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Atem and Yugi are orphaned brothers, on the run from a madman. Tea has died and Atem has been moping for the past year. As he sinks further into depression, will he be able to help his brother defeat the madman?
(based on the book:"Eragon")

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 - Intro
Submitted: January 24, 2007 • Updated: January 24, 2007
Word count: 328 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 236

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2-A new friend
Submitted: February 4, 2007 • Updated: February 4, 2007
Word count: 904 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 221

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3-Flashbacks and Poison
Submitted: February 7, 2007 • Updated: February 7, 2007
Word count: 790 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 255

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4-flight of the phoenix
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 1006 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 239

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perfectpureblood on February 18, 2007, 11:02:08 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 4)
perfectpurebloodawesome!!!!! love the action! and the whole pheonox thing, keep it up! so glad he recovered. ^^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 14, 2007, 8:42:10 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 4)
HikariYugiYamiAtemucool! ^^

fairywarrior on February 14, 2007, 2:39:08 AM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 4)
fairywarriorCool Chappie!
Im glad Atem has recovered!! =^^=

Cant wait for the next update =]

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 8, 2007, 6:29:44 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 3)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuaww...that's very sad...*gasp* Atemu's being poisoned! O.O

BrazillianPaula13 on February 7, 2007, 11:50:46 PM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 3)
BrazillianPaula13Do you wanna kill him or something? In every fic you've made, Atem gets hurt. The only thing that hasn't happened yet was him getting kicked "where the sun don't shine".>_<
Poor guy... But, what the heck, the story 's great!^-^

perfectpureblood on February 7, 2007, 8:34:50 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 3)
perfectpurebloodomg!! so sad! so deep! the description of the poisening was excellent! hope he pulls through it!

fairywarrior on February 7, 2007, 5:14:12 PM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 3)
fairywarriorOmg thats so sad :(
It makes me sad!!
And yeh i have the same question as 'yafoolin' ! =^^=

yafoolin on February 7, 2007, 11:57:10 AM

yafoolin on (Chapter: 3)
yafoolinThat's so sad
I have one question is this going to be an AtemxOC?

perfectpureblood on February 5, 2007, 10:20:06 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 2)
perfectpurebloodawesome!! Helena sounds so cool! but he can't get with her!! Tea is for him and him alone! will she come back?
love your ideas, as usual! love your description! and I adore the fight scene!! keep it up!! this ones gooood!! :D

yafoolin on February 5, 2007, 8:30:32 PM

yafoolin on (Chapter: 2)
yafoolinthis is cool I just wish Téa would come back

fairywarrior on February 5, 2007, 1:15:41 AM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 2)
fairywarriorCool!! =^^= I like the new character! (even thoguh i wish Tea would all of a sudden come back to life and claim Yami as hers!! Sorry crazy fantasies taking over)

Great story cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^

BrazillianPaula13 on February 4, 2007, 8:31:44 PM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 2)
BrazillianPaula13Very nice! When you introduced Helena all I thought was, "There's gonna be a romance later on!" XD
Awesome story, as always.^-^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 4, 2007, 5:26:59 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 2)
HikariYugiYamiAtemucool story! ^^

BrazillianPaula13 on February 1, 2007, 3:35:28 AM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 1)
BrazillianPaula13I think I should start by saying something like, "Poor Tea". But I won't 'cause I don't like her.
Well, This DOES seem like it's gonna be your best work. Can't wait!^_^

perfectpureblood on January 24, 2007, 10:37:30 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 1)
perfectpurebloodwow, thats so sad! wonderful intro. this fic sounds like its going to be good! great story line. it has a wonderful feel to it. I like the way Yugi is telling the story.

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on January 24, 2007, 6:58:09 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 1)
HikariYugiYamiAtemucool story..! poor Tea..

yafoolin on January 24, 2007, 12:14:41 PM

yafoolin on (Chapter: 1)
yafoolinIts so sad
Téa can't be dead
Please update soon

fairywarrior on January 24, 2007, 5:24:32 AM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 1)
fairywarriorAwwwww thats so sad
I cant believe Tea's dead!! lol XD
Good story cant wait for the next chapter