Hellfire
Submitted October 23, 2008 Updated May 9, 2009 Status Incomplete | Just an idea I had, lemme know what you think. And btw I borrowed the bad guys from actual myths lol Also please make sure to check out the Q&A section (for background info on Hellfire), I'll be updating it periodically.
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Chapters
Chapter 0 - Q&A
Submitted: January 2, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 269 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 796
Chapter 0 - The Good Guys
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: February 21, 2009
Word count: 152 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 859
Chapter 0 - The Bad Guys
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 117 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 790
Chapter 1 - The Arrival
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 376
Chapter 2 - Newcomers
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 613 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 366
Chapter 3 - Friendship
Submitted: November 4, 2008 • Updated: May 9, 2009
Word count: 1157 • Size: 6k • Comments: 7 • views: 362
Chapter 4 - Marked
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 926 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 379
Chapter 5 - Prophecy
Submitted: December 9, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
Word count: 1158 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 351
Chapter 6 - Encounter
Submitted: December 30, 2008 • Updated: December 31, 2008
Word count: 1163 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 343
Chapter 7 - Alagor
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 1040 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 375
Chapter 8 - Astar
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 25, 2009
Word count: 944 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 336
Chapter 9 - Kaesi
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 1173 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 359
Chapter 10 - Noah
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: April 8, 2009
Word count: 1357 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 323
Chapter 11 - Betrayal
Submitted: February 17, 2009 • Updated: February 17, 2009
Word count: 969 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 352
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KelekiahGaladrian on January 26, 2009, 7:17:01 AM
YoriXYamiForever on January 25, 2009, 9:27:55 AM
AHH!! Where's Alagor?! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!Alagor, I hope you know I will kill you if you joined the bad side. What did I tell you?! DO NOT JOIN THEM!! PLEASE!!
Noah's part was awesome - and full of surprises! I can't wait for the next part!
YoriXYamiForever on January 25, 2009, 9:20:42 AM
Aww, poor Kaesi. I dunno what the scrolls are but they were obviously important. And the pain sounded horrible. I love the message! It's way creative. I hope everyone can meet up again.
Now I'm worried about Noah. At least the other three had powers. Also, Blackheart's the only villain who hasn't shown up to torment people, right? Not good...
YoriXYamiForever on January 25, 2009, 9:10:51 AM
Ooooooooh, I wanna know what the message said! I love Astar! His taunts at the beginning were great lol. Loved the chapter. ^^
YoriXYamiForever on January 25, 2009, 9:13:42 AM
Btw, I did spot one error:“Then again, you couldn’t at you strongest.”
You have no clue how many times I've done that myself! lol, I'm always typing too fast so I miss letters - even whole words some of the time -////-
YoriXYamiForever on January 25, 2009, 8:57:05 AM
NO ALAGOR! DON'T JOIN THEM!! BEAT THEM!! Even if it looks like you can't . . . Oh well! I have faith in you!
That world would suck, but I love the idea. I'm so excited I have so many chapters to read!! ^^
Blackwolfmoon on January 24, 2009, 5:36:21 AM
great chapter! keep wrtieing! and cant wait for the next! :3Blackwolfmoon on January 24, 2009, 5:27:07 AM
i like wallow! and did you make up the message on the wall? and whats the red stuff? your writeing really brings each character to life ^^ i wish i could do that, i like how you gave each character a spefic personality which sticks out from the rest but also easily blends with the story, its really nice!
Blackwolfmoon on January 24, 2009, 5:20:30 AM
Whered Astar go? and Gressil gets mad easily i guess Note to self : dont piss Gressil off
anyways another awesome chapter! i like Astars insult in the begining of the chapter and the details are simple but theres something about it that keeps you interested, its really neat!
keep writeing!!
Blackwolfmoon on January 24, 2009, 5:12:15 AM
wow, a place only existing in your mind where you can get hurt ? o.o yikes! i hope Alagor gets out of that okay anyways, a well written chapter. It kept me focused and i enjoyed the dialog.. keep writeing!
KelekiahGaladrian on January 20, 2009, 11:49:29 AM
I am sincerely sorry about taking so long to read and review this. I suppose you can say I've been procrastinating it, though, I swear, I haven't meant to.The beginning was awesome and depressing at the same time. Bad guys are awesome and Blackheart is one of those REALLY awesome bad guys, like Voldemort though I'm sure Blackheart is more evil than Voldemort is. If that comparison offends you, I apologize (I understand many people don't like the Harry Potter series for one reason or another).
The chapter held me in suspense, though, from reading Wulf-chan's comment, I wasn't held in THAT much (but my brain is fried, so I'm not as focused as I could be).
I hate and love your cliffhanger at the same time. It's mean to end that way with next to no info about what's happening, however, being a writer myself, cliffhangers are awesome 'cause they keep you interested and waiting for the next part.
I'm interested to see how things go and what happens next. Great job so far and good luck to your writing of more of it. ^^
DeathNoteSurvivor on January 21, 2009, 10:43:01 AM
you kidding? lol Harry Potter's like my fave seriesKelekiahGaladrian on January 26, 2009, 7:08:05 AM
Koolness. I love and hate Harry Potter at the same time, both the books and the movies (I read WAY too much fanfiction. . . .).
Where to start. . . .
Very nice description. I absolutely adore it. It was full of mystery and still is because Alagor is NOT going to join the bad guys 'cause, if he does, I'll have his head and I'll kill him, bring him back to life, kill him again, and repeat the process MULTIPLE times.
I hate people that can just be so CALM in a situation like that. It's ridiculously CREEPY!!!!!
Me is excited to know about the others' situation. Guess that means I have to go read the rest of it now. ^^
Great job by the way. It was very good. ^^ Me likes. ^^