Kutless

Hello! Just dropped here to tell you that you're a very good observer! Your criticism's at a skilled level, and it's accurate!

Sorry for such a small paragraph,but ya see Razputin and Beth are major spoilers to my comic....Yet because your such an awesome friend I could type you up some more later :D

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45983541/?qo=427&q=Zim&qh=boost%3Apopular+age_sigma%3A24h+age...


Last pairing Razputin and Beth.The power of psychotic love.I'll tell you know it is rather,frightening and utterly creepy.Now let me tell ya about Razputin,Razputin
was once a human,with a great tan.Now Razputin got sick,with a terrible illness
known as...MERCURY POISONING!!Now Razputin was only soul,lost in the world of afterlife,then he heard that he could sell his soul for a fake one,and with this false soul,he could live forever,upon EARTH!He would live once more,yet not as a human,for humans have real souls,so guess what?Razputin,when he was brought back,he wasn't a human boy with a great tan,no he was a cold artificial being,an android,in other worlds a robot.He was given his artificial body and false soul and sold his real soul to an insane woman known as Madam Elimy.Razputin's false soul contained his memories,from the day he was born to his death.He could remember everything,yet your wondering,why he sold his soul,well,you cannot walk
upon the earth once more with a real soul again,otherwise,you must strike a
deal with the reaper,and he'll often say no,so,he went with the false soul for he thought it was his only option to get back to Earth,which,probably was.
So here Razputin is,alive,and still in his old body just,his organs were replaced with a complex series of wires and coils and other tech-y stuff,cause ya know,his organs don't really work anymore.As for his skin,it was kinda torn apart...What?They had to get the robotic parts in there some how,and take out his organs....The only skin that was left was probably the
skin on his face.His tan is gone,cause ya know,when your dead,the color from your skin goes away,so now..He has pale skin..And his eyes were also
rip out,but don't worry he gets an exact replica of what his eyes looked like.
Oh and same thing with his hair,they could have let him keep his hair,but,no they got rid of that too.The only thing that remand was that small amount of skin upon his face.Well anyways,he went to his home,hoping his parents wouldn't be so shocked at his appearance.When he finally reached his home he was about to enter,yet he couldn't help but hear the sound of laughter,he peered through one of windows on his house,only to see the source of the
laughter was his mother and father along with his older brother,Norman.Seeing them so happy,he thinks that they have forgotten all about him.So he forgets about trying to reunite with his family,cause that's the only reason he wanted to sell his soul so that he may live again,to be with is family.He felt horrible,the seeping tears burning his false eyes.Now he
couldn't die,so he thinks that he will forever live with the pain of rejection.
That is,of course until Beth comes along.Beth,finds him mourning over himself,whilst Beth covered in her victim's blood.Beth,stares at him for a moment noticing that he was robot,just like she was.She feels overjoyed,cause within that deranged alloy skull of lies an idea.Her plan was if she could possibly persuade Razputin to join her,she could turn him into her own little weapon.It was so simple for Beth,due to the fact Razputin died so young,he still has an innocent mind.Making it easy for Beth to taint it.
She walks up to Razputin,still covered in blood,and asks him in the most angelic voice she could possibly perform,what was troubling him.Razputin,
finds her no thereat,and assumes the blood is something else,he willing tells
Beth what events happened within his life.Beth,feels a minor pity for him,yet
still goes on with her plan,she makes him think the wrong way,by twisting his
sorrow into anger.By saying that it was his brother that gave him mercury poisoning,and that it was his brother who killed so that he may gain their
parents love.Razputin is outraged,like Beth wanted him to be.Razputin joins Beth,and Beth turns him from a miserable little boy,to a insane megalomaniac...Maniac....She gives him all sorts of powers,and teaches him all sorts of things.She also,didn't see this coming,grows more fond of him.
For his destructiveness and evilness,and insanity,yet is held back by her cocky attitude.He also grows a crafty sort of intelligence as well.Razputin,also,grows fond of Beth,for her destructiveness and cruelty,and insanity.That and because,Beth is quite a powerful robotic being,and Razputin loves power.Beth is also taller than Razputin,but not by far,if Razputin were to stand on his tip toes he would reach her length.Another thing the remainder of Razputin's skin was removed and replaced with latex skin along with the rest of the exposed metal.He was given a uniform,that he choose,above this all is a link to what his uniform and facial expression looks like.He is quite similar to Zim,only his genuine form isn't green.In the link is a pic Zim and Dib and Gir,look at Zim,
Razputin's uniform looks like his only the pink parts are orange.Razputin shares the same expression,hair,eyes,and even the pak.Though he calls pod.Yet it shares the same purpose.Razputin can have green skin,yet that's
not his true form,in fact the green skin form is kinda like his battle form.
Now,onward with the story.Also,people call him Raz for short.


"Beth your my what-the-hell-is-my-false-stomach-doingreceiver! Lover, as you call it," Raz explained, clicking his tongueagainst his jagged teeth. "Therefore, I will make you mine. Turn youinto my... LOVE SLAVE MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" he trailed off hacking.
"Haveyou performed a lobotomy on yourself, Raz!?" Beth giggled. Shebegan cackling. "I--I'm not gonna be your love slave! Nor will theentire world fall to your pathetic charms!"
"Are you so sure!?" Raz snickered. He wrapped his entire tongue around Beth's ear. "Becuth you like et an you know eth!"
"You'reraping my ear!!" Beth laughed. She then decked Raz across the face,sending him flying backwards and rolling along the ground. "I--I didnot like the kiss! At all! Freak!"
Raz sat up, twigs in hisartificial hair. "You did, you did!!" he insisted. He then rose likethe undead, reaching for Beth with a mindless stare. "You want anotherand you knoooow iiitttt..."
"OH MY GOD!"
"COME TO MY BOSOM! I WILL MAKE YOU SUBMIT!"
"LikeHell!" Beth laughed hysterically, taking a step back. She clenched her fists and tooka fake battle stance. "You'll never turn me into one of your zombies! ThoughI will admit you are freaking the Hell out of me right now."
Raz stopped, rolled his tongue back into his mouth and smiled deviously."All right. I'll give you time to prepare yourself a defeated speech.Then I will take over both your mind -and- your body, Beth-worm," hesaid. Beth just twitched,with insane laughter. Raz pulled his backpack straps up hisshoulders and turned, walking off with his hands behind his back. Hehad the strut of a soldier to his footing.
"Resistance is futile. AHAHAHAHAMWAHAHAHAHA OH WHEEZE!"

umm....iknow i just met u and all but i saw u giving critisism comments to "myartstinks" .....can u help me with some of my pictures (the ones in the 1st or 2nd page)
u give reallly detailed critisism....i was wondering if you could do that for a few of mine...if u don't want to i understand since it would take lots of time to do that...
but if you can thatt would be great~! ^^ thanks
*goes to check out your gallery*

okay!^^ I understand. Im over my head in draw and other stuff as well. 0_o' its crazy!

Baha! I love how you love my charaters and style! If you ever feel like drawing one of them you can go ahead! Id love to have more fan-art!^^ I really like yours too! were kinda the same dontcha' think!? =D

Here's Breanna and Jazzal.Jazzal is a blue demon boy who betrayed an a queen's army.He is know as boy heartless.


Jazzal held Breanna tightly, the little girl's eyes half-open due toobvious sleepiness. She loved Jazzal. He was so comfortable. The lackof light set the scene even more. Breanna doubted that Jazzal wouldmind her dozing off right here. Jazzal brought his hand to Breanna'sface and gently brushed the long bunch of sky-blue hair out of the wayof her eyes. She smiled and Jazzal felt all warm inside. Her sapphireeyes were shiny, almost glassy, and for some reason Jazzal didn't wantthem to close. He missed those orbs of adorable blue even when sheblinked.

"I still think letting Baracia go was a bad idea." Jazzal noted.

Breanna blinked, her eyes never quite opening fully. Again, Jazzalwished those gorgeous eyes never closed, "She knows I have you, Jazzal.Alone, I was weak. But... when I'm with you... I feel a kind ofstrength I never knew I had."

Jazzal stroked the girl's hair, "Am I the only person who gives you that strength?"

Breanna lowered her gaze to around the base of his neck. Her cheeks went red, but her face looked almost sad, "Yes..."

Jazzal almost went 'Aww...'. He hoped nobody would ever try and hurtBreanna. She was just too cute. He held the little girl as though shewas a part of him, her tummy pressed against his. It was a moment theyboth know was special. A feeling that they both treasured.

"Baracia is asking for trouble if she fights both of us." Breannasaid, with the slightest hint of a smile. She was growing sleepy, andJazzal would be quite embarassed if she fell asleep atop him. "That'skinda why I feel better with you..."

"Breanna..." Jazzal muttered, "You look tired."

"No I'm not."

Jazzal smiled lovingly, "Yes you are."

Breanna sighed, "I don't wanna leave."

"I need to be up early in the morning, I have a few... jobs... to do."

"Promise me we'll meet up again soon?"

Jazzal nodded, "Without a doubt."

Breanna bent in, wanting to end the night on a wonderful note. Jazzalobliged, moving his own face closer to hers. They drew closer andcloser, until all Jazzal could see was the shiny, glassy blue sapphireeyes of his young lover. Their lips met and Jazzal held her tight. Tohim, she tasted sweet, her eyes drifting shut for a few seconds astheir kiss linked them together. Jazzal's hand drifted up and downBreanna's back, her dress like silk between his fingers.

Breanna's hands pushed down on his arms, gently forcing his hands awayfrom her back. Her tiny fingers interlocked with his, his warmthmelding with hers. He smelt of dirt, salt and the grass they were lyingupon. Together, the scent and taste were wonderful, for both. And for afew seconds, the dark and saddening memories of their past seemed tojust disappear, as did their attention of the world around them.Nothing mattered. Nothing but each other.


Breanna's eyes reopened as their kiss came gently apart. Jazzal's rubyeyes were alight with a fresh, young glow, a kind that only Breannacould coax. "I still don't wanna go..." she told him.

"Me neither." Jazzal admitted, and he embraced her, her head restingagainst his, her eyes closed with a mix of extreme comfort and extremehesitation.

"I love you, Jazzal." she whispered. Jazzal held her even closer.Breanna sniffed softly, not wanting the moment to end. But it had to.She had a home to return to, and Jazzal had to go back to wherever hecame from.

"I love you too, baby. Take care, ok?"

"I will." Breanna muttered, before Jazzal released her. They bothstood up, and Breanna turned away. Jazzal watched as she jumped intothe air, the streak of light forming behind the same color as thenight sky above. Her small form grew tinier as a got more distant, andeventually, Jazzal could not see her at all. He sighed indisappointment. If only all of life could be as enjoyable. He foldedhis arms and melted into smoke, which dispersed into the air likesteam.


Next up,last pairing,Beth and Razputin

That's okay my friend :D

Sure I do.I'll describe them to you first though.Okay,first pairing is Baracia and
Bulldog.Bulldog is Baracia's male counterpart.Looks just like her,just in a male
version(of course) his hair is more layered in spikes than soft curls,unlike Baracia's.He was given a gray robber looking kind of hat.His uniform he was
given is a military-like outfit,only in black and not green.Here's how he and Baracia get along together


He heard footfall and glanced over his shoulder. His face lit up.Something inside him went 'ZING!' again, and all those bad feelingswent away for a moment. But not even she could stave off his jitters."How's everything?"

Baracia joined him by the edge of the balcony, the night breezeruffling her hair and clothes. Her eyes seemed darker than the nightitself. Her hands rested on the edge of the guard rail and she stareddown into the metropolis below. She closed her eyes for a moment, and Bulldog tipped his head a little, not catching on. With the softest ofsighs, she told him, "Everything's just fine."

"You okay?"

"Isn't that what I just said?"

"You seem..." his big ebony eyes blinked. Baracia resisted the urge to stare into them, "upset by something."

"It's nothing." Baracia told him, turning away. "Everything is set and ready. We can begin at any time."

Bulldog blinked again. Was she like this for a reason? "Uh, that's...great news." Baracia didn't move. He felt she was trying to avoid him.Had something gone wrong? Was it something he said? He changed thesubject, wanting to know the answer to something that bugged him for awhile, "How is she?" he didn't say a name.

Baracia knew who he was referring to, though, "She's just fine. Stillresting. If things go well, we won't need to wake her." she lifted herhead a little, "She wasn't supposed to be used at all, but... witheverything that was going on... and all that Cyber space said to me, I..."she trailed off.

"Cyber space?"

Baracia jumped as though poked sharply in the sides, "Oh, n-nothing.It's nothing. I..." she sighed, realising she looked stupid, "I mustlook like an idiot, eh?"

"You are acting... kinda weird, whassup?"

Baracia shook her head, "Bulldog, I can't lie to you... something iswrong. Or at least, I think it is. I need you to tell me something."she turned a little, not quite enough for her to meet his eyes though,"I want you to be honest."

"Uh... ok."

Baracia fully whirled this time, facing him with an intent glower, "Do you think I am heartless?"

Bulldog gulped, "B-Baracia, why-"

"ANSWER ME!"

Bulldog quivered a little. Honesty, she wants? He mustered his courage,gulped, and replied, "You're not heartless! Not at all! I think you'rethe opposite, Baracia! Why would you ask me something like that?"

"Would you say I was heartless to those I didn't care about? To Belle, for example?"

"Well... you have a reason!"

"Not just a reason. A reputation!" Baracia seethed. "I think I broke that reputation earlier..."

"Why do you say that?"

"There was a person in the rebel group... someone named Cyber space. Hetold me that... I had a gift inside me that would affect countlesspeople, or something like that. Something real special. But I keepthinking that... with all I have done so far... people are only goingto hate me."

"Everyone has friends and enemies, Baracia." Bulldog interjected. It didn't help.

"What's more is... I think I grew a bit... attached to him."

"Uwah!" Bulldog gasped, "Uh... in what way?"

"As in, a kind of bond that shouldn't be there. I'm not supposed tocare about these people, I'm not supposed to... worry about theirwell being and stuff! For all I know, he'll be dead before this fight isover! Why do I feel worried about him? Something's not right! I'msupposed to be... spineless!"

"You mean you don't want to care about others?" the android asked, worried.

"Not like that... it's just..." she brought a hand to the side of herface. Skin against silky soft skin. No pain. Not this time, "Belle..."she whispered, "what have you done to me?"

Bulldog approached her, "I think that makes you an even better person."he told her, truthfully. He couldn't lie to her, either. "That's what Ilike about you... you've done all this... and I guess if I was inanother person's shoes, I'd hate you and want you dead... but whenthere's someone you truly want to love and protect, you can stillmanage to do that." he saw a smile come to her face. "That's what I..."he broke off, his cheeks flushing.

"Are you ready for this?" Baracia asked, moving closer, their littlebodies lit by the stars overhead and the city lights below. Smoke fromthe burning city to the south was still rising, forming a sheeted hazebeyond the lower ridges, far from the danger zone. Soon, more smokewould join it.

Bulldog nodded, "Yeah. I am. I guess this is what you kept me aroundfor. And... I guess if you had faith in me to help you, then there'snothing that I should be worried about." he giggled a little, "Andyourself?"

Baracia threw her gaze toward the city, its sparkly lit mass engulfingthe valley below. It didn't seem all that big, really, "I've never beenmore ready in my life. But..." she turned back to him, "I still feel sounprepared."

"If we could take out this city," Bulldog muttered, "We could take out the world."

Baracia smiled again, that little grin that made Bulldog's steely heartmelt into goo, "I've told you before, Bulldog. The world isn't enough.Where we're going... this will seem like nothing at all."

Bulldog went red again, "I-I'm still nervous... even with what you toldme. I just keep thinking something bad is going to happen."

Baracia whispered to him, her cheeks going a deeper pink, "How about Igive you something that will help the anxiety." she placed her lefthand on his shoulder, and brought the right hand to his cheek. His eyesflew wide and his face went ripe-red. He felt something incrediblytender touch his lips, and in those few startled moments, all he sawwas her face, her beautiful black eyes drifting shut as her lips methis. The shock wore off quickly as some new feeling took over,something that drove him into relaxation. His eyes, too, slid closedand he put his arms around the girl and pulled her close. He had neverfelt so warm before. Never felt so... so incredible. Her hand brushedhis cheek gently, and time seemed to stop. He had no idea just how longthe kiss lasted. But even their little moment of unified eternity wasnot enough, to him. When they broke apart, there was a shine in hereyes he had never seen before, and a look on her face that he couldn'tquite describe with words. He spoke without thinking, and he broughthis hands to his mouth, covering it in sudden embarassment. His lipswere still tingling.

The look on Baracia's face seemed to intensify. Was she about to cry?"You don't have to tell me that, Bulldog, I've known all along," sheembraced him again, resting her head on his chest, "You know what else?"

"What?" was his whisper, almost too soft to hear.

"I love you too."

Tears came to Bulldog's eyes and he could not restrain them. Holdingher tight, he vowed, "I'm going to do my very best for you, because Iknow you did the same for me!"

"Hey, hey..." Baracia muttered, soft and angelic. She was a differentperson entirely, off the battlefield. Bulldog wished she was like thisall the time. "Just come back alive, and we can celebrate together. I'mnot asking you for any more than that." She kissed his cheek and let goof him, "Go get 'em, tiger." she giggled at how red his face was. She'dhave to nickname him 'Bashful' after all.

"I will." he promised, "I know I will."



That was Baracia and Bulldog.I paired Belle with Zim since,well,my cousin
thought it was a good idea and at the moment I had no ideas.It's not really as
lovey-dovey as Bulldog and Baracia.Yet it is pretty cute,ya know,it's one of those relationships,were one loves(Belle) and the other has no idea why the other on is being so nice (Zim)



Zim was staring at Belle. Such emotion triggered in the humanoid machinewas completely out of the ordinary, and definitely not what Zim had inmind for this occaision. He was breathing shallowly, upset that he hadhurt the little girl in such a way. It was not what he had wanted, andhe had to do something, fast, "Belle... I did this as a thankyoupresent-"

"THANK YOU!? A THANKYOU PRESENT!?" screamed Belle, well and truly overthe edge with grief, "What kind of sick, twisted mind would give a girllike me the body of her dead father as a THANKYOU PRESENT!?"

Zim was frantic, "Calm down, Belle, calm down! I'll show ya what I had in mind. Look. I've repaired him!"

Belle suddenly calmed, "W-What??"

"I repaired him. He was killed because Baracia destroyed his spinalcord, so I rebuilt it. Robotics are my thing, so I just fitted him withall these implants and a stimulator to keep his heart going and stuff.Once the first jolt is given to the heart, I think he'll live!"

Belle wiped the tears from her gorgeous white eyes, "Zim, I... I don't know what-"

"You don't have to say anything. I'll just switch him on and see what happens. 'Kay?"

Belle nodded, and Zim ducked down under the table, "Okay... okay..."Belle muttered, a churning vortex of emotions flowing through her.Anger. Fear. Relief. Anxiety. Grief. Angst. All of them swirled withinher like a tornado, not spitting out a definite feeling to stick with.At that moment, Belle glanced at Breanna, who was still staring at X'sbody calmly as though it was nothing special. She envied her, all of asudden. Breanna never would have to go through this kind of torture.Not unless Belle fixed her. Breanna was supposed to carry on the dreamof X's to create the perfect little girl. Baracia had strayed from it,incorporating all kinds of foreign technology into her, becoming lessof a person and more like a made computer. Breanna, however, had lostthe power to feel happy or sad, to share excitement or foreboding. Shewas almost like those robots from science fiction. Cold. Steely.Unfeeling. Belle growled under her breath. She wished things were backto normal. That she was the only one of her kind that existed. That herfather was alive. And that he loved her more than anything.

Zim popped up next to them again and removed the rest of the sheet.Bell and Breanna gawked. Machine parts and cables trailed out of X'sfront like some sort of gory, multi-armed creature that had just sprungforth from his gut. But if what Zim said was true, this would keep Xalive. Gir gawked, "Ooooohhh!"

Zim smiled, "An Autonomous Life Supp-"

Gir asked, "What is it?"

Zim repeated, "An Autonomous Li-"

"WHAT IS IT!!??" screamed Gir.

Zim glared at Gir, "An Autonomous Life Support machine. Capable ofkeeping our good friend alive, at the expense of his dashing looks."Zim clapped his gloved hands together and rubbed eagerly, "Wanna seesome magic?"

"Magic!?" squealed Gir, "I love magic! Saw me in half!"

Zim groaned.

Belle's eyes did the cutesie puppydog-eye thing, "If this works Zim, I won't know how to thank you..."

Zim chuckled nervously, blushing, "Oh, uh, well, I'm sure... I'm sureyou'll eventually... uh... find a way to, uh... thank me..."

Belle suddenly threw her arms around Zim, emracing him. For a gynoid,she felt incredibly warm against him. Zim went a darker hue of green,typical Irken blushing, as Belle muttered, "I think this will do fornow..." Zim was still bright green as Belle let go of him, the littlegirl's eyes locking with his. He felt oddly fuzzy on the inside all ofa sudden. "Come on," Belle muttered quietly, "Let's do this..."

"Wha? Do what?" Zim muttered, distracted by the cute little girl.

"Bring back my daddy!" she said in a playful commanding tone, pointingat the large table. She grinned, as though about to experience a wholenew kind of joy.

Zim chuckled, "Alrighty, here I go then. Invader Zim, theRessurec-tor." he chuckled to himself, "I shall bring back the dead anduse them to take over this miserable planet! MUAHAHAHA! There will benothing stopping me this time, for I am Zim! Worship me! WORSHIP ME!"



I hope I got Zim there in character...I MADE HIM SAY HIS NAME LIKE SIX TIMES!!Or seven...I can't remember


I'll get the other two parings tomorrow.