The Legend of Blaze: Arise of the Fire Warrior
Submitted June 1, 2008 Updated October 7, 2008 Status Incomplete | In a world where animals speak and act like humans, a cat named Blaze is the heir to the leader of his home. However, a dark threat is lurking, and Blaze will have to master the ways of his father's mysterous sword if they are to survive.
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Fantasy » Misc. Fantasy |
Chapters
Chapter 1 - The Two Lords
Submitted: June 1, 2008 • Updated: July 29, 2008
Word count: 1984 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 428
Chapter 2 - Blaze, the young warrior
Submitted: June 1, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 2133 • Size: 11k • Comments: 4 • views: 418
Chapter 3 - Russetfur's Preminition
Submitted: June 4, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 3111 • Size: 15k • Comments: 5 • views: 430
Chapter 4 - The Great Spring Feast
Submitted: June 14, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 2614 • Size: 13k • Comments: 6 • views: 371
Chapter 5 - Battle Plans
Submitted: June 14, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 4056 • Size: 21k • Comments: 2 • views: 406
Chapter 6 - The Unexpected Fight
Submitted: June 25, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 2932 • Size: 15k • Comments: 3 • views: 398
Chapter 7 - The demon within
Submitted: October 7, 2008 • Updated: October 7, 2008
Word count: 3726 • Size: 20k • Comments: 2 • views: 377
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darkwolf333 on November 26, 2008, 5:35:52 AM
I love this. U description is good. Tell me when u have more updarkwolf333 on November 21, 2008, 3:26:46 PM
Cool. Nicely written. Sorry haven't read in awhile I've been so distractedwagz20 on October 22, 2008, 4:35:59 AM
damn, that feast sounded delishous! my mouth was watering, lmao. just another way of me saying great description. i felt like Smokey, he's like the loveable little gluton XDooo Blaze and admirer >_O. i do like romance, weather the story is all romance or just has a love story within it makes it more interesting. and of course, typical, the guy doesn't get it, lol. but Blaze is a good guy though and likeable :)
great work, really liked this chapter! good ending, makes me want to read more.
darkwolf333 on October 21, 2008, 11:13:55 AM
Wow this is really good .wagz20 on October 20, 2008, 7:29:16 AM
ok, now it's getting started, the plot thikens. once again you're very good with description and detail, really paints and picture. and once again you have a character (Dinn) with their own style with their speech like Rusty. you may want to look over this again, real little stuff, just some names not capitalized in the begining.
great forshadowing at the end, that preminition was ominous, it was those dogs/wolves in the first chapter right? yeah, really want to read on when i get the chance, great work
wagz20 on October 20, 2008, 7:20:47 AM
man, i really need to catch up with this. i guess it's just a pretty calm start, it's just introducing some characters and their personalties such as Blaze and his family (his dad sounds cool)as well as the setting. that little Rusty is a trip! ^_^ i like what ya did with her speech.
So very good intro, hope more happens next chapter, but the important thing is they caught da huge fishy! XD
darkwolf333 on October 16, 2008, 5:49:44 PM
I love ur story .darkwolf333 on October 11, 2008, 9:24:57 AM
nice I like Rusty and Blazedarkwolf333 on October 9, 2008, 11:25:50 AM
Nicley written. If It was a real book, I'd read it. You should publish i was thinking this when I read first chapterdarkwolf333 on October 9, 2008, 11:20:55 AM
Awsome this sounds good. I like it