Darkness Falls (A Naruto Tale)
Submitted December 14, 2007 Updated March 3, 2008 Status Incomplete | A Naruto story added with some of my oc's
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Welcome All Losers!
Submitted: December 14, 2007 • Updated: December 14, 2007
Word count: 671 • Size: 3k • Comments: 7 • views: 138
Chapter 2 - Who Is This Blonde Head Person!?
Submitted: December 15, 2007 • Updated: December 15, 2007
Word count: 494 • Size: 2k • Comments: 6 • views: 134
Chapter 3 - WHAT IS THAT MARKING!?
Submitted: December 16, 2007 • Updated: December 16, 2007
Word count: 667 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 113
Chapter 4 - Friend or Foe?
Submitted: December 17, 2007 • Updated: December 17, 2007
Word count: 549 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 113
Chapter 5 - Sadness and Sorrow
Submitted: December 18, 2007 • Updated: December 18, 2007
Word count: 574 • Size: 3k • Comments: 6 • views: 152
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Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:46:33 AM
Poor Luna! She sounds like she must've had a tough life...Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:44:22 AM
He's he FATHER?!?!Good one!
Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:36:22 AM
That's one violent girl! nice improvement on the punctuation too.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:31:19 AM
Nice, liking the girl! Bit more detail to pad it out would be good.Y0URIMAGINARYFRIEND on May 23, 2008, 1:28:55 AM
Nice intro, couple of typos, but it didn't interrupt the flow too much. Keep up the good work!winxgirl21 on March 25, 2008, 10:39:07 AM
Oh! i wonder what's going to happen? Good chapter. =)winxgirl21 on March 25, 2008, 10:37:16 AM
Zabuza's her father? I can't wait to see where this is going!winxgirl21 on March 25, 2008, 10:34:24 AM
hmm, I wonder if she'll stay or not.winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 11:23:02 PM
Good chapter. =) I wonder what the tattoo is for?winxgirl21 on March 15, 2008, 11:21:06 PM
Good first chapter. Maybe check the spelling a bit, and a few of the words that are capitalized in the sentences shouldn't be, like when you said "Haiku Fuming" it should have been 'Haiku fuming'. Other than that, great chapter! =)