Color Poems
Submitted November 3, 2007 Updated February 26, 2008 Status Incomplete | Ok so... these are the only poems I can write lol and J.T. (bookworm369) suggested I post them so... here goes. Worth a shot, hope you like them ^^ (PS: I need more colors. Someone give me a suggestion please lol)
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Red
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 43 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 198
Chapter 2 - Yellow
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 36 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 219
Chapter 3 - Green
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 39 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 176
Chapter 4 - Blue
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 30 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 183
Chapter 5 - Purple
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 28 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 177
Chapter 6 - White
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 54 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 177
Chapter 7 - Black
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
Word count: 32 • Size: <1k • Comments: 6 • views: 192
Chapter 8 - Brown
Submitted: November 10, 2007 • Updated: November 10, 2007
Word count: 69 • Size: <1k • Comments: 7 • views: 187
Chapter 9 - Gray
Submitted: November 11, 2007 • Updated: November 11, 2007
Word count: 52 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 195
Chapter 10 - Gold
Submitted: February 26, 2008 • Updated: February 26, 2008
Word count: 23 • Size: <1k • Comments: 2 • views: 171
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KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:55:41 AM
I like the end, but not the snow part. Hate the snow part.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:57:39 AM
Why? I thought it was nice symbolism if you think about the other things I said about white...KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:01:22 AM
Yes, it's nice symbolism... BUT I HATE SNOW!!!YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:04:53 AM
*tsks at you* *reminds you* Constructive criticism...KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:06:45 AM
I FREAKIN' HATE SNOW!! SO LAY OFF!!YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 8:08:01 AM
As you wish...KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 8:08:28 AM
>.<KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:28 AM
I like friendship. ^^ Awesome.YoriXYamiForever on November 5, 2007, 7:55:03 AM
What happened to "I hate you"? *laughs*KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:56:00 AM
Shut up.KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:54:19 AM
Blue is by far my favorite.KelekiahGaladrian on November 5, 2007, 7:53:47 AM
Hmm, interesting.AnimeAngel87 on November 3, 2007, 11:53:11 AM
There is White SeeJust so
[ color = white]
w/o the spaces
YoriXYamiForever on November 3, 2007, 11:54:50 AM
Thanks! ^^AnimeAngel87 on November 7, 2007, 8:48:37 PM
^_^ ywAnimeAngel87 on November 3, 2007, 11:54:00 AM
Same 4 yellowjust do
[ color = yellow ]
w/o teh spaces
bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:08:51 AM
short sweet, and to the point^^ very good jobbookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:07:13 AM
ooh i like this one best, not sure what, but theres something about it^^bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:06:38 AM
ooh i like it^^bookworm369 on November 3, 2007, 11:06:12 AM
lol pixie dust^^ its good, keep it up