Oh Dear II: A Sequel
Submitted March 30, 2006 Updated May 7, 2006 Status Incomplete | Patrick has finally set up a place for n00bs, though its a day away from Varrock, so he and Aay hardly get to see eachother, and a new power has arisen.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 9 • views: 301
Chapter 2 - Framed
Submitted: April 8, 2006 • Updated: April 8, 2006
Word count: 1518 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 260
Chapter 3 - A Talk with the King
Submitted: April 16, 2006 • Updated: April 16, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 250
Chapter 4 - A Visit to the White Knights Castle
Submitted: April 20, 2006 • Updated: April 20, 2006
Word count: 1811 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 253
Chapter 5 - Hippity Hop
Submitted: April 28, 2006 • Updated: April 28, 2006
Word count: 1060 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 241
Chapter 6 - Stolen Banana
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: May 7, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 258
Chapter 7 - The Twist of the Tongue
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2778 • Size: 34k • Comments: 1 • views: 255
Chapter 8 - Fire
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2219 • Size: 27k • Comments: 1 • views: 282
Chapter 9 - Aay's Dangerous Secret
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2163 • Size: 28k • Comments: 0 • views: 272
Chapter 10 - Dark History
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2004 • Size: 23k • Comments: 1 • views: 235
Chapter 11 - Betrayed Again
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2855 • Size: 35k • Comments: 0 • views: 271
Chapter 12 - Scream of Fury
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2197 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 280
Chapter 13 - Final Finale
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 5057 • Size: 60k • Comments: 1 • views: 269
Chapter 14 - Epilogue
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2057 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 253
Comments
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Twaksak on April 14, 2006, 6:53:40 AM
TheFallenOne66 on June 6, 2007, 11:02:15 AM
Allow me to tell u that u r GAY! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!Â
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LOL not relly. Just tempting you. XD
Twaksak on June 26, 2006, 3:44:01 AM
wow, really awsome. Im glad Otaku suggested it.OH JOY FOR THEM!!!
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'tis flowing with strength and vigor
Twaksak on June 16, 2006, 7:37:04 AM
AWSSSOOMMEEE!!! wow woman, u are really something. I definitely think you should write more RS stories. even if they don't include Aay or Patric at all. The whole fighting scene was really something!!! The whole Mrs.Patric thing is also friggen awsome!!. So.... are there gonna be any little Patric's and Aay's running around some day??? HUH?!? Just kidding.Â
Keep on keeping on
Rancor125 on June 7, 2006, 2:00:38 PM
Um... I'll die. :( lol... Can it be dramatic? PLZ? Just asking.Â
Im Ragetti, just reminding u.
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RR
Twaksak on June 2, 2006, 7:28:16 AM
COOL COOL COOOOOL!!!!!! the whole burning thing and all the fire and that -person- shadow, definitely awsome!!!!Twaksak on May 26, 2006, 3:28:11 PM
Hee Hee Hee!!!Twist of the tongue, teeth and the lips
do thyn wish to challenge my AWSOME TONGUE TWISTING POWERS!!!!!
MWAHAHHAHAHA!!!
This chapter was really something =)
Twaksak on May 8, 2006, 4:38:40 AM
ok, from a beautiful South African language called Afrikaans. It goes as such "Sannie sê Sarel sal sewe sakke sout sleep, sewe sakke sout is swaar so waar."Translated "Sannie says that Sarel will drag seven bags of salt, seven bags of salt are really heavy."
DONT DISS AFRIKAANS!!!!!!!!
shadowdude on April 20, 2006, 7:43:19 AM
"oh, and Shadow, would you mind if I did make your character evil later on?"answer: as long as you DONT turn me into a saradominist (or guthan), and i get a shot at fighting patrik (win or loose) fine by me. although when i decide to pk (mainly sara's in cwars (members thing) or in wildy) i wear different stuff, full black mystic, a complete zammy prayer book, and a zammy staff. i swicth between aincent and normal magic, but i mainly use normal for flames of zammy. I also use iban staff for iban blast. so remember, if you do make me evil, thats my evil armor an wep.
Twaksak on April 19, 2006, 3:40:09 AM
WOOPA!!!! thrilling episode!! Yeah, make quick with the next one. I CANT WAIT!!!!! *runs to wall at top speed and startd banging head to the tune of 'old mac donald'* shadowdude on April 16, 2006, 8:48:31 PM
YAY! Lady aay is safe! That ragetti seems supsicious...the murder maybe? lol, dont tell me if he is or not, i dont want the story ruined. anyway, plz continue as fast as possible.P.s: I know how to get more than one easter ring, wanna know how?
Rancor125 on April 16, 2006, 12:26:28 PM
Creepy and cool. Thanks ^_^shadowdude on April 15, 2006, 8:40:38 PM
btw, im a zamorakian, im not entirerly evil though, just hated by many and thought to be evil, so i dont really help others and dont let them help me. Basiclly started in wildy when i got attacked by a clan and i killed their leader, then they put me up for wanted. Now ppl are after me and trying to take me to wildy. Because i'm getting so strong, the reward is getting bigger, so i dont trust many ppl. Anyway, when u put me in your story, DONT FORGET, im a zamorakian, not a saradominist.Rancor125 on April 9, 2006, 11:19:46 AM
Oh, I have other info I left out:I have a light blue fremminik cape, not black and I have a scar across one eye, so I wear an eyepatch except for in battle.
Seeya! Hope to see more.
REVENGE OVER EVIL. THE RANCOR
Twaksak on April 9, 2006, 7:09:10 AM
hey mustard girl.i really loved your story and im so happy that ur writing a sequal. ur really talented. well, i was wondering if i could maybe, sortof, just get a part in the story.I CAN BE REALLY EVIL!!! MWAHAHAHAH!!!! honestly, if u wanted. Just saw that u wanted evil people. Just a peenie weenie really small part would b fine. IF u said no i would understand... ur writing ROX anyway!! Plz reply on my profile
Rancor125 on April 9, 2006, 6:39:24 AM
YAY! Another chapter! PEALSE do more! Once again, I LOVE THIS STORY.REVENGE OVER EVIL. THE RANCOR
shadowdude on March 31, 2006, 9:17:58 PM
p.s.oh yeah, i also have a ring of wealth and an ammy of glory, and a legends cape.
shadowdude on March 31, 2006, 9:10:08 PM
ive alredy asked if i can be in, but i forgot to tell u some things about my character:Username: Shadow 097. (Ppl just call me shadow, but my friends call me slayer.)
armor/weapon: rune and drag long, but for the story, can u just give me full white? (White weapon changes, cause i just use any white weapon.)
place where i live: i have rented out a room in white knights castle.
if u need any more info anout my acount, just ask.
Rancor125 on March 31, 2006, 5:20:02 AM
Alright heres my application:Name: Ragetti
Surname: The Rancor
Appearance: All mithril armor and black cape, "Flame" colored (orange) hair.mithril small shield
Weapon: Addamentile long sword
Personality: Tough hardened(you chose evil or not), experienced person. Fought in many battles and has many scars.
Talents: Skilled in melee, runecrafting, ship sailing, runs tavern in Port Sarim
I dont need to be big in the story. I dont like overwelming people with work. Bye
RR
shadowdude on March 31, 2006, 4:27:40 AM
LOVE YOUR STORY, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!Rancor125 on March 31, 2006, 1:55:35 AM
Do more chapters! I LIKE THIS STORY! And, if its not too bold to say, may I be in it? (it doesnt have to be big)Anyway nice stories!
name: Twaksak (feel free to add me
Talent: well, when i run around runescape i like to find new ways of making cash, because i love expensive armour. So i mainly do mining and smithing
Weapon: rune shimmy (im not a member. its so FRUSTRATING!!!)
Armour: Addy(G) once again, i love flashy stuff
Personality: Alright, i love to make money(I love money so much that i even go around picking up 5gp at the goblins place) and wear flashy stuff. i cant stand people that wear mis coloured and mismached stuff. i love talking nonsence at the mining site. errrr, im NOT GAY!!! i take serious offence in being called gay. sheesh... and i really like ginger beer.
Appearence: tall dark and handsome.... na, just kidding, brown hair, shoulder length, no beard, give me blue eyes and wearing anything flashy!!! On a rather depressing note, i just sold my addy(T)!!! *sniffness*
alright, ill be reading ur story then. oh and say happy bday to emma watson!!!! 15/04!!