Akatsuki Tales by Kouni46892742

Nov 7, 2007 07:31 PM by: KionaKina chapter 11

FINISH IT!!! It's so amazing the way you wrote this.

NARA FIGHT It!!!!

Nov 7, 2007 07:31 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

*sigh* The ending is too hard to write!!!

Nov 7, 2007 07:29 PM by: KionaKina chapter 10

O_O Oh...my...God...

Well, Kiba probably had this one coming

Nov 7, 2007 07:31 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Of course he did!

Nov 7, 2007 07:26 PM by: KionaKina chapter 9

cool...WHAT'S TOBI LOOK LIKE WITHOUT THE MAS?!

I seriously thought it was a void of some sort when I first saw it

Nov 7, 2007 07:27 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

I know!!

Nov 7, 2007 07:23 PM by: KionaKina chapter 8

NARA!!! *Hugs her* You are not a filthy demon!!!

KIBA!!! *Goes and starts beating the bloody hell outta him* HOW DARE YOU!!!!

Nov 7, 2007 07:27 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Something's telling me you're gonna like

Nov 7, 2007 07:18 PM by: KionaKina chapter 7

O_O Awesomeness...

Aww, reunited. ^_^ It was a cute moment. Sasuke is married? O_O *Shocked*

And Hina-chan is there! ^_^

Nov 7, 2007 07:20 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Le gasp!

Nov 7, 2007 07:14 PM by: KionaKina chapter 6

Ohhh, so THAT'S what happened. I've been wondering about the Kiba thing.

Nov 7, 2007 07:16 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Yes!

Um...you realize I meant the other fan-fic, right? ^-^"

Nov 7, 2007 07:24 PM by: KionaKina chapter 0

O_O There's another fic?!

Nov 7, 2007 07:25 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

"No Day but Today!"

Nov 7, 2007 07:27 PM by: KionaKina chapter 0

aw fudge nelly...how'd I not know that?

Oct 26, 2007 10:30 PM by: gaaralover1 chapter 11

Please hurry up!! This is good!

Oct 26, 2007 04:56 PM by: KionaKina chapter 5

O_O NARA!!!!!

Oct 26, 2007 04:58 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Something tells me you're shocked...

Oct 26, 2007 04:54 PM by: KionaKina chapter 4

Aw crud, she;s got a demon? this can't end well...

Oct 26, 2007 04:55 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Nothing with demons ever end well...but they're never boring!

Oct 26, 2007 04:49 PM by: KionaKina chapter 3

Itachi...you weirdo HOW DARE YOU! ...I don't know what oyu've done BUT HOW DARE!

Oct 26, 2007 04:51 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Itachi is a weirdo...It's fun to make him a weirdo...

Oct 26, 2007 04:47 PM by: KionaKina chapter 2

cute, I like Nara. She's really cool ^_^

And Teneka seems nice

But how did Nara realize she wa sin the Akatsuki? Did she recognize the robes?

Oct 26, 2007 04:50 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Yep! And when you see Tobi there, you kind of assume these things.

Oct 26, 2007 04:44 PM by: KionaKina chapter 1

I know nothing of the Akatsuki but now I know it's a mask on Tobi, not his face which looks like some void...thing

Well, aweosme, it's well-written

Oct 26, 2007 04:46 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 1

I know! That's what I said!Â And I know what's under Tobi's mask! *evil laugh*

Oct 26, 2007 04:41 PM by: KionaKina chapter 0

O_O Dun...dun...DUN!!!

Oct 16, 2007 02:57 PM by: Sonic_the_Hedgehog chapter 0

Wow. This story is sooooo awesome! Please continue!!! ^^

Sep 26, 2007 02:00 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

OMG I'M SO HYPER TODAY I HAD 2 BUTTERFINGERS, 2 CUPS OF HAWIIAN PUNCH, 3 ICE CREAM SANDWICHES, 5 SNICKERS. 5 HERSHEYS, A BOTTLE OF CHOCO SYRUP, SOME CARROTS(Those make me hyper too) AND LOTS AND LOTS OF LOLIPOPS!

Sep 26, 2007 01:58 PM by: AnimeAngel87 chapter 0

YEYEYEYEYY!

KEWL SOTRYRYEJNDilas fhaweitf~

Jul 13, 2007 04:22 PM by: zopponde chapter 11

O.O Stupid chapter, ending like that!

Nara, DON'T LET THE DEMON TAKE OVER! You can kill Kiba just as easily without giving your body up to some fuzzy white mess of chakra!!! >:D He doesn't deserve the quick death that the demon would give him!

Jul 12, 2007 11:14 AM by: Ryokou chapter 0

Sorry 'bout not being able to read it. I was busy, and I'm reading it now, tho I'm only on chapter 4-5. Lol.
I really like it! Tobi. *sigh* Never leave kunai knives lying around! :p

Jul 9, 2007 04:46 PM by: crazicat06 chapter 11

XD
NARA SNAP OUTTA IT!!!

Jul 9, 2007 01:42 PM by: YumeXItachi chapter 11

0o...this was...AWESOME!!!!
New chapter!!! but i feel srry for Nara-San!!! >.<

Jul 9, 2007 12:53 PM by: KisaShika chapter 11

Man, don't make us(the Akatsuki) seem so weak! Kisame alone, with just a clone,could kill 300 ANBU members easy!

But, awsome chapter! *quietly chants 'die Kiba die'*

Oct 28, 2007 08:30 AM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 11

This is true. ^-^ I mean, did you see him fighting Gai-sensei? And that was only with 30% of his chakra! XD

Jul 9, 2007 12:55 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

I'm not! I'm just giving it a bit of attention. There are hundreds of thousands of ANBU and other Shinobi there.

Jul 9, 2007 12:42 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 11

YAY! NEW CHAPTER! *dances*

Oh my gosh! Poor Nara-chan! T_T

Jun 5, 2007 03:15 PM by: zopponde chapter 10

Yay! Another great chapter! And I'm in it!! =D Great job, can't wait for more!

Jun 5, 2007 12:53 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 10

Kiba-teme! >.< How dare you hurt Nara-chan?! I'm gonna make Kisame-kun shave your head off for that!

This is really cool, Nara-chan. Keep it up! ^o^

Jun 5, 2007 11:27 AM by: KisaShika chapter 10

Heh, cool. *Sends Teneka to kill Kiba*

Jun 5, 2007 09:26 AM by: YumeXItachi chapter 10

wow...that was soooo freaking awesome!!! ^^ yes i'm n this chapter! ok i'm just gonna stop talking now but this was an awesome chapter!

Jun 4, 2007 01:47 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 9

Nara-chan rules! \(^o^)/

Jun 1, 2007 04:13 PM by: SonicDX1995 chapter 15

yay pictres ^-^

Jun 1, 2007 12:41 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 15

Hey, this is really good, by the way.

Jun 1, 2007 11:51 AM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 9

Hey! She's from the Snow Village, myu! Cool! ^o^

Jun 1, 2007 09:27 AM by: YumeXItachi chapter 9

cool!!!

Jun 1, 2007 09:27 AM by: YumeXItachi chapter 8

*cries*Poor Nara-San!!!!!!!Kiba-teme,how dare u!he's an ungrateful mutt! >X< this chapter was sooo sad!

Jun 1, 2007 09:12 AM by: YumeXItachi chapter 7

aww!so cute!this is going great!good job! :3

Jun 1, 2007 06:04 AM by: zukosavatarofthesunandmoon chapter 0

I WANNA BE IN IT

May 31, 2007 08:28 PM by: KisaShika chapter 8

Aww.... Sorry, it was sad. I just can't bring myself to cry right now. I just had the best day of my life. But, please continue.

May 31, 2007 06:30 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 15

Aw! Crud! I wanted to be in the story. I do know the answers though!

Fan: Sasuke
Flower Petal: Sakura
Swirl in a Circle: Naruto
Swirl: Chouji
Flame: Hinata
Slash Mark: Shikamaru
Fang: Kiba
Leaf: Lee?
Kunai: Tenten
Bug: Shino
Cross: Neji?
Flower: Ino

May 31, 2007 06:31 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

You can still if you wanna. Just give me a profile....

May 31, 2007 06:18 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 8

Oh! Poor Nara-chan! I actually cried! Oh, Kiba-teme! Now you've done it! >.< First you tell everyone about Nekomata, and now you hurt poor Nara-chan?! Errrrrrrrrgh....

May 31, 2007 06:01 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 1

Aw! Tobi's such a good boy! X3

May 31, 2007 05:47 PM by: crazicat06 chapter 8

*cries* Poor Nara-chan! Kiba scratched her!
*growls* Kiba is gonna pay for this......... Even if he hates Nara that gives him no right to touch her!

May 30, 2007 07:24 AM by: YumeXItachi chapter 6

ohh!great story so far! X3

May 29, 2007 10:44 AM by: KisaShika chapter 7

Pretty good. Just, one questesion. How would the not know she is in the Akatsuki? If she had been gone two years, some ninja would have rechognized her, and she'd be in the bingo book. Meh, anyway. Keep on writing.

May 31, 2007 06:02 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Ha! I figured something out!

May 29, 2007 10:47 AM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

You do have a point there...lets just say she was smart and kept away from the Konoha ninja...

May 28, 2007 09:16 AM by: zopponde chapter 7

What can I say? It's great as always! Keep writing, please~!

May 8, 2007 05:41 PM by: zopponde chapter 15

Wait...*blinks furiously* I won? I'm not delerious? It wouldn't surprise me if I was...whether or not I actually won ^^'

So, I'm reeally not feeling like posting my character's profile for all to see, for several reasons, so I'm just going to PM it. I assume that's okay?

Apr 29, 2007 07:05 PM by: Sofyuchiha9 chapter 9

awesome pics 83

Apr 29, 2007 07:04 PM by: Sofyuchiha9 chapter 0

hmmm...interesting!^^
I'll read the rest whence i get the chancE!^^

Apr 28, 2007 02:03 PM by: crazicat06 chapter 9

wOoT!

Apr 28, 2007 09:14 AM by: crazicat06 chapter 5

Omg! Poor Nara!

Apr 28, 2007 08:54 AM by: zopponde chapter 5

WAA--it ended! Ah! It's...ended...and...now I can't read anything new...I'm sad...

I can't remember if I faved this story yet or not...did I?...Oh, I'll just click the button and then I'll know I faved it.

Apr 28, 2007 07:56 AM by: KisaShika chapter 5

Cool. Sorry for the short comment, I have alot on my mind right now.

Apr 28, 2007 03:33 AM by: crazicat06 chapter 4

*gasp* No! Bad Itachi! XD..... OMG! Ihave a MAJOR idea! But maybe you dont wanna hear it..... I's kinda stupid....

Apr 28, 2007 03:30 AM by: crazicat06 chapter 3

Must. Keep. Reading! This is a really capturing story! (exuse the pun....)

Apr 28, 2007 03:27 AM by: crazicat06 chapter 2

*laughs to death* Oh my God.... Go Tobi! ^.^ Kisame deserves a kunai in the foot sometimes. No offense to anyone who likes him.

May 31, 2007 06:03 PM by: DragonGirl1136 chapter 2

No offense taken. *hides kunai behind back*

Apr 28, 2007 03:23 AM by: crazicat06 chapter 1

Yay! Tobi! ^.^ If a friend of mine at school saw this, she would freak out. She goes nuts if you just mention Tobi's name. It's funny.

Apr 28, 2007 03:20 AM by: crazicat06 chapter 0

O.o Poor Nara-chan. WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO HER THAT MADE HER LOSE KIBA?

Apr 25, 2007 02:55 PM by: royally_spooky chapter 0

Oh okay! Yeah Tobi is cute!^__^
Keep up with the story though, nice job!

Apr 21, 2007 08:33 PM by: YumeXItachi chapter 4

.....*cries*it stopped!!! still lol it's a great story!^^

Apr 21, 2007 06:52 AM by: KisaShika chapter 4

Hah, you hit the nail on the head with Teneka's personality. But, I'll say this again, I love this story!Cant' wait for the next chapter!

Apr 20, 2007 10:07 PM by: KidRaccoon chapter 2

I like it! It's been a while since I've read something worth commenting on! Tobi's a good boy!

Apr 20, 2007 04:18 PM by: SilverSea0413 chapter 3

kyaa. suspense, keep going don't you dare stop! <(^_^)>

Apr 20, 2007 04:16 PM by: SilverSea0413 chapter 2

very good. ^_^ *nods in agreement*

Apr 20, 2007 04:13 PM by: SilverSea0413 chapter 1

^_^ kawaii. very nice, you already know that i don't know much about the akatsuki... ah well. i've come to somewhat like tobi. ^_^

Apr 20, 2007 04:10 PM by: SilverSea0413 chapter 0

it's descriptive. very good start! ^_^

Apr 19, 2007 02:17 PM by: YumeXItachi chapter 3

NYA!!!!!!soooooooo good!!!! -_- it stopped....

Apr 19, 2007 02:01 PM by: KisaShika chapter 3

Nuuu! Please get the next chapter up soon! *kicks Itachi for being a turd and not telling Kisame*

Apr 18, 2007 05:13 PM by: YumeXItachi chapter 2

oi!this is such a good story!!!^^

Apr 18, 2007 02:11 PM by: KisaShika chapter 2

Oh man, not the right convorsation to be brought up. Hut, a nice touch to the story. I like it! And, hah. Kisame stepped on a kunai?! Outch.

Apr 17, 2007 06:35 PM by: royally_spooky chapter 1

Ahhh!!! I really like Tobi *cries*
Wow! It seems as if KisaShika likes the guys I like^^
Really good story though! Keep it up!

Apr 17, 2007 06:51 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Hey, I am the one that likes Tobi! ME!
I see why you like him. He's so kawaii!

Apr 17, 2007 06:29 PM by: royally_spooky chapter 0

Wow! That was really good!^__^
I enjoyed this story!
It has a very well made up story line.
I really like Kiba.. that's sad that he died, along with everyone else.:(
Oooo she was kidnapped by Kisame!!! lol
Keep it up! Really good so far^___^

Apr 17, 2007 06:51 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

Actually, Kiba didn't die. There was an incident with Nara's demon, so now everyone that had once trusted her now hates and shuns her, except for maybe Rock Lee.

Apr 17, 2007 04:26 PM by: YumeXItachi chapter 0

0_o....it stopped....NOOOO!lol this was so good!when's the next one coming out?!^^

Apr 17, 2007 02:28 PM by: KisaShika chapter 1

Aww, so cute. I like how this is going so far. Your right, your wrighting is getting much better! If you need to know more about Teneka's personality when she's in the Akatsuki, just ask.

Apr 17, 2007 02:31 PM by: Kouni46892742 chapter 0

um.....whats her personallity.....with the chap i have written out, shes like the fun-loving type.....at least whens shes not busy