Short Stories
Submitted May 27, 2008 Updated October 27, 2009 Status Incomplete | just thought id put all the short stories in one place so that i dont confuse myself when i add a new chap to a story
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Chapters
Chapter 0 - Frozen Rose
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: August 26, 2009
Word count: 881 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 318
Chapter 1 - Change of a Death
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
Word count: 2277 • Size: 11k • Comments: 1 • views: 237
Chapter 2 - A Surprise Everywhere
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
Word count: 850 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 217
Chapter 3 - Hadesyell
Submitted: May 27, 2008 • Updated: May 27, 2008
Word count: 1925 • Size: 10k • Comments: 1 • views: 216
Chapter 4 - DemonSlayer
Submitted: June 2, 2008 • Updated: October 21, 2008
Word count: 1264 • Size: 6k • Comments: 1 • views: 238
Chapter 5 - Bash's Memories
Submitted: June 3, 2008 • Updated: January 17, 2009
Word count: 1981 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 208
Chapter 6 - Dark
Submitted: October 21, 2008 • Updated: October 21, 2008
Word count: 431 • Size: 2k • Comments: 4 • views: 201
Chapter 7 - An Echo in My Heart
Submitted: December 13, 2008 • Updated: December 13, 2008
Word count: 874 • Size: 4k • Comments: 3 • views: 237
Chapter 8 - Last Memories of Breton
Submitted: March 10, 2009 • Updated: March 10, 2009
Word count: 1710 • Size: 8k • Comments: 1 • views: 239
Chapter 9 - Random Thoughts of a Suicide Letter
Submitted: October 27, 2009 • Updated: October 27, 2009
Word count: 505 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 211
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fipi on October 27, 2009, 10:24:59 PM
Very deep, and sad. I hope you're not describing yourself :Pgigglebutton on October 27, 2009, 9:48:46 PM
=( This made me very sad. In fact, so sad I don't even have anything intelligent to say about it.fipi on March 12, 2009, 12:41:01 PM
Cool I liked it, but too bad there was not more of a backstory to support it. The breaking apart of Breton's and Bladin's friendship and Breton's inner conflict was the coolest/most interesting part I think.fipi on March 12, 2009, 9:26:41 AM
Very cool, I like the title. And the colors are nice too. I'm curious as well, is this based on a true story? :D For some reason I thought of L from Death Note when I tried to visualize it, but then I was like, "nahh, L wouldn't fit very well"... but who knows, maybe L had a romantic side...redclaw on March 12, 2009, 11:20:18 AM
lolz, its not based on a real story... atleast i dont think so..atleast not any story realted to me :Pjcizcraz on March 9, 2009, 11:32:30 AM
omgg...that was sad...i dont really get it...much... but yeah it was sad...im like crying right now---literally...my eyes are all wet and red ..yet im lol-ing right now---not really out loud...how is this possible ... lol...jcizcraz on March 9, 2009, 11:26:37 AM
awww~~ lol is this based on a real story like a lot of your others?? :D hehe
fipi on October 24, 2008, 8:34:02 AM
This is cool, but I want to know what's happening!! You should post the rest of it if you have more. :D Johnny's dialogue (monologue?) is good, it makes a scary/suspenseful mood.redclaw on November 26, 2008, 7:08:33 AM
random as heck, eh? lol.... its just something i thought about as i was thinking about ghosts... sisters are always unpredictable... watch it man :PZenith on August 28, 2008, 6:37:18 AM
This is very cool! I see some parellels to New Heart, but this is better! Why dont you work on this a little more and make like series of them? Or would that defeat the whole point?jcizcraz on June 4, 2008, 1:09:45 PM
Wouldn't it be nice if more people gave attention to things like that?? ...btw, that was a very good description of Brazil...jcizcraz on June 4, 2008, 12:56:24 PM
Wow... I like this story :pjcizcraz on June 4, 2008, 12:46:00 PM
...you have an amazing imagination...a weird imagination...but all the same, the story was entertaining...fipi on June 4, 2008, 11:49:41 AM
Sweeeet, this one is cool. It's nice to read background stories like this. Poor Bash... stupid elementalist elders.redclaw on June 4, 2008, 12:05:05 PM
thanks.....yeah.......i wanst in the mood to keep writing on the main story....so i just thought id give a random background info that didnt need to be there......but now since i put it on....i will have to make something about it on the main story :PSomeoneWhoLikesClouds on June 2, 2008, 1:10:58 PM
Nice stories!Keep up the good work.
fipi on June 2, 2008, 12:49:30 PM
Cool idea. Pretty freaky. Kinda weird with all the demons and stuff. Vlaz is cool, and his problem of not being able to be with other people is interesting and sad.