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Oh Dear II: A Sequel

Patrick has finally set up a place for n00bs, though its a day away from Varrock, so he and Aay hardly get to see eachother, and a new power has arisen.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter 1
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 1221 • Size: 6k • Comments: 9 • views: 300

Chapter 2 - Framed
Submitted: April 8, 2006 • Updated: April 8, 2006
Word count: 1518 • Size: 7k • Comments: 2 • views: 260

Chapter 3 - A Talk with the King
Submitted: April 16, 2006 • Updated: April 16, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 3 • views: 249

Chapter 4 - A Visit to the White Knights Castle
Submitted: April 20, 2006 • Updated: April 20, 2006
Word count: 1811 • Size: 9k • Comments: 1 • views: 252

Chapter 5 - Hippity Hop
Submitted: April 28, 2006 • Updated: April 28, 2006
Word count: 1060 • Size: 5k • Comments: 0 • views: 241

Chapter 6 - Stolen Banana
Submitted: May 7, 2006 • Updated: May 7, 2006
Word count: 1225 • Size: 6k • Comments: 2 • views: 258

Chapter 7 - The Twist of the Tongue
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2778 • Size: 34k • Comments: 1 • views: 255

Chapter 8 - Fire
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2219 • Size: 27k • Comments: 1 • views: 282

Chapter 9 - Aay's Dangerous Secret
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2163 • Size: 28k • Comments: 0 • views: 272

Chapter 10 - Dark History
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2004 • Size: 23k • Comments: 1 • views: 235

Chapter 11 - Betrayed Again
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2855 • Size: 35k • Comments: 0 • views: 271

Chapter 12 - Scream of Fury
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2197 • Size: 25k • Comments: 0 • views: 279

Chapter 13 - Final Finale
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 5057 • Size: 60k • Comments: 1 • views: 268

Chapter 14 - Epilogue
Submitted: March 30, 2006 • Updated: March 30, 2006
Word count: 2057 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 252

Comments

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shadowdude on April 16, 2006, 8:48:31 PM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 3)
shadowdudeYAY! Lady aay is safe! That ragetti seems supsicious...the murder maybe? lol, dont tell me if he is or not, i dont want the story ruined. anyway, plz continue as fast as possible.

P.s: I know how to get more than one easter ring, wanna know how?

Rancor125 on April 16, 2006, 12:26:28 PM

Rancor125 on (Chapter: 3)
Rancor125Creepy and cool. Thanks ^_^

shadowdude on April 15, 2006, 8:40:38 PM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 2)
shadowdudebtw, im a zamorakian, im not entirerly evil though, just hated by many and thought to be evil, so i dont really help others and dont let them help me. Basiclly started in wildy when i got attacked by a clan and i killed their leader, then they put me up for wanted. Now ppl are after me and trying to take me to wildy. Because i'm getting so strong, the reward is getting bigger, so i dont trust many ppl. Anyway, when u put me in your story, DONT FORGET, im a zamorakian, not a saradominist.

Rancor125 on April 9, 2006, 11:19:46 AM

Rancor125 on (Chapter: 1)
Rancor125Oh, I have other info I left out:

I have a light blue fremminik cape, not black and I have a scar across one eye, so I wear an eyepatch except for in battle.

Seeya! Hope to see more.

REVENGE OVER EVIL. THE RANCOR

Twaksak on April 9, 2006, 7:09:10 AM

Twaksak on (Chapter: 1)
Twaksakhey mustard girl.
i really loved your story and im so happy that ur writing a sequal. ur really talented. well, i was wondering if i could maybe, sortof, just get a part in the story.I CAN BE REALLY EVIL!!! MWAHAHAHAH!!!! honestly, if u wanted. Just saw that u wanted evil people. Just a peenie weenie really small part would b fine. IF u said no i would understand... ur writing ROX anyway!! Plz reply on my profile

Rancor125 on April 9, 2006, 6:39:24 AM

Rancor125 on (Chapter: 2)
Rancor125YAY! Another chapter! PEALSE do more! Once again, I LOVE THIS STORY.

REVENGE OVER EVIL. THE RANCOR

shadowdude on March 31, 2006, 9:17:58 PM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 1)
shadowdudep.s.

oh yeah, i also have a ring of wealth and an ammy of glory, and a legends cape.

shadowdude on March 31, 2006, 9:10:08 PM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 1)
shadowdudeive alredy asked if i can be in, but i forgot to tell u some things about my character:

Username: Shadow 097. (Ppl just call me shadow, but my friends call me slayer.)

armor/weapon: rune and drag long, but for the story, can u just give me full white? (White weapon changes, cause i just use any white weapon.)

place where i live: i have rented out a room in white knights castle.

if u need any more info anout my acount, just ask.

Rancor125 on March 31, 2006, 5:20:02 AM

Rancor125 on (Chapter: 1)
Rancor125Alright heres my application:

Name: Ragetti
Surname: The Rancor

Appearance: All mithril armor and black cape, "Flame" colored (orange) hair.mithril small shield

Weapon: Addamentile long sword

Personality: Tough hardened(you chose evil or not), experienced person. Fought in many battles and has many scars.

Talents: Skilled in melee, runecrafting, ship sailing, runs tavern in Port Sarim

I dont need to be big in the story. I dont like overwelming people with work. Bye

RR



shadowdude on March 31, 2006, 4:27:40 AM

shadowdude on (Chapter: 1)
shadowdudeLOVE YOUR STORY, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!