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Hope In a Heartbreak

Ash and co.are spending the weekend in Cinnabar Island & meet a kid named Derek who sweeps Misty off her feet causing Ash to get jealous , But Derek isn't who he seems,can Ash convince Misty of the truth or is she going to have to see for her self?



Chapter 1 - A New City, A New Friend?
Submitted: November 27, 2006 • Updated: November 29, 2006
Word count: 879 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 474

Chapter 2 - Tour of the City
Submitted: November 28, 2006 • Updated: November 28, 2006
Word count: 876 • Size: 4k • Comments: 4 • views: 448

Chapter 3 - Questions and Answers
Submitted: December 3, 2006 • Updated: December 3, 2006
Word count: 1569 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 457

Chapter 4 - Trouble in Paradise
Submitted: December 6, 2006 • Updated: December 6, 2006
Word count: 2879 • Size: 14k • Comments: 4 • views: 434

Chapter 5 - Secret Revalations
Submitted: December 12, 2006 • Updated: December 12, 2006
Word count: 3358 • Size: 17k • Comments: 1 • views: 980

Chapter 6 - My Love and Savior
Submitted: December 17, 2006 • Updated: December 18, 2006
Word count: 7130 • Size: 36k • Comments: 5 • views: 534

Chapter 7 - *Alternate Ending*
Submitted: December 30, 2006 • Updated: December 30, 2006
Word count: 996 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 397


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Dragondash on May 1, 2008, 10:03:35 PM

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DragondashThat was cool! And Misty IS older than Ash. Everyone knows that. So why are everyone here so surprised?

PPhantom on May 2, 2008, 8:58:45 AM

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PPhantomyeah it bugs me when people point that out

its fanfiction people!!

taijutsumaster on June 27, 2007, 10:58:08 AM

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taijutsumasterDUDE!!!!!!!!!!!! ur stories are friggen awesome

PPhantom on June 27, 2007, 12:35:19 PM

PPhantom on (Chapter: 2)
PPhantomthank you =]

Anne14 on May 18, 2007, 1:21:52 PM

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Anne14OMG ITS AWESOME please add the next chapter!

PPhantom on May 18, 2007, 2:34:31 PM

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PPhantomim glad u like it, all the chapters are up. and yes i know mistys older than ash but i just made it so she wasnt

Anne14 on May 18, 2007, 1:14:26 PM

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Anne14ahhhhhhhh mistys like older than ash..... but still good
OMG!!!Awesome!!!*favs* *favs* Very detailed. yeah and PLEASE do it quickly!!! I really loooooooooooove this story! OMG ITS AWESOME please add the next chapter!

shinypikachu2608 on May 5, 2007, 3:56:37 AM

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shinypikachu2608ahhhhhhhh mistys like older than ash.....
but still good

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:37:45 AM

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Yumiko_Ying_VinnieI'll read and the other stories of yours!!!^^

PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 6:43:36 AM

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PPhantomthank u!

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:10:51 AM

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Yumiko_Ying_VinnieWhy do you write so freaking awesome stories???!!!!

PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 6:33:39 AM

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PPhantomlol its not that good but thanks anyway =]

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:33:35 AM

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on (Chapter: 6)!!!I love it!!!^^

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:01:21 AM

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on (Chapter: 3)
Yumiko_Ying_VinnieOMG!!Can you believe that I cry now???*sobs*
I really do!!!

PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 6:33:24 AM

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PPhantomlol im sorry!!*hands u box of 2 ply tissue*

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 6:20:45 AM

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Yumiko_Ying_VinnieSo sad!!!!*sobs*

Yumiko_Ying_Vinnie on January 14, 2007, 5:55:12 AM

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PPhantom on January 14, 2007, 5:59:23 AM

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PPhantomyay thanks for the favs =D

katara719 on January 2, 2007, 3:51:18 AM

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katara719I like this one and the Other! The other was a little more romantic, which i loved, but this one makes Derek not a jerk. Still, very excellent story!

PPhantom on January 2, 2007, 8:06:21 AM

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PPhantomi liked the first one cause im a just a romantic good but yes i felt bad for derek so i did a little twist on it =] im in a contest for ash and misty love fiction and im debating which to enter with, hope in a heartbreak, or blast from the past-wat d u think?

katara719 on January 7, 2007, 1:38:20 AM

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katara719hmm... maybe "Hope in Heartbreak." They're both very Very good, but I like this one a little tiny bit more. ^^

PPhantom on January 8, 2007, 5:48:29 AM

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PPhantomyeah me too thanks ^_^

SaraJane on December 30, 2006, 11:39:22 PM

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SaraJaneWow, Great Job! It is a good story! Well done!

Coolstra on December 24, 2006, 12:12:25 AM

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CoolstraThis was so awesome! I love love stories!

wolf-girl-ghost on December 19, 2006, 12:23:30 AM

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Ur a really good writer and I hope to see more fanfics from you in future long lice AAML

katara719 on December 18, 2006, 7:58:39 AM

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katara719hey, i was wondering if i could put a link to this story on my profile so (maybe) more people will read it? this is a really good story, and it deserves more comments. ^^ i promise i'll say it's your story. i won't put it there if you don't want me to. thank you if you let me. =D

PPhantom on December 18, 2006, 7:59:29 AM

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PPhantomomg yes thanks so much that would be great! wow ur like my fricken hero!*bows down*

katara719 u rock so much!

katara719 on December 18, 2006, 8:08:27 AM

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katara719^^ yay! i'll add it to my profile right away! ^^

katara719 on December 18, 2006, 7:16:51 AM

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really, really well done. ^^
thank you for writing this story. it's a really good love story (with my second favorite couple) and it's not actually cheesy.

PPhantom on December 18, 2006, 7:57:34 AM

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PPhantomyay thanks so much im so hapy u like it and put it under ur favs. i know like 80% of AMML r so cheesy or so predictable and thanks so much for following it and thanks for not calling it cheezy(swips forheard phew)


katara719 on December 15, 2006, 8:00:02 AM

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katara719i need to say, i'm touched with the last one.

PPhantom on December 15, 2006, 8:04:45 AM

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PPhantomyay im glad. the final chapter is coming out this weekend, be prepared lol

katara719 on December 16, 2006, 7:45:18 AM

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katara719awesome, i can't wait! ^^

Sasukesgirlfriend on December 12, 2006, 9:20:35 AM

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SasukesgirlfriendVery detailed.

katara719 on December 10, 2006, 6:40:14 AM

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katara719yay i love thes stories!

PPhantom on December 10, 2006, 8:27:16 AM

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PPhantomim glad someone finally commented and yay that u like it!

freewilly on November 28, 2006, 2:38:02 AM

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freewillyyeah and PLEASE do it quickly!!!
i really loooooooooooove this story!

wolf-girl-ghost on November 28, 2006, 1:00:08 AM

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wolf-girl-ghostOMG ITS AWESOME please add the next chapter!