Color Poems
Submitted November 3, 2007 Updated February 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | Ok so... these are the only poems I can write lol and J.T. (bookworm369) suggested I post them so... here goes. Worth a shot, hope you like them ^^ (PS: I need more colors. Someone give me a suggestion please lol)
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Red
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 43 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 198
Chapter 2 - Yellow
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 36 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 219
Chapter 3 - Green
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 39 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 176
Chapter 4 - Blue
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 30 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 183
Chapter 5 - Purple
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 28 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 177
Chapter 6 - White
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 178
Chapter 7 - Black
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 32 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 192
Chapter 8 - Brown
Submitted: November 10, 2007 • Updated: November 10, 2007
Word count: 69 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 187
Chapter 9 - Gray
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 52 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 195
Chapter 10 - Gold
Submitted: February 26, 2008 • Updated: February 26, 2008
Word count: 23 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 171
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YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:26:57 AM
Blue reminds me of sadness, my Bestfriend loves blue. awesome.YamiRevea on November 11, 2007, 2:26:23 AM
Like a brand new flow of newly born fields, very nice ^^bookworm369 on November 10, 2007, 10:21:44 AM
XP darn it....i was sure u couldnt do it, but YOU PROVED ME WRONG! lol excellent job!YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 10:22:56 AM
I have proved you all wrong, mwah ha ha ha ha!Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! ^^
KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 9:53:17 AM
OOH! I LIKE!!! GREAT JOB YORI-CHAN! That one's great! I don't really have much else to say now....YoriXYamiForever on November 10, 2007, 9:54:10 AM
lol THanks Kel-chan! ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 10, 2007, 10:16:14 AM
YOU'RE WELCOME!bookworm369 on November 6, 2007, 12:28:37 PM
wow....i mean....WOW...ur really good, and i LOVE[/u] the part about superstition^^ =D great job!bookworm369 on November 6, 2007, 12:27:02 PM
i love it...the only thing i would change is the word "fluffy", but thats just me XD seriously tho awesome job!^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:02 AM
*blinks* I hate you so bad, you know that? So bad.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:03:14 AM
You know... that's why I was afraid to post these. *frowns at you* Whatever happened to constructive criticism?KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:21 AM
I HATE YOU BECAUSE YOU CAN ACTUALLY WRITE POEMS!! DUH!!!! I can't use correct constructive critism. It doesn't work.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:07:31 AM
*laughs* I'm sure you can write poems too. I didn't think I could until I tried... even now these are all I can do ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:08:53 AM
Psh, yeah right.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:59:09 AM
lol Thanks but I've actually had the Black one finished since before I started HS. I'm glad you like it though ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:02:05 AM
I'm guessing HS stands for high school.... OF COURSE I LIKE IT YOU DIM WIT!!YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:06:07 AM
Yes is does stand for high school... ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:28 AM
^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:54:57 AM
Ooh, purple's good too. Purple and blue are by far my top favorites.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:00:15 AM
Kool ^^KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:57:16 AM
*blinks* Wow. That's really good. I think you got insiration from J.T.-kun. You guys really think alike. ^^YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:59:56 AM
Oops, that other comment was supposed to be a reply *looks sheepish*KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:01:36 AM
That's ok.