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Broken

This is a Torn and Ashelin story. Ashelin tells Torn she is cheating on him and dumps him the meanest way possible. Can he ever win back the love of the person he truly cares about?

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Breakup
Submitted: December 10, 2006 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 959 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 209

Chapter 2 - Life Isn't the Same Anymore
Submitted: December 11, 2006 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1041 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 152

Chapter 3 - Razer's Secret
Submitted: January 14, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 888 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 152

Chapter 4 - Disbelief
Submitted: January 15, 2007 • Updated: January 16, 2007
Word count: 941 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 149

Chapter 5 - Torn Saves Ashelin
Submitted: January 16, 2007 • Updated: June 19, 2007
Word count: 1110 • Size: 5k • Comments: 3 • views: 187

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DarkJakAngel01 on July 29, 2008, 6:14:37 PM

DarkJakAngel01 on (Chapter: 5)
DarkJakAngel01Very nice!! You should do a sequel

DarkJakAngel01 on July 29, 2008, 6:06:17 PM

DarkJakAngel01 on (Chapter: 3)
DarkJakAngel01Wow....A lot of censors....were they always there?

TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 5:12:04 AM

TornsKickasskitty on (Chapter: 5)
TornsKickasskittyYay Im crying still!

TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 5:02:44 AM

TornsKickasskitty on (Chapter: 3)
TornsKickasskittyThis is gonna be good!

TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 4:58:22 AM

TornsKickasskitty on (Chapter: 2)
TornsKickasskittyTT^TT WRITE MORE I'm crying here!

TornsKickasskitty on June 10, 2007, 4:51:49 AM

TornsKickasskitty on (Chapter: 1)
TornsKickasskittyJak was righht *Crying*

Torn(still crying): Y are u crying?

Me: Cuz I like u Torn and I'd hate to see u hurt.

firefaerie1222 on January 19, 2007, 1:54:28 AM

firefaerie1222 on (Chapter: index)
firefaerie1222WOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!

that wuz pretTY AWESOME!!

DarkJakAngel01 on January 17, 2007, 9:02:12 AM

DarkJakAngel01 on (Chapter: index)
DarkJakAngel01This Story is so *beep*in AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Cookies 4 u!!!1

firefaerie1222 on January 2, 2007, 4:23:45 AM

firefaerie1222 on (Chapter: 2)
firefaerie1222add more. now. grrrrrr