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Atem and Yugi are orphaned brothers, on the run from a madman. Tea has died and Atem has been moping for the past year. As he sinks further into depression, will he be able to help his brother defeat the madman?
(based on the book:"Eragon")

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1 - Intro
Submitted: January 24, 2007 • Updated: January 24, 2007
Word count: 328 • Size: 1k • Comments: 5 • views: 235

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2-A new friend
Submitted: February 4, 2007 • Updated: February 4, 2007
Word count: 904 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 220

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3-Flashbacks and Poison
Submitted: February 7, 2007 • Updated: February 7, 2007
Word count: 790 • Size: 4k • Comments: 5 • views: 254

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4-flight of the phoenix
Submitted: February 14, 2007 • Updated: February 14, 2007
Word count: 1006 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 238

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perfectpureblood on February 18, 2007, 11:02:08 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 4)
perfectpurebloodawesome!!!!! love the action! and the whole pheonox thing, keep it up! so glad he recovered. ^^

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 14, 2007, 8:42:10 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 4)
HikariYugiYamiAtemucool! ^^

fairywarrior on February 14, 2007, 2:39:08 AM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 4)
fairywarriorCool Chappie!
Im glad Atem has recovered!! =^^=

Cant wait for the next update =]

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on February 8, 2007, 6:29:44 PM

HikariYugiYamiAtemu on (Chapter: 3)
HikariYugiYamiAtemuaww...that's very sad...*gasp* Atemu's being poisoned! O.O

BrazillianPaula13 on February 7, 2007, 11:50:46 PM

BrazillianPaula13 on (Chapter: 3)
BrazillianPaula13Do you wanna kill him or something? In every fic you've made, Atem gets hurt. The only thing that hasn't happened yet was him getting kicked "where the sun don't shine".>_<
Poor guy... But, what the heck, the story 's great!^-^

perfectpureblood on February 7, 2007, 8:34:50 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 3)
perfectpurebloodomg!! so sad! so deep! the description of the poisening was excellent! hope he pulls through it!

fairywarrior on February 7, 2007, 5:14:12 PM

fairywarrior on (Chapter: 3)
fairywarriorOmg thats so sad :(
It makes me sad!!
And yeh i have the same question as 'yafoolin' ! =^^=

yafoolin on February 7, 2007, 11:57:10 AM

yafoolin on (Chapter: 3)
yafoolinThat's so sad
I have one question is this going to be an AtemxOC?

perfectpureblood on February 5, 2007, 10:20:06 PM

perfectpureblood on (Chapter: 2)
perfectpurebloodawesome!! Helena sounds so cool! but he can't get with her!! Tea is for him and him alone! will she come back?
love your ideas, as usual! love your description! and I adore the fight scene!! keep it up!! this ones gooood!! :D

yafoolin on February 5, 2007, 8:30:32 PM

yafoolin on (Chapter: 2)
yafoolinthis is cool I just wish Téa would come back