A red rose

Chapter 1 - A red rose
Submitted: December 27, 2003 • Updated: December 27, 2003
Word count: 294 • Size: 1k • Comments: 12 • views: 473

Chapter 2 - Untitled
Submitted: April 30, 2004 • Updated: April 30, 2004
Word count: 592 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 306

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nextguardian on February 24, 2006, 12:31:47 PM

nextguardian on February 24, 2006, 12:31:47 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is very good. my only complaint is that it isn't in an easy-to-read format. Maybe paragraphs. Anyway, please don't take that as an insult. The story itself was very good. Could you (and everyone else) check out my fanfic some time? I'm open to advice. here's the link: http://www.fanartcentral.net/stories.php?sid=28644.

Anyway, This is really nice work. keep it up.

DaWolff on February 5, 2006, 11:52:07 PM

DaWolff on February 5, 2006, 11:52:07 PM (Chapter: 1)

nah...

cute story, but sonic didn't admit it yet... hey make more chaps and in the end he tells the truth!

Cowgirl10 on December 16, 2005, 3:57:23 PM

Cowgirl10 on December 16, 2005, 3:57:23 PM (Chapter: 1)

Okay

sonicfangirl on September 20, 2005, 8:56:54 AM

sonicfangirl on September 20, 2005, 8:56:54 AM (Chapter: 2)

love ur storie

amyrose12 on September 9, 2005, 3:13:23 PM

amyrose12 on September 9, 2005, 3:13:23 PM (Chapter: 2)

I like it so far! I'm not really into yaoi, but i can probaly live with it. ad another chappy soon! +faves

major_sonamy_fan22 on June 8, 2005, 4:02:05 AM

major_sonamy_fan22 on June 8, 2005, 4:02:05 AM (Chapter: 1)

that was really cute! try and write more!

clolymy on June 6, 2004, 2:24:52 AM

clolymy on June 6, 2004, 2:24:52 AM (Chapter: 2)

Thank you so much for reviewing!!!!!!I'm very very sorry for calling you Dark Shadow.I'm very glad you love my fic Pain,I'm kind or out of ideas for the rest but I'm sure I'll find something!!THANK YOU!!!!!!*Peace*I hope you have a good day!!!

Dark_Wind on June 4, 2004, 10:21:54 PM

Dark_Wind on June 4, 2004, 10:21:54 PM (Chapter: 2)

Hi,its me!!Not Dark_Shadow, not Dark_Wing but Dark_Wind,lol. I like the story pain, It's pretty good! (I'm not a yaoi but i'm not against it at all.) Keep it up!!!~_^!

clolymy on April 30, 2004, 9:47:20 PM

clolymy on April 30, 2004, 9:47:20 PM (Chapter: 2)

No it's another chap of the fic Pain it's on Fanart Central too I kinda make an eror when I updade,LOL!I even forgot to name that chapther!!!!!!!!I can be so stupid sometimes!!!!And sure I'll countiniu updating it but the nest chap will be in the fic Pain!!!!!!!*Peace*Have a good day!!!!!!

clolymy on April 30, 2004, 9:42:08 PM

clolymy on April 30, 2004, 9:42:08 PM (Chapter: 1)

Thanks blue-super-star,I caled Dark Wind Dark Shadow I think because I add just recive a coment from someone call Dark Shadow weird eh?Anyways thanks for reading my fic I'm so glad you like it!!!!!!!!!*Peace*