September 28, 2007
September 28, 2007
|I told this story to my brother when he was four (he's five now) and I liked it so mmuch I had to write it down :D|
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eNVyMe on May 16, 2008, 3:08:56 PM
bajachick on October 5, 2007, 5:19:06 AM
Shan-chan on September 30, 2007, 3:18:17 AM
I remember you from my fangirl days!
And you're better now.
Awesome stuff, i'll click around and comment if i can find time. Just want 'cha to know you're stuff is great.
girlinpink2 on September 27, 2007, 2:14:48 PM
girlinpink2 on September 27, 2007, 2:12:51 PM
girlinpink2 on September 26, 2007, 3:41:18 PM
girlinpink2 on September 26, 2007, 3:38:13 PM
And don't worry, silly. I write poetry. I don't steal it. People who steal poetry... it's just tacky. And wrong. I haven't posted anything new here. I'll give you something since you shared something with me!
My beloved’s skin is not the smoothest
And tusks have I seen whiter than his teeth.
Yet e'er think of trade I never wouldst:
Richer than gold is what is underneath.
His smile does not illuminate a room,
My darling’s curls are unlike smoothest silk
But his soul a thousand suns would consume
Trust I have that I he would never bilk.
My love’s feet grow large and odd I can see.
His arms too thin and his legs too flimsy.
Still his rippling words are a soothing sea,
With calming whispers his voice reaches me.
In the end his inner beauty prevails.
Not the external, but in his details.
I wrote that for an assignment in English class in HS. ^_^
girlinpink2 on September 26, 2007, 3:15:47 PM
It's awesome! I'd go and comment each piece separately, but I am unfortunately too lazy and would possibly say similar things in each comment. But, yes. It's awesome. Sincerely. ^_^
And I'm sure you'll make it as a pro.
And if not, hey, why not a rockstar? Dreaming is not a bad thing. What type of rock do you like?
I want to become a famous Opera singer. Or a mermaid (Okay... that's far-fetched, I know).