Candycane9Whoa this is good it's like the show! good job! ^^

alitta2 on December 4, 2006, 12:21:02 AM

alitta2 on (Chapter: index)
alitta2Azta! Hol hallottad azt az utolsó nyelvtörőt?
Baromi nehéz, a végén mindig elakadok :)
Egyébként kiváncsi vagyok, mi lesz a második nap

Falconlobo on December 3, 2006, 1:54:54 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
FalconloboPlease contine with four either before i go to Disney World

or after i get back it's getting really interesting

Falconlobo on December 3, 2006, 1:53:42 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 3)
Falconloboin one word wow

which describes this chapter

hidden hits on Frankie and Herriman


langauge that i have no ideas of what was said

funny dialoge characters in character and a car bursting into flames

Comedy Action Drama Nightmares of who knows what

stragulation LOL BLOO The Blobbie got Wrestled

By Frankie The Furious


did i say one word i meant many^^

Gee on November 27, 2006, 5:07:15 AM

Gee on (Chapter: index)
GeeThnaks! I haven't figured it out yet, what to do with Herriman, but he'll appear in the fic several times, that's for sure.;D

Falconlobo on November 28, 2006, 3:17:14 PM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobowell his mood implied something maybe he frustrated that he likes Frankie but surpresses his desire to tell her how he truly feels because he does not think she would ever feel the same way about him maybe he could some how show up and save them in a bizare kooky way that fsoter's is known for

but Frankie is not present and he finds her drowning in a lake she would go under water he jumps in saves her and gives her CPR

and They tell each other how they truly fell tword each other perhaps kiss and make up

after the trip if ya catch my dirft but with lack of too many details unless you up the rating to moderate but stil l with little but not too many details cause otherwise it would nto be allowed here cause no mature or NC-17

eh just a sugestion

Gee on November 29, 2006, 12:22:32 AM

Gee on (Chapter: index)
GeeI'll have to think about this. If I'd involve such idead, I'd rather do it only at the end. But thanks for the suggestions anyway. Perhaps I'll use some of them, if that's okay!;D

Falconlobo on November 29, 2006, 11:15:24 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: index)
Falconlobookay that would be an interesting ending

Falconlobo on November 27, 2006, 4:11:28 AM

Falconlobo on (Chapter: 2)
FalconloboNice job on this chapter pretty in character for the characters

still did not explain what was up with Mr. H oh well maybe next cahpter or it will reamian a mystery