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Sonai of the Sand

Okay. This is my newest Naruto OC story. It's with Kinai Sonai of the Sand. I will only be accepting 5 people's OC's this time and I already have 3 people, wolf-girl-ghost (Milli, Razor, Pheonix), Nara-chan (Nara Namida), and sofyuchiha9 (Sofy).

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Sonai the transfer student
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 15, 2007
Word count: 512 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 373

Chapter 2 - Um......... XD (I cant think of anything else okay!)
Submitted: January 20, 2007 • Updated: January 20, 2007
Word count: 472 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 228

Chapter 3 - Singing skills
Submitted: January 20, 2007 • Updated: January 20, 2007
Word count: 406 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 325

Chapter 4 - I Wont Say I'm In Love
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 446 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 300

Chapter 5 - My Love
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 93 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 293

Chapter 6 - Kiss
Submitted: January 21, 2007 • Updated: January 21, 2007
Word count: 145 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 297

Chapter 7 - Conversation
Submitted: January 26, 2007 • Updated: January 26, 2007
Word count: 166 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 277

Chapter 8 - Sand!!!
Submitted: January 26, 2007 • Updated: January 26, 2007
Word count: 248 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 318

Chapter 9 - Masoki joins the group
Submitted: February 2, 2007 • Updated: February 2, 2007
Word count: 539 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 374

Chapter 10 - Uh oh
Submitted: February 3, 2007 • Updated: February 3, 2007
Word count: 524 • Size: 2k • Comments: 5 • views: 311

Chapter 11 - Almost there.
Submitted: February 10, 2007 • Updated: February 10, 2007
Word count: 298 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 302

Chapter 12 - Gaara-kun comes for a visit
Submitted: February 17, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
Word count: 460 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 354

Chapter 13 - Milli's move
Submitted: February 17, 2007 • Updated: February 17, 2007
Word count: 216 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 239

Chapter 14 - Milli's move part 2
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
Word count: 604 • Size: 2k • Comments: 7 • views: 316

Chapter 15 - A talking dog....
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
Word count: 354 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 254

Chapter 16 - Random chapter out of boredom
Submitted: February 18, 2007 • Updated: February 18, 2007
Word count: 259 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 244

Chapter 17 - Will I what Kakashi-kun?
Submitted: February 19, 2007 • Updated: February 19, 2007
Word count: 163 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 308

Chapter 18 - ~What a wonderful night.~
Submitted: March 7, 2007 • Updated: March 7, 2007
Word count: 315 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 328

Chapter 19 - I'm so sorry! Long update I know!
Submitted: April 28, 2007 • Updated: April 28, 2007
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 230

Chapter 20 - OMG
Submitted: May 31, 2007 • Updated: May 31, 2007
Word count: 104 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 236

Chapter 21 - New idea!
Submitted: June 1, 2007 • Updated: June 1, 2007
Word count: 294 • Size: 1k • Comments: 11 • views: 293

Chapter 22 - Okies ppls! OC spots are now taken!
Submitted: June 1, 2007 • Updated: June 1, 2007
Word count: 107 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 274

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Nekogal411 on August 21, 2007, 12:23:58 PM

Nekogal411 on (Chapter: index)
Nekogal411Are you still takeing OC's for it? i would be glad to have mine in there :]

finalfantasy on June 3, 2007, 7:45:29 AM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 22)
finalfantasyoops i was gone 4 a while. species = ... i dunno. umm... id like her to be human, but elf is ok too.

sparkiestar on June 1, 2007, 5:35:15 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 22)
sparkiestarelf plz^^

wolf-girl-ghost on June 1, 2007, 4:23:14 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 22)
wolf-girl-ghostYay!Fank cuu so much! Can they be furries?

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:29:26 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 22)
crazicat06Uh....... Yeah. It is fantasy after all.

wolf-girl-ghost on June 1, 2007, 4:30:47 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostOkies he's a fox/dragon anthro. I'll draw a pic of him soon, but forget the hood up all the time, he has it down all the time.

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:53:32 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Okies.

finalfantasy on May 31, 2007, 10:43:37 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 21)
finalfantasylets see. . .
Name: Raine Setutchi
Age:15
D.O.B:September 4th
Hair:Blue, long, in high ponytail
Eyes:violet
Special body features:she has strange vines curling around her wrists. . .
Abilities:the vines protect her and obey her
Skin color: normal
Clothes: short gray kimono
Personality: Slightly emo, and sarcastic
Things you shouldnt give to him/her:any pointy object
Things you shouldnt say to him.her: anything, unless your her friend
Quote:"Shut up."
Background info:
ame:

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:08:21 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 21)
crazicat06I need the species

Kouni46892742 on June 1, 2007, 1:54:27 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 21)
Kouni46892742Name: Nira Ayamna
Age: 12
D.O.B: April 21
Hair: Tawny brown
Eyes: Hazel
Special body features: Wolf ears and tail
Abilities: Keen sense of hearing, sight and smell, fast runner
Species: Half wolf
Skin color: Normal apricot
Clothes: Something like this

Personality: Really sweet and caring, but a bit shy, has a really strong mothering instinct
Things you shouldnt give to him/her: Chocolate, coffee, tomatoes, avocados
Things you shouldnt say to him.her: "You're a monster.", "You're too weak to make it in these parts."
Quote: "Um...hi..."
Background info: She was separated from her parents as a cub, and raised by a few townspeople who were nice enough to give her a chance. She enjoys the company of people, but most see her as a monster or a fiend, so she lives alone.

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:08:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 21)
crazicat06I need the species

Kouni46892742 on June 1, 2007, 4:09:04 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742i put it in there

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:10:52 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06nvm then.I didnt see it.

sparkiestar on May 31, 2007, 5:47:44 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 21)
sparkiestarName:amber kiyoko
Age:13
D.O.B:1st september
Hair:white shoulder length, in a ponytail
Eyes:blue
Special body features:tail
Abilities:dunno controls fire
Skin color:pale
Clothes:white skirt, black leggings, purple jumper, head phones!!
Personality:shy, at first , bad temper, friendly and protective
Things you shouldnt give to him/her:dunno
Things you shouldnt say to him.her: your hairs white
Quote:hmph,
Background info:bullied at 7 cause of her hair colour
. dad died when she was young lives with her mother:3

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:07:50 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 21)
crazicat06I need the species

sparkiestar on May 31, 2007, 5:48:10 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 21)
sparkiestarcool idea by the way:3

wolf-girl-ghost on May 31, 2007, 11:06:49 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 21)
wolf-girl-ghostAHHHH GIMME THE LAST ONE!
Name: Kage Takmashi
Age:14
D.O.B: 24 july
Hair:Black with red at tips
Eyes:fox eyes, emerald green, small green dragon horns
Special body features:pitch black fox ears and tail with red tips
Abilities: Breath fire, can control shadows and moon.
Skin color: VERY pale
Clothes: black hoody(which he has the hood up ALL the time like kenny outta south park), VERY dark blue, baggy pants, black sneakers.
Personality: Emo, anti-social, very few friends, but if he gets to know you he can be really kind and funny.
Things you shouldnt give to him/her: Anything colourful(He'll flip out!)
Things you shouldnt say to him.her: EMO!
Quote:Hn
Background info: Kage keeps to himself mosta the time. He somehow mangaged to get fused with a fox and dragon and now can do some things they can.

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 4:07:25 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 21)
crazicat06I need her species

Kouni46892742 on June 1, 2007, 1:30:50 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 22)
Kouni46892742Aw darn it! I just got up! I didn't get a chance! TT_TT

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 1:39:36 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 22)
crazicat06Nara, did you not read the last chapter? It said that if you wanted to, you could be in it! Ur one of my best friends on here! Yo, Milli, and Tailor get top priority, althogh Tailor might not wanna be in it. She hasnt looked at any of my stories since Amber's.

Pandapaw on June 1, 2007, 1:24:28 AM

Pandapaw on (Chapter: 22)
PandapawBlood elf.   its Sin'dori in there native language

wolf-girl-ghost on May 31, 2007, 11:07:20 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghost;_; oh no...can he still be in it?

crazicat06 on June 1, 2007, 1:17:03 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Oh noez!!! Um............... Okay! Yes. Yur character can still be in it. If my friends ask to be in it, they get in it. That's the golden rule of OC stories. Yu friends are automaticly in it. I just meant 3ppl other than my friends. I probably should've put that there...... Oh well!

finalfantasy on May 31, 2007, 10:51:44 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: index)
finalfantasyoh yea i forgot bg info. ok, shes an orphan, and she found her brother dead in the woods when she was six.

finalfantasy on May 31, 2007, 10:34:54 PM

finalfantasy on (Chapter: 18)
finalfantasylol so whats his face look like? xD

Pandapaw on May 31, 2007, 5:52:52 PM

Pandapaw on (Chapter: 21)
PandapawName: Kiazo Pandrakin
Age: 54 (would look around 18-19)
D.O.B: 13th of June.
Hair: vry light blond. shoulder length
Eyes: light green.
 
Special body features: long pointy ears, broad shoulders. slim, eyes have feint glow.
 
Abilities: almost supernatural reflexes, vision and hearing.
 
Skin color: Very light but not pale.
 
Clothes: army pants. black singlet. dark blue jacket.
 
Personality: serious to strangers. always aware. will lighten up and have a good time with mates. is combat trained and knows it.
 
Things you shouldn't give him: threats. seafood.
 
things you shouldn't say to him: "your hair looks funny"
 
Quote: "come back to my place and ill make u a pizza"
 
Background info: Part of the Sin'dori (blood elf) special force recruits. all other information is classified.
 
 

Pandapaw on May 31, 2007, 5:24:20 PM

Pandapaw on (Chapter: 21)
PandapawSHOTGUN A SPOT

Pandapaw on May 31, 2007, 4:12:45 PM

Pandapaw on (Chapter: 20)
Pandapawi dunno. but if u start again ill follow this one. the other one was 2 long when i jumped on board and i couldn't be bothered reading it all :P
 
why don't you tell us a completely new story. maby mix a bit of a few things ;)

crazicat06 on May 31, 2007, 4:16:26 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 20)
crazicat06I was palnning on telling a new story. But I need to find out what everone wants it to be on first.

Pandapaw on May 31, 2007, 4:19:03 PM

Pandapaw on (Chapter: index)
Pandapawmake it up. the best thing about reading peoples story's is you don't know whats going to be next. or first in this case.
 
personally i like a naruto or Highschool samurai type setting.

crazicat06 on May 31, 2007, 5:22:26 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Okies

Kouni46892742 on May 31, 2007, 11:00:16 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 20)
Kouni46892742Um....I like Digimon, Pokemon, Inuyasha and Naruto!! And Wolf's Rain! Yes, I know that's not on the list.....

crazicat06 on May 31, 2007, 11:12:37 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 20)
crazicat06Choose one please.......

Kouni46892742 on May 31, 2007, 11:26:00 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Could Wolf's Rain be a possibility? If not, then Inuyasha.

crazicat06 on May 31, 2007, 11:26:51 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06I havent even read/watched Wolf's Rain so it cant be a possibility. Sowwy.

sparkiestar on April 28, 2007, 12:08:19 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 19)
sparkiestaryay u updated XD squee

crazicat06 on April 28, 2007, 2:16:17 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 19)
crazicat06Yup! ^.^

sparkiestar on May 4, 2007, 5:54:39 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestar:D

wolf-girl-ghost on April 27, 2007, 11:51:54 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 14)
wolf-girl-ghostwait how is gaara in ur fic?coz i'm 12 and ur 18??????

crazicat06 on April 28, 2007, 2:15:37 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 14)
crazicat06JUST WAIT!!!!

wolf-girl-ghost on April 27, 2007, 11:32:06 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 19)
wolf-girl-ghostyay we passed!*dances and gets poked by you* ¬.¬ And yay razor and phoenix!

crazicat06 on April 27, 2007, 11:38:18 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 19)
crazicat06XD lolz

digimonlover06 on April 8, 2007, 3:19:39 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: index)
digimonlover06when are you gonna write more ?

Kouni46892742 on March 15, 2007, 10:30:37 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742aww so sweet.....please try to update soon

sparkiestar on March 9, 2007, 3:45:25 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 18)
sparkiestar0_0..>_<awwwwwwww thats soo sweet:3

ladychaos on March 5, 2007, 6:44:23 AM

ladychaos on (Chapter: 1)
ladychaoscool^^

crazicat06 on March 5, 2007, 6:46:01 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 1)
crazicat06^.^ How far have you gotten? Btw, no skipping chapters please.

Kouni46892742 on March 3, 2007, 5:50:58 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 17)
Kouni46892742Update soon...you haven't in a while

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 8:35:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 17)
crazicat06>.< I kinda cant. My mom took away my computer privs... again....

Kouni46892742 on March 3, 2007, 8:35:53 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742again?

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 8:45:29 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*sighs* Yes again. She keeps on taking them away. I gotta bring up my grades to get the comp back...

Kouni46892742 on March 3, 2007, 8:46:57 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742what do you have now....and trust me, i know what it feels like to have a report card with all grades C's, D's, and a F

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 9:58:38 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06C's, D's, B's, and an A.

Kouni46892742 on March 3, 2007, 10:08:41 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742ouch.....what are you having problems with

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 10:51:58 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Math, Social Studies, Science, and Math Enrichment.

Kouni46892742 on March 3, 2007, 10:55:03 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742I have an A in math and Social Studies (now U.S. history)....and in 'Science'...well last year i take Biology now

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 8:44:05 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06God, I hate school.

Kouni46892742 on March 5, 2007, 7:09:57 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742im half and half...some classes suck (like Bio) but some are really cool (like algebra..my teacher rocks)

crazicat06 on March 5, 2007, 7:17:43 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06My LA teacher and my Science teacher are cool. They're both in their twenties! Woot! Young teachers rock!

Kouni46892742 on March 5, 2007, 7:22:04 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742my history teacher is like..27

crazicat06 on March 5, 2007, 7:25:45 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06La.... I have no clue. All I know is that she's in her twenties and my science teacher is... I think 26.

Kouni46892742 on March 5, 2007, 7:34:18 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742nice......how did this start about you updating and get to the age of our teachers

crazicat06 on March 5, 2007, 8:20:01 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*blinks* No clue. It just did. I think you changed the subject......

sparkiestar on February 19, 2007, 4:45:49 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: 17)
sparkiestari knew you liked himXD

crazicat06 on February 23, 2007, 7:26:21 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 17)
crazicat06*grins* It wasnt obvious?

sparkiestar on February 23, 2007, 4:51:39 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestaryepXD

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 8:36:05 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^

digimonlover06 on February 19, 2007, 3:06:56 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: index)
digimonlover06omg she's going out with with kakashi ...

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 3:29:18 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz, I obsess over him now

Kouni46892742 on February 19, 2007, 3:09:09 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 17)
Kouni46892742.....................O_o......................WHAT THE HELL!!!

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 3:28:10 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 17)
crazicat06lolz I'm bored!

Kouni46892742 on February 19, 2007, 3:29:19 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742I could tell

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 3:35:23 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^'

Kouni46892742 on February 19, 2007, 3:43:54 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742sonai-senpai...you are very odd

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 3:55:07 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Heheh... I know.

Kouni46892742 on February 19, 2007, 3:55:52 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742oh boy

crazicat06 on February 23, 2007, 7:47:45 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*grins*

Kouni46892742 on March 3, 2007, 5:50:23 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Nara: Geez, S-sonai-senpai. Yo-you're worse than I a-am with Kiba-k-kun.

crazicat06 on March 3, 2007, 8:43:19 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Sonai: *grins sheepishly* I cant help it! The author is a hopeless romantic!
Me: That's me!!!!! *grins*

sparkiestar on February 18, 2007, 4:21:24 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarYay for random chappies

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 8:36:54 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 15)
Kouni46892742O_o.....kakashi-KUN

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 8:42:47 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 15)
crazicat06Heheh.....

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 9:06:01 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742What are you laughing about....oooooohhhh....you like Kakashi, don't cha, Sonai-Senpai!? BLACKMAIL!!!

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 9:11:33 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*blinks, then blushes* Maybe..... NUUUUUU! NOT BLACKMAIL!!!!!

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 9:43:02 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Hmmmm....whats to keep me from blackmailing.....................you gonna do something for me (and by me i mean Nara)!?

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 10:43:02 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06O.o Come on!!!!

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 11:52:42 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742just next time we fight Itachi or Orochimaru, let me punch em in teh face....wanted to do that for a LONG time

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 8:25:43 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*blinks* I was planning on doing that.

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 10:25:39 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742YES!!

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 2:21:31 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06XD

Kouni46892742 on February 19, 2007, 2:34:19 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742make it soon...real soon....i don't care if they have to interrupt the Chunnin exams to do it

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 2:39:12 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Heheh, that would be interesting.

Kouni46892742 on February 19, 2007, 2:41:41 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742very......VERY interesting

crazicat06 on February 19, 2007, 2:42:40 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz

Kouni46892742 on February 23, 2007, 7:29:58 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742i will never understand what goes on in that mind of yours

crazicat06 on February 23, 2007, 7:07:10 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06No one ever does ^.^/Woof!

sparkiestar on February 17, 2007, 11:10:31 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarso you're going back to leaf huh? coolXD
yay leaf village!!

sparkiestar on February 18, 2007, 5:46:50 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarhow old is shika in you story?

sparkiestar on February 18, 2007, 5:47:25 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarcause they're the same age

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 6:24:48 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*blink* Umm....... I guess He's..... I'm gonna say 15... Does that work? Or do you want the timeskip Shikamaru?

sparkiestar on February 18, 2007, 4:18:11 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestar15 plz:3

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 8:26:38 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Okie dokie then! ^.^ 15 it is!

crazicat06 on February 17, 2007, 11:43:45 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Yup. And guess why. Besides Chuunin exams. And you'll appear in the next few chappies. Promise!

sparkiestar on February 17, 2007, 11:50:18 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarbesides the chunnin exams?
NUUUUUU.i'm no good at guessing.
i like my avi and your kakashi avi it rocks.
skreem!! and YAY for new chappies

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 12:00:08 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Yeah. I noticed ur new avi. It's hilarious. SKREEM!!!

sparkiestar on February 17, 2007, 11:45:12 PM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
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crazicat06 on February 17, 2007, 11:49:17 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz

wolf-girl-ghost on February 18, 2007, 1:22:44 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 14)
wolf-girl-ghostAw, I feel bad now.I'd never be like that if that'd had happened.

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 1:58:49 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 14)
crazicat06Dont worry. I did that on purpose. That event helps to bring in another one. A surprise event in the story.

sparkiestar on February 18, 2007, 5:06:53 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarohhh a surprise YAY!!

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 2:28:50 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742KEWL....Me like surprises..

wolf-girl-ghost on February 18, 2007, 1:59:28 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostOh, yay suprise!

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 2:12:41 AM

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crazicat06^.^

Kouni46892742 on February 17, 2007, 10:36:15 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 14)
Kouni46892742YES....MILLI YOU ARE EVIL!!!

crazicat06 on February 17, 2007, 10:42:07 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 14)
crazicat06^.^ Heheh.... Wait and see what happens in the next few chappies. It's gonna surprise you.

Kouni46892742 on February 17, 2007, 10:52:18 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742....oh boy.....well i at least have something to do...i have a really bad cold

crazicat06 on February 17, 2007, 10:55:55 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Oh no. Not a cold! Heheh....

Kouni46892742 on February 17, 2007, 10:59:01 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Eh....its not as bad as it could be

crazicat06 on February 17, 2007, 11:44:13 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz, I hate it when I get a cold. Blegh.

Kouni46892742 on February 17, 2007, 11:53:28 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742agreed....but hey i get to lay in bed all day

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 12:00:55 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Good point. And... HUZZAH FOR NO SKOOL ON MONDAY!!!

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 12:01:36 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742or tuesday to boot!!!!

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 12:02:46 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Really?

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 12:20:16 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742yeah....tuesday is a teacher work day

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 12:24:12 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06No fair. Monday is a teacher workday here. Grr.... I wanna miss skool on Tuesday too.......

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 12:37:16 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742it can't be though....its presidents day monday

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 12:40:36 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Well it is. Richmond county is evil that way. The teachers go to work.

Kouni46892742 on February 18, 2007, 12:49:50 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742well at least you don't have to

crazicat06 on February 18, 2007, 1:59:10 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz yeah

crazicat06 on February 17, 2007, 9:56:45 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 14)
crazicat06Okay! Yay! Getting to a climax..... Wait to find out! Huzzah for 3 day weekend!

digimonlover06 on February 17, 2007, 1:10:01 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: index)
digimonlover06yay you finallay since in another chapter !

Kouni46892742 on February 10, 2007, 8:25:50 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 11)
Kouni46892742FINALLY!! HUZZAH!

crazicat06 on February 10, 2007, 8:29:45 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 11)
crazicat06lolz, ^.^ Yay!

Kouni46892742 on February 14, 2007, 8:34:59 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Yesh!!!
Nara: I-I'll cook d-dinner!!! I m-make a good st-stir fry!

crazicat06 on February 14, 2007, 8:39:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^ Yay for stir fry!

komodozack on February 8, 2007, 6:08:45 AM

komodozack on (Chapter: 9)
komodozackwhahey! thx for adding my character! *gives u lots of cookies* x3

crazicat06 on February 8, 2007, 7:17:01 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 9)
crazicat06Yw! Yay! Cookies!

Kouni46892742 on February 6, 2007, 9:54:05 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 10)
Kouni46892742interesting..........i could think of some more words to add

crazicat06 on February 7, 2007, 6:04:34 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 10)
crazicat06really? What words?

Kouni46892742 on February 7, 2007, 6:10:28 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742.......um.....not sure anymore

crazicat06 on February 7, 2007, 6:22:24 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz

Kouni46892742 on February 7, 2007, 6:24:48 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742update ASAP....my mind is wandering about what is going to happen

crazicat06 on February 7, 2007, 6:26:31 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06I cant! It's the week. My mom also stole my laptop, so I cant sneak all that well.

sparkiestar on February 5, 2007, 3:21:21 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestaroh can i be in it:3

sparkiestar on February 5, 2007, 3:28:03 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestarname:amber somayon
age:12
village:leaf
Personality:can be shy but quite loud with friends.quiet won't talk much.
Appearence:brown hair sholuder length brown eyes Wears headband around her neck. white vest top fish net shirt under her vest top.black trousers just below her knee.blue ninja shoes.
Favorite Quote:uhhh...
extra info:bad attitude.she wants to be seen by her farther like her sister arabi and her bro dylan she is from the leaf village.she can summon two animals madina and sarona.Sarona is a brownish dog/wolf creature who helps to track enemies and has her own techniques. Madina is a sea blue baby dragon who is key to one of her techniques.maridona is a blood line technique can see if there still able to fight.also increases her chakra.
friens:shika(crush)kiba, hinata, neji ,naruto, chouji

crazicat06 on February 7, 2007, 6:04:59 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Sure!

sparkiestar on February 13, 2007, 1:54:55 AM

sparkiestar on (Chapter: index)
sparkiestari ment shes the same age as shikamaru. and if there chunnins she a chunnin:)
but the wrong age

crazicat06 on February 13, 2007, 6:46:32 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Heheh... Like Itachi. A chuunin before anyone else his age.

wolf-girl-ghost on February 3, 2007, 1:35:35 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 10)
wolf-girl-ghostlol it is a intresting trip!

Kouni46892742 on February 3, 2007, 1:54:19 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 10)
Kouni46892742interesting...one word for it

crazicat06 on February 3, 2007, 1:46:13 AM

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crazicat06^.^

wolf-girl-ghost on February 3, 2007, 1:46:39 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghost^.^

Kouni46892742 on February 2, 2007, 11:53:15 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 9)
Kouni46892742.....what the heck is happening

crazicat06 on February 2, 2007, 12:03:45 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 9)
crazicat06Getting to that part. Like Sonai said, she didnt like the atmosphere. What do you THINK is gonna happen?

Kouni46892742 on February 2, 2007, 9:18:12 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742uh oh

crazicat06 on February 2, 2007, 9:33:31 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06lolz I have no clue where that fever thing came from. I had a totally different story line in my head, and it started the way I wanted it to, and then it kinda went off on it's own. But I like how it's going now! Dont you? (dont worry, you're not gonna die in the story)

Kouni46892742 on February 2, 2007, 9:40:05 PM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742its goin good

Kouni46892742 on February 2, 2007, 6:34:25 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742are you gonna update anytime soon

crazicat06 on February 2, 2007, 6:36:52 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06>.< I have school during the week and I'm not allowed on the computer. I sneak on, but it is so not safe for me to update on a school night. I will update either today or tommorow though. Promise.

Kouni46892742 on February 2, 2007, 6:38:35 AM

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Kouni46892742YAY

crazicat06 on February 2, 2007, 6:41:18 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^'

Kouni46892742 on February 4, 2007, 10:03:29 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742just wondering....are you gonna update before tomorrow or not....

crazicat06 on February 4, 2007, 10:04:21 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06>.< Cant. I'm apposed to be asleep. Not safe.

Kouni46892742 on February 4, 2007, 10:05:57 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742darn

crazicat06 on February 4, 2007, 10:12:58 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^'

digimonlover06 on January 26, 2007, 9:03:22 AM

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digimonlover06good job !

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 9:03:46 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:03:13 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 8)
Kouni46892742Milli! I'm gonna kick your butt!

wolf-girl-ghost on January 26, 2007, 8:07:30 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 8)
wolf-girl-ghostNot if I kick yours first!

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:09:34 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742*hits in the head* HA got you first

wolf-girl-ghost on January 26, 2007, 8:10:30 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostOwie >.<

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:13:17 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06>.< Goofs.

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:09:48 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Sonai: *stops you from throwing the shuriken* Did you not just hear what I said to Nara! She's just like you! You want both of you to have a demonic episode?

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:06:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 8)
crazicat06lolz
Sonai: *stops your hand from throwing the kunai* I wouldnt. She might go... Ya know.

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:08:51 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742which one do you stop.......*tails and ears appear* *evil laugh*

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:12:55 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Sonai: Didnt want ta dou this, but ya'll leave me no choice. *eyes flash and Sonai does some hands signs at mach speed. She stops on Inu.* Beast Mastery: Animal block and bind! *Nara gets rebounded backwards and she changes back to normal* Nyah. Dont make me do that again. *aimed at Milli*

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:14:24 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742youre no fun

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:28:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Sonai: I'm 18. Whad' ya expect?

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:30:13 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742the 18-year olds i know are FUN

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:31:52 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06:P Not me! I can be, but not when it involves a fight. I dont want this placed ravaged to death!!!

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:36:25 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742YOU ARE BORING SONAI-SENPAI

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:38:39 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06You want me to do something I'll regret? Grr... Okay. We're argueing again. Lets stop this before I walk away mad and you chase me, Nara-chan

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:40:26 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742hmph *sticks tounge out*

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:43:30 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*grits teeth* I'm not gonna get pissed, I'm not gonna get pissed.............

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:46:04 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742Rawr! *tails and ears appear again*

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:52:36 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06That's it. I'm leavin'. *turns around and walks away*

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:54:46 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742see if i care...........WAIT

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 8:57:41 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Hmph *Turns head up and keeps walkin'*

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 8:59:33 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742WAAHH! I sorry Sonai-Senpai! So sorry! I was bad!

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 9:00:30 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*stops walkin and glances at you* You're REALLY sorry?

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 9:02:06 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742*sniff* Uh-huh.......*hugs teddy bear*

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 9:03:08 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06*turns around and smiles* I forgive you. *hugs you then ruffles your hair*

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 9:06:26 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742yea im forgivin....*tries to ruffle hair but cant reach*

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 9:07:47 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Haha. Too short. *bends down to let you ruffle mah hair*

Kouni46892742 on January 26, 2007, 9:10:14 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742DONT CALL ME SHORT *gives noogie while bent down*

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 9:12:25 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Gah! A noogie attack! I didnt mean any offense! *falls over*

wolf-girl-ghost on January 26, 2007, 8:04:08 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostya know me*

wolf-girl-ghost on January 26, 2007, 8:03:04 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 8)
wolf-girl-ghostlol ya me all hyper

gaaraluv on January 22, 2007, 6:36:28 AM

gaaraluv on (Chapter: 6)
gaaraluvi wont that to be me

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 6:48:11 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 6)
crazicat06Every Gaara fangirl does.

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 4:14:41 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 6)
wolf-girl-ghostWHY CAN'T THAT BE ME!?lol jk (insert digimonlover06's comment here)

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 6:47:44 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 6)
crazicat06Cause it's mah story, and in mah story, That's what I want to happen. Me with Gaara-kun.

digimonlover06 on January 21, 2007, 3:48:30 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: 6)
digimonlover06I want the next chapter !

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 8:00:39 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 6)
crazicat06I know! I'm working on it!

komodozack on January 21, 2007, 4:13:23 AM

komodozack on (Chapter: 3)
komodozackcan my character be in it? (btw love this -faves-)

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 8:00:02 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 3)
crazicat06Sure! I need ur character's bio

komodozack on January 22, 2007, 6:25:03 AM

komodozack on (Chapter: index)
komodozackkk
name: masoki uragato
age: ???
villige: sound
clan: hybrid
abilities: can create soundwaves threw anypart of his body, create chakra blades, attack at high speeds
special abilities: contains the two tailed panther demon haruna
appearecnce in demon form: spikes stick out of his elbows and shoulders, eyes of a demon, sharp fangs, clawed hands, two tails, height increases a bit,growls like a panther does.

thts all i rember ^_^

crazicat06 on January 26, 2007, 6:47:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06Kk!

Smexykage-sama on January 21, 2007, 3:25:44 AM

Smexykage-sama on (Chapter: 5)
Smexykage-samaSorry to say...but your fic is horrible.

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 7:59:42 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 5)
crazicat06Whay is it horrible (That hurt)

Kouni46892742 on January 21, 2007, 7:40:36 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 6)
Kouni46892742(insert digimonlover06's comment here)

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 7:59:19 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 6)
crazicat06I know okay!

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:50:59 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 5)
wolf-girl-ghostNu suspense!

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:51:55 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 5)
crazicat06Heheh. If Nara-chan finds out, she's gonna kill me.

Kouni46892742 on January 21, 2007, 2:36:15 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: index)
Kouni46892742ARRGG!! IM GONNA KICK YOUR BUTT IF THE NEXT CHAP ISNT GOOD

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 2:52:03 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06nuuuuuuuuu!!!!!

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:25:51 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 4)
wolf-girl-ghostYay more singing!

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:26:54 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 4)
crazicat06Guess who "He" is.

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:27:17 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostGAARA-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:29:48 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06<.< >.> Maaaaaaaybeeeeeeeee..... ^.^

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:31:07 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostlol if not then Drrrr....The pizza man?

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:32:54 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06>.< No. Not the pizza man. Ur just gonn a have tah wait fer the next chapter to find out who "He" is.

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:33:45 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostAw I like playing guess who

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:34:16 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06>.<'

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:37:11 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghost...Sorry

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:41:17 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^' It's okay! I'm gonna start the next chapter now.....

wolf-girl-ghost on January 21, 2007, 1:42:28 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostYatta!^.^

crazicat06 on January 21, 2007, 1:48:00 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: index)
crazicat06^.^

Sofyuchiha9 on January 20, 2007, 5:57:34 AM

Sofyuchiha9 on (Chapter: 2)
Sofyuchiha9w000t! very cool!^^ keep it up x3

crazicat06 on January 20, 2007, 5:59:29 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 2)
crazicat06^.^

wolf-girl-ghost on January 20, 2007, 1:31:32 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 3)
wolf-girl-ghostyay singing!

crazicat06 on January 20, 2007, 1:47:07 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 3)
crazicat06^.^' Yay!

wolf-girl-ghost on January 19, 2007, 6:42:39 PM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: 2)
wolf-girl-ghostlol demon sealed and proud of it i'm really enjoying this fic!

crazicat06 on January 19, 2007, 6:43:35 PM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 2)
crazicat06^.^ I knew you'd like that!

wolf-girl-ghost on January 16, 2007, 2:01:33 AM

wolf-girl-ghost on (Chapter: index)
wolf-girl-ghostyay me ^.^i like dis story

Kouni46892742 on January 15, 2007, 2:43:03 AM

Kouni46892742 on (Chapter: 1)
Kouni46892742k that was just....odd

crazicat06 on January 15, 2007, 2:44:45 AM

crazicat06 on (Chapter: 1)
crazicat06^.^'