SkyChan

hi! ^_^ wanna be friends? ^_^how do i add u to my friends list?

Thanks and no problem. Hope everything goes well for you too lol.

Good first chapter, your off to a good start. About the title...Id make it something like 'Let Me Live.' Short, simple, you know.

Yeah you can show me each chapter as you go, i dont mind helping.

K kool. Im not much help in stories, just with ideas or concepts if anything. Plus I dont know your style of writing.
But If I had to suggest how to start it, Id say you should start by introducing the main characters, you know kinda like theyre past, personality and whatnot....But since they're not all together its like having a POV that follows each of them individually, up until the time that they reunite. Then its normal POV ( I guess thats third person POV). Just ask more if you need/want help.

Yeah I posted the art trade :P Finally

Hey, my part of the art trade is almost complete. I just have to do the background..Should take some of today then Ill post it.

Hey, about the art trade: does your character have that cap on in the picture u showed me? Or is her hair just in the ponytail?

thanks for the fav! ^__^

come see my pics