Darkness Falls (A Naruto Tale)
Submitted December 14, 2007 Updated March 3, 2008 Status Incomplete | A Naruto story added with some of my oc's
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Welcome All Losers!
Submitted: December 14, 2007 • Updated: December 14, 2007
Word count: 671 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 139
Chapter 2 - Who Is This Blonde Head Person!?
Submitted: December 15, 2007 • Updated: December 15, 2007
Word count: 494 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 135
Chapter 3 - WHAT IS THAT MARKING!?
Submitted: December 16, 2007 • Updated: December 16, 2007
Word count: 667 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 114
Chapter 4 - Friend or Foe?
Submitted: December 17, 2007 • Updated: December 17, 2007
Word count: 549 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 114
Chapter 5 - Sadness and Sorrow
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
Word count: 574 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 154
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Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:46:33 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 5)
Poor Luna! She sounds like she must've had a tough life...Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:44:22 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 4)
He's he FATHER?!?!Good one!
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:36:22 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 3)
That's one violent girl! nice improvement on the punctuation too.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:31:19 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 2)
Nice, liking the girl! Bit more detail to pad it out would be good.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:28:55 AM
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on (Chapter: 1)
Nice intro, couple of typos, but it didn't interrupt the flow too much. Keep up the good work!winxgirl21 on March 25, 2008, 10:39:07 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 5)
Oh! i wonder what's going to happen? Good chapter. =)winxgirl21 on March 25, 2008, 10:37:16 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 4)
Zabuza's her father? I can't wait to see where this is going!winxgirl21 on March 25, 2008, 10:34:24 AM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 3)
hmm, I wonder if she'll stay or not.winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 11:23:02 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 2)
Good chapter. =) I wonder what the tattoo is for?winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 11:21:06 PM
winxgirl21 on (Chapter: 1)
Good first chapter. Maybe check the spelling a bit, and a few of the words that are capitalized in the sentences shouldn't be, like when you said "Haiku Fuming" it should have been 'Haiku fuming'. Other than that, great chapter! =)kogalover2013 on January 19, 2008, 1:18:16 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 5)
omg great chap p.s. whers sakura she wuald be kicken these guys butts lol cant wait 4 updatekogalover2013 on January 19, 2008, 1:03:36 PM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 4)
i hate u im sakura in my head and she whould not freak over a nailkogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 7:24:37 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 3)
awsome storieskogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 7:20:17 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 2)
awsome dudeÂ
kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 6:45:32 AM
kogalover2013 on (Chapter: 1)
lol awsome story favsGreyPichu on December 22, 2007, 1:56:14 PM
GreyPichu on (Chapter: 5)
this is really good, cant wait for th update!SandyDeath on December 22, 2007, 1:56:51 PM
SandyDeath on (Chapter: 5)
Thanks ^-^nextguardian on December 18, 2007, 10:31:31 AM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 5)
Wow, excellent chapter, and great twist with the Bridge episode!nextguardian on December 17, 2007, 12:34:31 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 4)
1. Poor Sakura, breaking that nail (lol, I actualy like Sakura, but that was an awesome touch!)2. Holy! Zabuza=Father? Nice twist!
Another great ch!
nextguardian on December 16, 2007, 11:33:27 AM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 3)
Good stuff! I just want to say this: THANK YOU for putting your dialogue on different lines, not to mention using punctuation, lol! Anyway, great chapter!SandyDeath on December 17, 2007, 5:23:03 AM
SandyDeath on (Chapter: 3)
thanks next you rock ^-^Silverfeather on December 16, 2007, 6:36:10 AM
Silverfeather on (Chapter: 1)
Not bad, there are a few spelling and punct. mistakes, but otherwise it is fine.SandyDeath on December 16, 2007, 6:46:04 AM
SandyDeath on (Chapter: 1)
Lol XD! Im dumb and i type too quickly XDSilverfeather on December 16, 2007, 7:06:23 AM
Silverfeather on (Chapter: index)
...I never said you were dumb, we all make mistakes, just slow down a bit to make it better ^-^SandyDeath on December 16, 2007, 7:28:50 AM
SandyDeath on (Chapter: index)
lol ok XD corse last night i was very tired that was really the last thing i did on the comp.Silverfeather on December 16, 2007, 6:38:50 AM
Silverfeather on (Chapter: 2)
Still is not bad with exceptions of the same thing, but one suggestion try not to go so quickly into the plot ;)nextguardian on December 15, 2007, 2:05:29 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
Whoa, the plot thickens! Nice job!SandyDeath on December 15, 2007, 2:06:08 PM
SandyDeath on (Chapter: 2)
Thanks again lol ^-^nextguardian on December 15, 2007, 10:59:17 AM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
Great start! Sounds like a fun group!SandyDeath on December 15, 2007, 11:23:25 AM
SandyDeath on (Chapter: 1)
lol thanks ^-^