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Shocker

This is a story from the point of veiw of my oc character (Shocker) He is looking for his brother and finally found him.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: August 29, 2005 • Updated: August 29, 2005
Word count: 609 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 205

Chapter 2 - Chapter 2
Submitted: September 2, 2005 • Updated: September 2, 2005
Word count: 777 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 190

Chapter 3 - Chapter 3
Submitted: September 4, 2005 • Updated: September 4, 2005
Word count: 574 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 188

Chapter 4 - Chapter 4
Submitted: September 8, 2005 • Updated: September 8, 2005
Word count: 715 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 176

Chapter 5 - Chapter 5
Submitted: September 11, 2005 • Updated: September 11, 2005
Word count: 635 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 180

Chapter 6 - Chapter 6
Submitted: September 14, 2005 • Updated: September 14, 2005
Word count: 1336 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 177

Chapter 7 - Chapter 7
Submitted: September 16, 2005 • Updated: September 16, 2005
Word count: 524 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 178

Chapter 8 - chapter 8
Submitted: October 2, 2005 • Updated: October 2, 2005
Word count: 681 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 167

Comments

Comments (18)

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CodeCrush on September 11, 2005, 3:14:34 AM

CodeCrush on (Chapter: 5)
CodeCrushvery short chapter here, but it's good. needs a little more details and stuff to make everything more clear or senses around the paragraphs and stuff. keep it up, it can get better.

just-learned-how-to-draw on September 10, 2005, 2:32:12 AM

just-learned-how-to-draw on (Chapter: 1)
just-learned-how-to-drawhey, that is pretty good^_^
im going to read the other chapters later because i am going to the school with matt.
bye

Black_Breeze on September 9, 2005, 12:51:50 PM

Black_Breeze on (Chapter: 1)
Black_BreezeIt's a bit fast, but I like it. And no, your brother hasn't speaken badly of you, lol. good job!

beybladegurl on September 8, 2005, 10:49:43 AM

beybladegurl on (Chapter: 4)
beybladegurlawsome!! chapter 5!! ^_^

beybladegurl on September 7, 2005, 11:31:12 AM

beybladegurl on (Chapter: 3)
beybladegurlvery kool....keep up the great work!! also, i'll try 2 have a new fanfic up soon, so if u could, plz check it out...or comments on the 2 i already have up would b much appreciated!! tanks!! and again, awsome job!! ready 4 chapter 4!! ^_^

Protofan108 on September 4, 2005, 10:34:11 AM

Protofan108 on (Chapter: 3)
Protofan108I forgot to put the disclaimor for this one so I will put it on the comment I do not own Megaman X or it's characters only Phailem, Gamma, and Shocker. Pleas comment before I die of lack of comments.

bluefairy421 on September 2, 2005, 9:05:51 AM

bluefairy421 on (Chapter: 1)
bluefairy421It's very good! I can't wait to see more!

Blue Fairy

beybladegurl on August 30, 2005, 9:43:46 AM

beybladegurl on (Chapter: 1)
beybladegurlnice...i lik!!