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Hellfire

Just an idea I had, lemme know what you think.

And btw I borrowed the bad guys from actual myths lol

Also please make sure to check out the Q&A section (for background info on Hellfire), I'll be updating it periodically.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 0 - Q&A
Submitted: January 2, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 269 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 796

Chapter 0 - The Good Guys
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: February 21, 2009
Word count: 152 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 859

Chapter 0 - The Bad Guys
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 117 • Size: 1k • Comments: 16 • views: 790

Chapter 1 - The Arrival
Submitted: October 26, 2008 • Updated: October 26, 2008
Word count: 475 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 377

Chapter 2 - Newcomers
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 613 • Size: 3k • Comments: 8 • views: 366

Chapter 3 - Friendship
Submitted: November 4, 2008 • Updated: May 9, 2009
Word count: 1157 • Size: 6k • Comments: 7 • views: 363

Chapter 4 - Marked
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 926 • Size: 4k • Comments: 6 • views: 380

Chapter 5 - Prophecy
Submitted: December 9, 2008 • Updated: December 10, 2008
Word count: 1158 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 352

Chapter 6 - Encounter
Submitted: December 30, 2008 • Updated: December 31, 2008
Word count: 1163 • Size: 6k • Comments: 6 • views: 343

Chapter 7 - Alagor
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 1040 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 375

Chapter 8 - Astar
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 25, 2009
Word count: 944 • Size: 5k • Comments: 5 • views: 336

Chapter 9 - Kaesi
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: January 24, 2009
Word count: 1173 • Size: 6k • Comments: 4 • views: 359

Chapter 10 - Noah
Submitted: January 24, 2009 • Updated: April 8, 2009
Word count: 1357 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 324

Chapter 11 - Betrayal
Submitted: February 17, 2009 • Updated: February 17, 2009
Word count: 969 • Size: 5k • Comments: 4 • views: 354

Comments

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YoriXYamiForever on November 16, 2008, 12:08:32 PM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 4)
YoriXYamiForeverlol, I like Clay, minor though he may be ^^

TEETH! That part made me laugh. I love Terance!

I wanna know what Noah's mark is! Curiosity is killing me >_< Oooh, and I can't wait to see a fight!

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one ^^

KelekiahGaladrian on November 16, 2008, 11:46:10 AM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 4)
KelekiahGaladrianI'M SO SORRY IT HAS TAKEN ME SO LONG TO COMMENT!!!!!!! Stupid school has kept me away XP

Anyway, I'll review now............ or comment or whatever......

Noah being tardy for class is a scary thought. The description and character in the chapter was great. The ending was awesome too. It excites me. Overall, I adore it. It's as wonderful as ever. ^^ *thumbs up*

Sirengina on November 11, 2008, 12:54:08 PM

Sirengina on (Chapter: 4)
SirenginaGreat job Jt!!!! =3
I love the story so far, its simply amazing

Cant wait to read more <3

Blackwolfmoon on November 10, 2008, 11:58:45 AM

Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: 4)
BlackwolfmoonWOW! i loved this chapter, i loved the part about Terance's teeth, and the ending!

keep writeing!

KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2008, 9:37:23 PM

KelekiahGaladrian on (Chapter: 3)
KelekiahGaladrianWow. This chapter was so full of personality. I luvs it.

I love how Noah is so willing to help even though it could be (most likely XP) dangerous.

The content of the chapter was really good and I still can't really pic a favorite character, even though I do like Nikita/Kaesi. They all have wonderful personalities and it's hard to choose. For me anyway, Wulf-chan found a character and just attached herself to him, I swear....

The ending makes me extremely excited for more. You have a great way of ending chapters like that.

Great job JT! I luvs it!!! ^^

YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2008, 8:31:04 AM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 3)
YoriXYamiForeverlol! I loved when Noah stabbed Terance! ^^ And the "I liked him better when he was about to pee his pants, but this is good too." line. Terance is definitely my favorite! hehe

The Mark of the Damned sounds very painful but I can't wait to find out what it is ^^ Ooooooh, I love how the story is unfolding. I can't wait for more!

HalfDemonScy on November 5, 2008, 12:28:59 AM

HalfDemonScy on (Chapter: 3)
HalfDemonScyvery creative

Sirengina on November 4, 2008, 12:28:07 PM

Sirengina on (Chapter: 3)
SirenginaOmg...that was amazing Josh! You are such a good writer <3

I love Alagor, he... is freakin hilarious XD

And I love the fact that you made this chapter longer! Cant wait to read more ^^

Blackwolfmoon on November 4, 2008, 12:27:37 PM

Blackwolfmoon on (Chapter: 3)
BlackwolfmoonI like this chapter, the ending surprised me a bit, but u defineitly have my attention, i do believe Nikita is my favorite so far

Keep writeing <3 ur very good at it

YoriXYamiForever on November 2, 2008, 1:45:35 AM

YoriXYamiForever on (Chapter: 2)
YoriXYamiForever"Yeah, he's up."

LOL!! That was awesome ^_^

I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THE SCHOOL THING!! Absolutely horrible.

I love the personalities of your characters, you have a way with that ^^ I can't wait to keep reading!