Darkness Falls (A Naruto Tale)

Chapter 1 - Welcome All Losers!
Submitted: December 14, 2007 • Updated: December 14, 2007
Word count: 671 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 138

Chapter 2 - Who Is This Blonde Head Person!?
Submitted: December 15, 2007 • Updated: December 15, 2007
Word count: 494 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 134

Chapter 3 - WHAT IS THAT MARKING!?
Submitted: December 16, 2007 • Updated: December 16, 2007
Word count: 667 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 114

Chapter 4 - Friend or Foe?
Submitted: December 17, 2007 • Updated: December 17, 2007
Word count: 549 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 113

Chapter 5 - Sadness and Sorrow
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
Word count: 574 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 153

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kogalover2013 on January 19, 2008, 1:18:16 PM

kogalover2013 on January 19, 2008, 1:18:16 PM (Chapter: 5)

omg great chap p.s. whers sakura she wuald be kicken these guys butts lol cant wait 4 update

kogalover2013 on January 19, 2008, 1:03:36 PM

kogalover2013 on January 19, 2008, 1:03:36 PM (Chapter: 4)

i hate u im sakura in my head and she whould not freak over a nail

kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 7:24:37 AM

kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 7:24:37 AM (Chapter: 3)

awsome stories

kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 7:20:17 AM

kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 7:20:17 AM (Chapter: 2)

awsome dude
 

kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 6:45:32 AM

kogalover2013 on January 18, 2008, 6:45:32 AM (Chapter: 1)

lol awsome story favs

GreyPichu on December 22, 2007, 1:56:14 PM

GreyPichu on December 22, 2007, 1:56:14 PM (Chapter: 5)

this is really good, cant wait for th update!

SandyDeath on December 22, 2007, 1:56:51 PM

SandyDeath on December 22, 2007, 1:56:51 PM (Chapter: 5)

Thanks ^-^

nextguardian on December 18, 2007, 10:31:31 AM

nextguardian on December 18, 2007, 10:31:31 AM (Chapter: 5)

Wow, excellent chapter, and great twist with the Bridge episode!

nextguardian on December 17, 2007, 12:34:31 PM

nextguardian on December 17, 2007, 12:34:31 PM (Chapter: 4)

1. Poor Sakura, breaking that nail (lol, I actualy like Sakura, but that was an awesome touch!)
2. Holy! Zabuza=Father? Nice twist!

Another great ch!

nextguardian on December 16, 2007, 11:33:27 AM

nextguardian on December 16, 2007, 11:33:27 AM (Chapter: 3)

Good stuff! I just want to say this: THANK YOU for putting your dialogue on different lines, not to mention using punctuation, lol! Anyway, great chapter!

SandyDeath on December 17, 2007, 5:23:03 AM

SandyDeath on December 17, 2007, 5:23:03 AM (Chapter: 3)

thanks next you rock ^-^

Silverfeather on December 16, 2007, 6:36:10 AM

Silverfeather on December 16, 2007, 6:36:10 AM (Chapter: 1)

Not bad, there are a few spelling and punct. mistakes, but otherwise it is fine.

SandyDeath on December 16, 2007, 6:46:04 AM

SandyDeath on December 16, 2007, 6:46:04 AM (Chapter: 1)

Lol XD! Im dumb and i type too quickly XD

Silverfeather on December 16, 2007, 7:06:23 AM

Silverfeather on December 16, 2007, 7:06:23 AM (Chapter: index)

...I never said you were dumb, we all make mistakes, just slow down a bit to make it better ^-^

SandyDeath on December 16, 2007, 7:28:50 AM

SandyDeath on December 16, 2007, 7:28:50 AM (Chapter: index)

lol ok XD corse last night i was very tired that was really the last thing i did on the comp.