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The One Piece Story!

Creative title, no? anyway, this is a story the guys made me write... starring the guys . xD They told me to post it, so, um, enjoy?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Introduction!
Submitted: June 15, 2005 • Updated: June 15, 2005
Word count: 2233 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 352

Chapter 2 - The Storm
Submitted: June 16, 2005 • Updated: June 16, 2005
Word count: 1968 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 323

Chapter 3 - Reunion
Submitted: June 17, 2005 • Updated: June 17, 2005
Word count: 2969 • Size: 16k • Comments: 5 • views: 343

Chapter 4 - A Pirates Life
Submitted: July 7, 2005 • Updated: July 7, 2005
Word count: 2508 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 374

Chapter 5 - Exploring the Town
Submitted: July 14, 2005 • Updated: July 14, 2005
Word count: 2875 • Size: 16k • Comments: 5 • views: 319

Chapter 6 - Enter Steve
Submitted: August 22, 2005 • Updated: August 22, 2005
Word count: 1747 • Size: 10k • Comments: 7 • views: 321

Chapter 7 - Snow
Submitted: August 26, 2005 • Updated: August 26, 2005
Word count: 2615 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 370

Chapter 8 - Jasmine's Secret
Submitted: August 31, 2005 • Updated: August 31, 2005
Word count: 3266 • Size: 18k • Comments: 6 • views: 340

Chapter 9 - Old Enemies
Submitted: September 3, 2005 • Updated: September 3, 2005
Word count: 2848 • Size: 16k • Comments: 3 • views: 350

Chapter 10 - Wanted!
Submitted: September 8, 2005 • Updated: September 8, 2005
Word count: 2222 • Size: 12k • Comments: 4 • views: 357

Chapter 11 - The Grand Line
Submitted: September 20, 2005 • Updated: September 20, 2005
Word count: 2437 • Size: 13k • Comments: 4 • views: 337

Chapter 12 - Mihawk
Submitted: October 11, 2005 • Updated: October 11, 2005
Word count: 1834 • Size: 10k • Comments: 5 • views: 496

Chapter 13 - The Greatest Swordsman in the World
Submitted: November 12, 2005 • Updated: November 12, 2005
Word count: 2963 • Size: 16k • Comments: 5 • views: 359

Chapter 14 - Classy
Submitted: December 6, 2005 • Updated: December 6, 2005
Word count: 2437 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 328

Comments

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nina94 on October 1, 2008, 7:29:53 AM

nina94 on (Chapter: index)
nina94MAN!! It took me FOREVER just to look for your story! But I finally found it.

nina94 on May 25, 2008, 1:10:01 PM

nina94 on (Chapter: index)
nina94I love chapter 13.^^

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 12:40:31 PM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 14)
Shearay752*still trying to picture zoro in a suit*
woah the chapter may be even the STORY is over!!
and here i was trying to imagine the world's greatest swordsman in a suit...
well better go do my hw

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 12:28:18 PM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 13)
Shearay752My name is Inigo Montoya; you killed my father now prepare to die!
ahhh...great quote right there...
so anyways...
only one more chapter to go and i just realized i have TONS of homework to do oh and btw it's 'almost' ten!!!
ugh
stupid addictive story!!!!

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 12:12:59 PM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 12)
Shearay752ummm...
woah my song is on!!!!!
so anyways...
mihawk versus zoro, eh?
you've got to admit Dracule/Juraquille has a pretty cool name
so anyways...must read more before it's tale of two city time!!!

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 10:13:01 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 11)
Shearay752ummm...banana...war...
HECK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!
well i must go for now...

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 9:41:41 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: index)
Shearay752wow it's been a while...
i am such a freakin slow reader...
well i guess i better finish what i started
:-D

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 9:28:42 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 10)
Shearay752luffy...baka...
sanji...insane...
me...addicted...

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 9:18:59 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 9)
Shearay752*scared of next chapters events*
ummm...*twitch*
in...der..esting...

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 9:05:59 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 8)
Shearay752luffy + tonfas = BRILLIANT IDEA, PATRICK F!!!!
just BRILLIANT!!!!
so anyways
this story is like a freakin drug, man...

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 8:49:59 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 7)
Shearay752man this whole sanji and zoro war is very amusing
so anyways
your freakin story is freakin addictive dangit!!!!
i hope you're happy now

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 8:37:31 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 6)
Shearay752that one day is today and yesterday
wait...that didn't make sense...
oh well...

Shearay752 on October 16, 2006, 8:27:58 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 5)
Shearay752sanji...sanji...sanji...
so anyways
very VERY interesting
addicting too...

Shearay752 on October 15, 2006, 12:06:18 PM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 4)
Shearay752*wonders what jasmine's secret could POSSIBLY be* thanks for ruining the secret setokaibaslittlesis
well anyways
MUST...READ...SANJI...GO HYPER!!!!!
it's only 9 i think i can read some more...

Shearay752 on October 15, 2006, 11:54:16 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 3)
Shearay752zolo is trying to get everyone drunk isn't he?!?!?*glares at setokaibaslittlesis* (sort of kind of inside joke, Anime_Crazy_K-chan)
so anyways...
i loved the beautiful insult fight
along with the rest of the chapter so in other words
es muy interesante

Shearay752 on October 15, 2006, 11:32:06 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 2)
Shearay752still interesting...

Shearay752 on October 14, 2006, 7:07:20 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 1)
Shearay752interesante

setokaibaslittlesis on October 14, 2006, 5:34:21 AM

setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 3)
setokaibaslittlesisMan, that is one big barrel for all of their feet to fit on it.

setokaibaslittlesis on October 13, 2006, 7:58:36 AM

setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: 1)
setokaibaslittlesisBwaha. This is one of two stories on my favorites list.

Shearay752 on July 25, 2006, 10:05:50 AM

Shearay752 on (Chapter: 6)
Shearay752lol
i didn't think it was true when my friend told me about a female cow named steve in a one piece fanfiction
i haven't even read the other chapters and i was lmfao!!!
maybe one day i'll read the whole thing
shea

setokaibaslittlesis on June 22, 2006, 2:10:47 AM

setokaibaslittlesis on (Chapter: index)
setokaibaslittlesisIt can't be OVER!????

iluvanime on April 10, 2006, 4:31:47 AM

iluvanime on (Chapter: 14)
iluvanime*begs* don't tell me it's the eeennnndddddd!!!???

iluvanime on April 10, 2006, 3:04:16 AM

iluvanime on (Chapter: 6)
iluvanime*hugs stevey* this is like....the 1241489723057157 time i read this.........AND I STILL LOVE IT!!!!*runs wit stevey,sanji,and draging zoro,who's sleeping*

luffylover222 on March 8, 2006, 11:04:24 PM

luffylover222 on (Chapter: 13)
luffylover222YYYAAAYY!!! ZORO WON!!! AND THEY GOT DRUNK AGAIN!!!!!!!!w00t!!!

luffylover222 on March 8, 2006, 10:44:35 PM

luffylover222 on (Chapter: 10)
luffylover222poor patrick.D! sounded like it hurt....i never new sanji could be so hyper when he dosent have a smoke for a few days!

keep it up k-chan!

good work!

MrsRoronoaZoro on December 12, 2005, 9:51:01 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 14)
MrsRoronoaZorolmao!!xd i love this chapter....i would DIE in those kind of resteraunts...i LOATH dresses and skirts.....X_____X oy...i dare not think of it....anyways FUNNY @$$ CHAPTER!!XD IT'S MY FAVORITE!X3

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on December 4, 2005, 8:17:28 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 13)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlYAY FOR DRUNKED NESS!!! XDD

MrsRoronoaZoro on November 21, 2005, 10:16:51 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 13)
MrsRoronoaZoroWHEEEEEEE!!!ZORO WON!!ZORO WON!!XD
BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!MIHAWK!!ZORO PWNS YOU!!KICKED YOUR LITTLE FRENCH @$$ HE DID!!! oy,i'm so happy!X3 another fun chapter!!wheee!!X3

GothicDancer on November 19, 2005, 9:07:37 AM

GothicDancer on (Chapter: 13)
GothicDancerI've noticed that your writing style has improved very much over the time you've written this story. I would have put a little bit of the battle between Zoro and Mihawk in. You know, just little tidbits of what happened in the beginning, but that's just me. Good job thus far!

MrsRoronoaZoro on November 3, 2005, 2:08:12 PM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 12)
MrsRoronoaZoroWHOOT!!!ZORO!!YOU GONNA KICK MIHAWK'S LITTLE FRENCH @$$!!!!!I BELIEVE IN YOU!!!!X3 I DO BELIEVE IN FAIRES!!I DO I DO!!!!X3....wait...wrong thing...
Zoro: -___-; bakayaro
XP

PuNkGuRl14 on October 27, 2005, 6:17:30 AM

PuNkGuRl14 on (Chapter: 12)
PuNkGuRl14DUDE !!!!!!!!!!!!! write more !!!!!!! gosh

PuNkGuRl14 on October 25, 2005, 10:02:32 AM

PuNkGuRl14 on (Chapter: 6)
PuNkGuRl14YAYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yhey got a cow !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! named steve !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wuhooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

PuNkGuRl14 on October 25, 2005, 9:55:26 AM

PuNkGuRl14 on (Chapter: 5)
PuNkGuRl14PINK IS A COLOUR !!
LOL i liked that part and the screaming part lol keep writing

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on October 22, 2005, 4:26:18 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 12)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlKIck his @$$, Zoro-nii-san! Yay suspense!! Dude, whats up too? I havent talked to ya in AGES!!

moonlitdemoness09 on October 12, 2005, 7:52:45 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on (Chapter: 12)
moonlitdemoness09GAH!! NEW CHAPPIE!!
GAH!! JASMINE, U RETARD!!
hee hee. salami...if Zoro didnt know something, why the hell did he ask Luffy of all people? and what IS solijnie? anywayz, great chap!! WOOT ZORO!! u go whoop Mihawks @$$ ^^

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on September 24, 2005, 6:42:25 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 11)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlBANANA WARR!! I want to have a banana war... O.o

moonlitdemoness09 on September 21, 2005, 10:31:36 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on (Chapter: 11)
moonlitdemoness09HAHAHA!!! i smiled the entire time! ^^ and i wanna join the banana war...this is great! remember to knock before walking into a doorless area. *nods head*

MrsRoronoaZoro on September 20, 2005, 10:51:48 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 11)
MrsRoronoaZoroZoro fishing?*sqeal*kills the first thing that annoys him?!?!*normal voice* shoot.....YAY I'M DOOMED!!!XD BANANA WAR!!WHOOT!!!XD

moonlitdemoness09 on September 9, 2005, 8:30:50 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on (Chapter: 10)
moonlitdemoness09huzzah 4 new chappie!! yay u!! poor sanji...i see what u meant. at least he wasnt crushed with boulders like mine. i woulda blushed too if i saw zoro shirtless ^^

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on September 8, 2005, 8:01:12 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 10)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girlwhoo! We're offically Bouny Buddies!!! ^w^ Heh. Sanji sounds like he gave up the cigs and go hooked on coffee XDDDD..... oh, and I have a request: Could you draw Rach's bounty poster please?

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on September 6, 2005, 4:49:33 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 9)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlKatherine's got her wanted piccy taken...muhaha..... I still need to draw Rach's T.T God,I'm so fsking lazy... >.

Zoro_Fan_Hikari on September 3, 2005, 1:03:30 PM

Zoro_Fan_Hikari on (Chapter: 8)
Zoro_Fan_HikariYAY a chapter all about me even though i read it quite along time ago. ^^ LONG LIVE KITTY PEOPLE!

moonlitdemoness09 on September 3, 2005, 6:04:43 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on (Chapter: 9)
moonlitdemoness09yay!!new chappie!!! life is worth living again!!! o and tell phillip he's the kewlest cuz he's short and has a cow friend. write more!!! plz!!!

MrsRoronoaZoro on September 1, 2005, 10:02:18 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 8)
MrsRoronoaZoroDON'T WORRY JASMINE I'M HALF CAT TOO!!X3of course in real life i don't and i want them.....oh well TT__TT ANOTHER GOOD CHAPPIE!! WHEEEEE!XD I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

moonlitdemoness09 on September 1, 2005, 7:48:07 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on (Chapter: 8)
moonlitdemoness09im like a mix of phillip and jasmine. im short as heck and i turn into a panther. yay feline-related ppl! ya'll dont know me, but who gives a frock? i love the story!! it gives me a reason not to go suicidal!! *favs (insert freakishly large # here) times*

GothicDancer on September 1, 2005, 7:28:39 AM

GothicDancer on (Chapter: 8)
GothicDancerLotsa more kitties!!

"I speak meat." XD

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on September 1, 2005, 5:06:51 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 8)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlBleeeeeeeeeeeeeh.”

“Meeeeeeeeeeeeat.” XDDD Sp34k1ng "m34t'! ish aweomse!! ^^ Yay! More cat peoples! ^^

moonlitdemoness09 on August 30, 2005, 4:03:37 AM

moonlitdemoness09 on (Chapter: 7)
moonlitdemoness09uhh...im guessing phillip is short? and he frreaks when ppl call him short. well dont feel bad! im 15 and only 4 ft 10!!!im short as heck too!short ppl unite!

MrsRoronoaZoro on August 29, 2005, 6:06:45 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 7)
MrsRoronoaZoroWHEEE!!ZORO'S ANNOYED!!XD YAY MORE STEVE!!XD YAY!!ANOTHER COOL CHAPTER!!XD

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 27, 2005, 5:57:13 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 7)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlYay! Nudder great chappie! ^^

MrsRoronoaZoro on August 23, 2005, 10:08:50 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 6)
MrsRoronoaZoroWHEEEEEE STEVE!!!!XD I LOVE THE SMALL COW!!!!Luffy is so frickin stupid it's funneh!!!!XD

GothicDancer on August 22, 2005, 9:11:34 AM

GothicDancer on (Chapter: 6)
GothicDancerI love the steak scene. I was laughing pretty hard by that point.

"Green haired meanie." *snickers*

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on August 22, 2005, 5:14:37 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 6)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlOMG I LOVE STEVE!! XDD That hammck thing reminds me of what happened to me and Val in Quebec, only on swings. She hit me, who swung and hit a tree >.

Anime_Crazy_K-chan on July 20, 2005, 3:47:20 AM

Anime_Crazy_K-chan on (Chapter: 5)
Anime_Crazy_K-chanPatrick D: BUT YELLING IS GOOOOOOD!!!

xD Muaha! That part was the greatest thing I've ever writen. Muahahaha. xD

MrsRoronoaZoro on July 19, 2005, 10:37:12 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 5)
MrsRoronoaZoroWHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YELLING!!!!!!!XDHIIIIIII ZORO!!!I'M YELLING!!!HOW ABOUT YOU
Zoro:SHUT THE HELL UP!!!!!!!!
WHEEEEEEEE FUNNY STORY!!!!!!!XDRIGHT ZORO?!?!
Zoro:Grrr....STOP YELLING
XD

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on July 19, 2005, 8:08:21 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 5)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl“WHY ARE WE YELLING?!”
I LIKE TO YELL!”
“PINK IS A COLOUR!” XDDD Thats so random, ish aweshome! ^^
OO...looks like someone has a crush....

MrsRoronoaZoro on July 10, 2005, 7:13:26 AM

MrsRoronoaZoro on (Chapter: 4)
MrsRoronoaZoroYAY!!!THE STORY CAME BACK!!XD I LOVE IT SO FAR!XD WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ZORO!!!!!!!XD

Topaz_Dragon on June 20, 2005, 8:34:21 AM

Topaz_Dragon on (Chapter: 3)
Topaz_Dragon**clap clap** this rocks it's deinatly going in my favorite!!! YAY!!! ROCKNESS THE K-CHAN-NESS DOES!! WOOP WOOP!!!!

GothicDancer on June 17, 2005, 11:16:59 AM

GothicDancer on (Chapter: 3)
GothicDancerWhen the Straw Hats are drunk, funny things happen. I remember this yaoi story I read once...XDDD

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on June 17, 2005, 7:58:51 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 3)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_GirlOMG OMG DRUNKEDNESHHHHH!!!!

Topaz_Dragon on June 17, 2005, 6:27:33 AM

Topaz_Dragon on (Chapter: 2)
Topaz_DragonOO you are talented! boy oh boy!!!! and phillip has a cape? wish i had a cape! ((little goth girl here d^^b)) THIS ROX!!!!!!!!

Topaz_Dragon on June 17, 2005, 6:21:57 AM

Topaz_Dragon on (Chapter: 1)
Topaz_Dragonawesome! nice and long! and very detailed!!!!!! ONWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! ^^Faves**

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on June 15, 2005, 7:15:51 AM

Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girl on (Chapter: 1)
Dorky_Otaku_Fan_Girlheehee^^ me likes!