OC x Naruto: Mizaki High

How do I say this? This story is discontinued as of August 22, 2007.
I am truly sorry, but people keep bugging me to update, I don't mind all that much but that adds pressure and I do NOT handle pressure well. I handle it horribly.
Sorry, I haven't even gotten to anything romantic. GOSH I feel really, really bad...I'm also not into Naruto that much anymore and yeah...I'm also fresh out of ideas. Totally dead. I don't think I'd be able to finish it.
I'm so, so, so, so, so, so, so so, sorry!!
PLEASE FORGIVE MEH! TT_TT *gets on the ground and begs for forgivness*

I aslo have other stories I wish to write for my own entertainment and I really, really want to write them! I am so sorry...I understand if you're mad at me... TTTT_TTTTT

it's okay i understand^^

I'm sorry that i bugged you....it's my share of the fault sorry! and i understand im starting to get out of it too and getting in my own manga and stuff i compleatly understand ^^

I'm glad you understand. ^^ I'm not that into Naruto anymore. T-T
And no, no! It wasn't your fault at all. I just don't do good with pressure and I want to write other stories. And the MAIN reason, my brain's totally fried.

Please don't bug me to update. -_- If you do it takes longer for the chapter to come up...just letting you know and I'm almost done with the chapter so....

Cool! ^^ I like the story can you add my charater at all? or is it too late?

Sorry about the late reply. ^^; I was going to close the chars cuz I'm getting overloaded, but I'm working on the next chapter in which I still need to introduce other OCs, so...you're lucky! xD You can add your char, but I need a profile and who you want to be with, k?

Haha thats okay! ^^ i'm happy that i'm lucky for once 8D

ok here is her info:

Name: Danielle Hatake

Nickname: Dani

Age: 22

Gender: Female

Eyes: Green (Has one shirgan

Hair: Brown in the back and silver bangs

Special featuers: 'Love' Symbol tattoed on her stomach and sholder, and has 2 rather large scars on her back

Race: human, bat and cat

Personality: Nice, Protective, Challenging, evil

Village: Leaf

Demon (s): She has to deamon that is half cat and half bat, when she gets really really excited she turns into a cat

Naruto pairing: Iruka

Backround: When she was born, demons we're attacking the village. She was random took out of the village and when the demons we're defeated the hokage ceiled them inside of her. She was then left at orochimaru's door step and he took her in as his own. She was nervouse to go to the ninja academy and orochimaru made her go in the middle of the year. There she didn't fit in but made friends with iruka who sat next to her. She soon made friends with becci (My friend's OC) and they hung out more. Dani is very well trained with hand to hand combat mainly with kunai's. She is also the secound spy for ororchimaru, but also does work for the ataksuki

siblings: Kakashi (Older brother)

Friends: Iruka, Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, Ino, Asuma, Itachi, Kisame,Tusnade, temari, deidara and kabuto

Enemys: zetsu, tobi, Sakura, the 4th hokage, Choji, Shikamaru

Here is a edit if it will help discribe her ^^:



if you need any more info tell meh! ^^

Yay! Awesomeness!

YAY!!!!!!!!! I'm in this one!

what no detention?XD
damn!!

Not yet...even the teachers don't stay at school once the bell has rung. XD

Yay! Update!

Yay update!

This was awesome!

u updated :)!!paint!!

Yay, you updated! And Painting? WOO!

Yeah! It's gonna be fun...what happens if we get into trouble?? Detention? Noooo! Lol, spoilers.

Hey, would there be a possibility that you could update this the 10th? I leave for camp on the 11th, and I wanna be able to read the chapter instead of having to wait two weeks to read it.

Hmmm...dammit. I want to update, too! >.< I'm goin' to mah bro's apartment and I'm stuck there until the 13th cuz my mom and my sis are going on an apartment hunt because my sis didn't get accepted into the college she wanted so she had to find a different college in a state far away. -_-||| VERY far. Lol, ummmmmmm..............................I'll prolly get back late on the 13th and have ready for you...you choose. How many chapters would you like to come back to? You have a choice between 2-5. (That includes the #s 2 and 5, ok?) Sorry I can't get a chappie up before you leave. T.T But I hope this works with you too. ^^

It's alright! Get as many up as you can, okay!?

Thank you. I'm glad you understand. ^^ But please, you choose a number. That way I can plan ahead...idk that's that way I work lol. If you just want me to get as much up as I can I don't know how many I can get up, but I'll try to get a lot in, k?

Um.....3 or 4

Ok I'll get four in. I've been on break too long, so I tihnk I owe it to you guys anyways. ^^; :3

Thank you. ^w^

So when are you gonna update this?

I just found out the virtual school thing is due June 11th, so it's probably gonna be around there, Sorry. ^^U The virtual school takes up ALL my free time. -_-' And my mom is making me finish it and even said if I look like I won't make the deadline she'd talk to my principal and get me an extension. >.< Sorry, again, but besides my mom making me do it I have to do it to get LOZ: Twilight Princess. *o* (I'm a big Zelda fan. ^^U)
As soon as I'm done with the virtual thing, I'll work on the OC story! :3 (Dun kill me. O.o)

That's fine! I can understand that! BTW, Twilight Princess ROCKS!! I have it, and it's so worth the work! You will luv it!

Thanks. :3 I can't wait to get it now! T.T Time seems to move so slowly here, the school days seem longer! O.o Well, see ya June 11, because my mom doesn't let me on here, until the virtual thing is finished. I'm not supposed to be on here. >D

...*sniff sniff* where did I go?
AmmyK aka Shoko Kinamoto

I'll fit you in the next chapter where, FOR SURE I will include all of the the OCs. *keeps forgeting* X.x

yay shika bumped into a mystery person. in my own little mind its me. don't tell me if i'm right i want to find out in the next chappie:3

Ok, then I won't tell you. :x :)

Yay!!!!! ^.^

WOOT!! So when are you gonna explain the tourtament?

Next chapter. ^^' Somehow it didn't seem to fit in that last one. Sorry. X_x

Yay! Can't wait for the next chaper!!!

^^ The next chapter might come this or next weekend. I don't know when I'll get time because I singed up for this virtual class (which I totally regret now) and I've been delaying it. So now I have this and part of next month to finish it. I've had 5 months to do it, too. I feel so lazy. D: And I'm like on Unit 1 and there's 6 Units. DD:

Kewl! Which means it will be up soon! YAHOO!!!!!

Yeah, I guess. ^^'

*sniff* You didn't update......TT_TT

k its april now UPDATE

hallo....um when are you going to update

Probably it's too
late when you see it
but I will like to give
a suggestion ^_^;;;;;.


Why don't you make
a chapter about Valentine's Day.

You don't have to take it from
me ^_^;;;;;;;;;....

Hmm, if you want...

U don't have to ^_^!
You're the author.
Please don't take
what say.

It's ok, if you would like a Valentine's Day chapter I could write one. ^_^

Well if u want to ^_^.

you can make it a school dance too.....just for fun

It would be fun.

Ok, but new chapter probably won't come out until late March. ^^U I'm really sorry, I'm kinda brainded and my teachers are now giving me more reports and projects than homework. >> I'll be sure to make the chapters long and full of detail. Sorry about the delay. D;

thats k.......just take care of school stuff and we'll wait as long as we can

Hey it's okay ^^!

Thanks. ^-^

Yep.

dude that would rock

sweet!

Thank you. ^^

I'm sorry. I'll fit you in Chapter 5, for sure. -_-"
Although, it would be nice if you encouraged me on the other chapters. ¬.¬
Again, I'm really sorry I couldn't fit you in. >.<

It's ok. ^.^

what is the tourtament

That'll be in the next chapter, sorry. I couldn't fit that part in, yet. ^^'

then update quickly

besides youll have to fill in Nara....she has no idea about the tournament either

No one, except the teacher know about it the tourament so far. Everyone else will be filled in later. ^^

by later you mean...

Chapter 5

which will be up soon...right

I'll try.

thanx

Np. ^.~

Yay!

yay

Can I be in it?

Sure. ^^

If I can, there are two peoples.

Name: Sumomo Amai
Age:12
Village: Hidden Lotus Village (moves to Konoha)
Personality: Very hyper because she eats sweets all the time
Crush: Choji
Appearance: Long curly magenta hair, White tank top, Baggy pink pants, and pink scarf around waist. Headband worn on forehead.

Name: Neko Kuriimu
Age:12
Village: Hidden Lotus Village (moves to Konoha)
Personality: Sort of a clutz, lonely most of the time
Crush: Shino
Appearance: Black cat ears and tail, Long dark blackish purple hair, purple tank top with lotus on it, black skirt, choker with village symbol pendant,
Extra: Has Black Cat demon inside her, hated by lotus village.

You can only have one OC in this story, sorry. ^^U Who do you want to be with? : )

Um, just put in Neko then.

please tell me your almost done

ok ive been patient UPDATE SOON

I'm trying. >.<

yay

After chapter 4, the couple chapters start. :D And your first, 'cause I like writing about Nara and Kiba. >///<

oh yeah

^-^

O lord...i am dying from suspense. Please write more soon!

I'm sorry, I'll try to update soon. >.< By the way, thanks for adding me to your favs! *.*

OMG! Favs!

Thank you so much!! *w* ^-^

quick ?....are you goin to like have a dance at the end of da year or somethin......no reason....just my school had teh winter dance last week and i cant get it off my mind soo....

Sounds like a good idea. *w*

I will. : )

yay someone swapped with me phew naruto ish so clueless XD yay i can't wait for more

Yeah. You're patners with Hinata. CX

Uh...It's me ^_^'.
(if u do know
uh never mind ^^')

XD

You know what im gonna say pretty much

Suki and Itachi=WIN. XDDDD

lol yea. plz?

Of course. XD

XD yayz! thanks! ^_^

I am so exited to see how this ends up

Thanks a lot. C:

can i be in this plzz?

if i can heres the info:)
name:amber somayon
age:12
Personality:can be shy but quite loud with friends.quiet won't talk much.
Appearence:brown hair sholuder length brown eyes Wears headband around her neck. white vest top fish net shirt under her vest top.black trousers just below her knee.blue ninja shoes.
Favorite Quote:uhhh...
crush: shikamaru
Why they like crush:personality i guess not sure why:)
extra info:bad attitude.she wants to be seen by her farther like her sister arabi and her bro dylan she is from the leaf village.she can summon two animals madina and sarona.Sarona is a brownish dog/wolf creature who helps to track enemies and has her own techniques. Madina is a sea blue baby dragon who is key to one of her techniques.maridona is a blood line technique can see if there still able to fight.also increases her chakra.
friends:shikamaru,kiba, neji,hinata and naruto.
can i be with shikamaru??

Sure, I'll put you in right away. :3

thankyou:3

Your welcome. :3

Yes..VICTORY

Victory!! :)

Me: O.o'... OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! YOU PARTNERED ME WITH GAARA-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEEEEESSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (in case if you dont know, but as soon as I read that part, I screamed. My dad thought I had hurt myself) I AM TOTALLY FREAKING OUT!!!!!!! ^.^'
Gaara: O.o'...

:D

Yes!!
IT'S UP!!
AND I READ IT!!! XD

YAY! CX

Yay XD!

*falls over* I'm gonna shut my big mouth now so you can finish ur story...... *smiles sheepishly*

If you dont update soon i swear i will sick all of my angry friends on you

Hey!
It takes time to
think of an idea!
How would you
like to feel be rush?

shes been saying that shell update for over a week now

STILL!
IF YOU DON'T
RUSH HER MAYBE
SHE CAN WORK
ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!

for a long time i didn't but it took so dang long that it drove me cra-ANNA GET OFF MY ACCOUNT.....i wasnt the one rushin my friend earlier it was my friend anna she found out my account stuff so she comes on every once and a while.........i am so sorry

That's okay.
Just tell "Anna"
to stop rushing
her. Or she'll
get it! Opps...
know I'm being
mean...sorry.

trust me i tell her that all the time...not like she listens to me...but she listens to my friend John......but hes never around when i need him

Also, please don’t use my story to chat with other people, ok? I’m not trying to be mean, or anything I just need to get everyone to understand that. :D
If you ignore this, I’ll just delete your comments. I have no other choice, please don’t take it personally. : )

I'm taking it personel ^-^'.

Sorry. ^^;

It's okay ^^.

How much longer? Ur story is awsome and I hate suspense.......

Ops...
I forgot something ^-^;;...
I'm one year younger then
Naruto, I don't know
what age your putting
him on here...
sorry for that ^-^;;;

It's ok. :D

Thanks again.
Sorry that I keep
saying "thanks" ^_^'

It's ok. : )

If you need it i have an updated profile on Nara.....i was bored and i needed it for my friends...so...

Sure! ^_^

here ya go
 Name: Nara Namida
Age: 12 1/2
Gender: Demon/ Human female
Hair Color: Brown with Blond Highlights; Long, normally braidedEyes: Amber-GoldKekkei Genkai: Water and Wind ManipulationDistinguishing Features: Orochimaru’s Curse markDemon: Artic wolf (Hokkoyoku-kami)
Village: Village of the Snow
Family: Father/ Murdered by Itachi
Mother/ Murdered by Itachi
Brother/ Murdered by Itachi
Team: Team not listed yet
FRIENDS: Kiba (has a big crush on him)

Nara Namida is a shy young chunin from the Village of the Snow. Her past taught her to trust no one and to accept help from no one, so if anyone she doesn’t know or is afraid of approaches her, or if anyone tries to help her, she will lash out on them. However, if anyone she cares for is in danger, she will risk her life to save them, even if it means letting the demon inside her take control.

Thanks! :D

but what is funny is that the name of the demon literally means Artic wolf demon

XD Lol

Um...can you do me,
please? Here's the info.

Name: Melody Fennec
Hair: Dark brown
with black tips *short*

Clan: Fennec (Fox) clane
Last one: Yes
Weapon: Huge kuin
Friends: Hinnata,
Sakura

Personality:
Shy but strong
Ect.: Has Fennec fox ears
and tail

I would like to be with
Naruto please.

Ok, you can be with Naruto! :D I just need more of her personality plz. I also have a question, does Melody have fox ears and tail all the time? Melody will be in chapter 4, ok? : ) Thank you for joining my OC x Naruto story!

Okay ^_^.
She is shy to everyone
ecspeaily Naruto but
when she feels offened
or in a battel she shows
her inner self.

And yes she has the
fox ears and tail at
all times.

Thanks for
leting me join ^_^.

Ok, thank you. ^_^ And, no problem! :3

^^...
I can't wait for the
next chapter ^^.

Thanks. :)

YeP :)

Sure, you can be with Lee. ;3 Although, I can't fit you in Chapter 3, sorry. D: Kiri will appear in Chapter 4, ok? :D Thank you for joining my OC x Naruto story! : )