From Alone to Acceptance
Submitted July 12, 2007 Updated March 16, 2008 Status Incomplete | Lynn, Iris, Loray and Joanne and now Trystan have been taken from there families because of their mental abilities, and most of them feel alone in the world. They go on a journey to find acceptance in the world and in their families.
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Prologue
Submitted: July 12, 2007 • Updated: August 25, 2007
Word count: 1526 • Size: 7k • Comments: 3 • views: 117
Chapter 2 - Chapter 1
Submitted: July 21, 2007 • Updated: July 22, 2007
Word count: 1964 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 83
Chapter 3 - Chapter 2
Submitted: August 12, 2007 • Updated: August 12, 2007
Word count: 2786 • Size: 13k • Comments: 3 • views: 82
Chapter 4 - Chapter 3
Submitted: August 16, 2007 • Updated: August 16, 2007
Word count: 491 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 82
Chapter 5 - Chapter 4
Submitted: October 1, 2007 • Updated: October 1, 2007
Word count: 743 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 76
Chapter 6 - Chapter 5
Submitted: October 1, 2007 • Updated: October 1, 2007
Word count: 501 • Size: 2k • Comments: 3 • views: 76
Chapter 7 - Chapter 6
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 3, 2007
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Chapter 8 - Chapter 7
Submitted: November 3, 2007 • Updated: November 20, 2007
Word count: 1240 • Size: 6k • Comments: 0 • views: 78
Chapter 9 - Chapter 8
Submitted: November 23, 2007 • Updated: November 23, 2007
Word count: 1704 • Size: 8k • Comments: 2 • views: 69
Chapter 10 - Chapter
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: February 23, 2008
Word count: 341 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 82
Chapter 11 - Chapter 10
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: February 23, 2008
Word count: 1963 • Size: 10k • Comments: 0 • views: 101
Chapter 12 - Chapter 11
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: February 23, 2008
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Chapter 13 - Chapter 12
Submitted: February 23, 2008 • Updated: February 23, 2008
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Chapter 14 - Chapter 13
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
Word count: 576 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 75
Chapter 15 - Chapter 14
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
Word count: 3603 • Size: 18k • Comments: 0 • views: 93
Chapter 16 - Chapter 15
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
Word count: 1885 • Size: 9k • Comments: 0 • views: 78
Chapter 17 - Chapter 16
Submitted: March 16, 2008 • Updated: March 16, 2008
Word count: 2244 • Size: 11k • Comments: 0 • views: 84
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BloodCrystalDragon on November 23, 2007, 7:29:55 AM
waterbender00 on November 23, 2007, 7:47:48 AM
BloodCrystalDragon on November 23, 2007, 7:54:00 AM
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waterbender00 on October 1, 2007, 11:11:33 AM
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waterbender00 on October 1, 2007, 11:32:04 AM
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BloodCrystalDragon on August 16, 2007, 4:55:55 AM
waterbender00 on August 16, 2007, 8:53:32 PM
BloodCrystalDragon on August 17, 2007, 2:04:49 AM
Oh, and also, last night was an open house at my school, but I was so sick i couldn't go--I'd had that lymphatic massage, and because I'm so in tune with my body, the rush of everyhting moving again so suddenly makes me completely sick to me stomach. *winces* I can't even see straight when I sit down; that's how bad it is. e_e SO I'm very mad I had to miss it...
But my mom and dad went to the school to meet my teachers, and they came home RAVING about them, and the classes--my mom said that when they exited the building, my dad's eyes were STILL huge, and he was shocked into silence. XD And you know how hard it is to impress my dad!
One of the classes I'm taking, AVID (for people serious about going to college, and apparently you have to have a certain level of intelligence--or rather, you have to meet a certain number, or higher, on all these weird tests, and a whole bunch of other difficult stuff...), I already ADORE. There are roughly 2k students at Leto, and out of ALL of them, only 50 people are accepted to take the class. *Dies in shock that I "made" it" I didn't apply or anything--just asked if I could get in. O_o;
But check this out--you know how you need binders for every class? Well, if you're in AVID, you only need ONE binder for ALL the classes!!!! AND, my teacher gets info ahead of time if we have tests, quizzes, and because pretty much everyone in AVID has the same classes--dif times, of course, and naturally we don't all have the EXACT same classes, but pretty much--he separates us into small little groups, tells us what they'll be on, and then allows us all to study together!!! AND, they call in tutors twice a week (MATH tutors!!!) to help us if we need it!!!
Oh my gosh, there is so much we do in this class, and all my classes--like my school has pretty much realized that people learn differently, and are changing things. My culinary class? MY period gets to SERVE people! Like a restaurant! Normally it's 75% book work and only 25% hands-on, but due to a communication problem they had, it'll be more like 90% hands-on, and only 10% book work! CHYAH! And in my bio class, we do lab work VERY WEEK pretty much!!!!!!
AND, in my french class, every summer, if you can get the money, permission, and wish to go, then my teacher takes you to france!!!!!!! Dunno where, just france, which, hey--It's EUROPE, so who CARES?! XD
I can't wait to start. *Smirks*
Oh, and mom dragged my school clothes shopping yesterday. Got 3 jackets, and a shirt--all of which are both practical and somewhat nice looking. e_e (Two of my jackets are denim; one's dyed a reddish terra cotta; it's so cool.)
......Got four more pairs of jeans. XD Hey, it's practical, fashionable, useable for years, and suitable for more then just one occasion!
.....XD ^^; Bought two of the jeans and the other stuff at this place in the mall called Chico's--it's sooo cool! Not necessarily the clothing, although it has some very nice stuff, but the sizes and help are SO awesome--they make you feel like you've been friends for years! :D My mom and the person who helped us (she's there specifically to help people who don't like shopping, don't know what sizes, or don't know what looks good on them; she's so awesome) actually exchanged phone numbers and are planning on getting together. XD *Cracks up laughing*
Oh, and the sizes? Here's the basic--
Size 0, size 1, size 2, size 3. And half's as well.
That's it.
So I now have clothing that says I'm a size two!!! And the jeans, size 1 or 1 1/2 !!!
*Dies* I love that. From now on I'm just saying that I'm a size 2, on average. XD *Smirks* It's definitely a boost for your ego, let me tell you. O_o;
...And apparently, I have a tiny waist. *Twitches* And great skin. And hair. And--
you get the picture?
...............I almost blushed. e_e Bleh.
Shutting up now. XD
waterbender00 on August 17, 2007, 5:24:06 AM
And yesterday I finally got my hair thinned out, my head feels so much lighter even when wet
That is so cool Miss America. I'm a size 5 in juniors so in that store I may be a size 1 or 0. *laughs*
I'm jealous of your school. -_-
Lucky. (for france) I meet someone at the open house that reminds me so much of Curt and he's on the swim team. His name is Scott.
Can you send me an email to, you know, tell me more about AVID I want to see if Sickles has it for next year?
Tomorrow I'm gonna go to the mall with my grandma to see a movie and for me try on DRESSES at Dilards and Macy and JCPenny's to you know spend some time with her while I can (She's Really Sick Prayers are appreciated)So if I can after I do the stuff with my grandma I was wondering If I can spend the night at your house for ONE last night of INSANITY before school starts on Monday.
PS I saw Joe yesterday he has lost alot of weight and HE'S GOT HIS PERMIT!!!! I HAVEN'T EVEN TAKEN THE TWO TESTS YET!!!
I think that was your's and mine's longest comment ever on FAC.
I think I'm done.
BloodCrystalDragon on August 17, 2007, 7:20:47 AM
YEAH, of course you can come over!!! :D I just baked a chocolate cake, yummy... and, I have the Whitney Houston and Brandy version of Cinderella that we could watch, lol.
Really, he's lost weight and got his permit? Good for him! ^^ And yes, I'll pray for your grandma and pass on the word. :)
See ya tomorrow! :D
waterbender00 on August 17, 2007, 11:39:25 AM
BloodCrystalDragon on August 17, 2007, 12:09:46 PM
BloodCrystalDragon on August 12, 2007, 10:32:05 AM
What a beta is is... basically this:
They fix spelling, grammar (unless intentional), punctuation--POSSIBLY switch some things around to allow the flow better, but mainly they just kind of spruce it up a bit. Fix the mistakes; mainly spelling and punctuation. All depends on what you want the beta for, I suppose....
Anywho, if you want me to, I'm quite happy to do it; you send it over to me--oh, I dunno; via email or a note to me on here or dA--and once I beta it, I send it back to you and then you post it. (Don't forget, if you ever use a beta--or more then one--that you MUST put at the bottom, before anything in the A/N, the name of your beta.)
Very good; I like the evolution of Lynn, lol. XD I'm sorry, but she is soooo my fave right now, heeheehee.
waterbender00 on August 12, 2007, 8:30:07 PM
BloodCrystalDragon on August 12, 2007, 10:04:18 PM
Then I actually read the comment that was replying to, and was all, "....Oh."
XD
SCORE! I knew I loved her for a reason. XD *Glomp* Hey, I had a good week's sleep, I'm willing to give up a glomp. ^_~
Hmm. Send me prologue through chapter 2, and chapter three when it's finished; and put a note in the summary that says--oh, I don't know--BEING BETA'D-- or something like that. *Shrugs* It's just a way to say that you're kind of doing a mass-edit (not you, but someone else. But...you get what I mean, lol.).
Yay, I'm two people's beta! *Does a little dance* Fwee. x3
waterbender00 on August 12, 2007, 8:28:55 PM
AnimeAngel87 on July 30, 2007, 3:19:32 AM
waterbender00 on July 30, 2007, 10:43:43 AM
BloodCrystalDragon on July 19, 2007, 7:05:56 AM
Despite the critiscm(sp) (which was mainly a lot of words to describe something really small...lol), I think you did a really good job; you're really improving in your writing. I can see the difference! *Cheers* Great prologue!