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Tear & Haelo *Their story from the start*

Hey Everybody! If you like Tear and Haelo I suggest you read the story of how they came to be. I really hope you like it, but please read it. This is a Romance/Comedy/Drama story. YAYNESS I CANT BELIEVE I'M WRITING A STORY!!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Angel come back to me...
Submitted: May 1, 2005 • Updated: May 1, 2005
Word count: 760 • Size: 4k • Comments: 7 • views: 261

Chapter 2 - My Saviour!
Submitted: May 8, 2005 • Updated: May 8, 2005
Word count: 2024 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 295

Chapter 3 - Bliss Is A Fear That It Will End
Submitted: May 8, 2005 • Updated: May 8, 2005
Word count: 1206 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 305

Chapter 4 - The Meeting Of Insanity
Submitted: June 6, 2005 • Updated: June 6, 2005
Word count: 1340 • Size: 7k • Comments: 4 • views: 263

Chapter 5 - The Secret Meeting At Midnight...
Submitted: June 9, 2005 • Updated: June 9, 2005
Word count: 1594 • Size: 8k • Comments: 6 • views: 211

Chapter 6 - "What's so funny?"
Submitted: July 17, 2005 • Updated: July 17, 2005
Word count: 1371 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 474

Chapter 7 - Sing that song to me...
Submitted: July 19, 2005 • Updated: July 19, 2005
Word count: 5702 • Size: 31k • Comments: 6 • views: 282

Chapter 8 - Why Do You Love Me?
Submitted: July 21, 2005 • Updated: July 21, 2005
Word count: 1540 • Size: 8k • Comments: 5 • views: 290

Chapter 9 - Memories Not Worth Living...
Submitted: July 26, 2005 • Updated: July 26, 2005
Word count: 2721 • Size: 14k • Comments: 2 • views: 182

Chapter 10 - Be In The Band?
Submitted: August 7, 2005 • Updated: August 7, 2005
Word count: 2267 • Size: 11k • Comments: 2 • views: 281

Chapter 11 - So Much Like'er
Submitted: August 26, 2005 • Updated: August 26, 2005
Word count: 1986 • Size: 10k • Comments: 2 • views: 278

Chapter 12 - And Jealosy Takes Me Over
Submitted: August 27, 2005 • Updated: August 27, 2005
Word count: 1245 • Size: 6k • Comments: 5 • views: 298

Chapter 13 - Rain Cascades Down Her Face...
Submitted: November 19, 2005 • Updated: November 19, 2005
Word count: 670 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 196

Comments

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Liedetector16 on July 29, 2005, 9:48:16 AM

Liedetector16 on (Chapter: 9)
Liedetector16You're right. That was intense. I admire the characteristics you gave to the girl. It's funny how you can admire a character when you don't know hardly anything about them. Plus, they're not even real! Great chapter! I await the next!!!!

forbidden_child on July 26, 2005, 8:22:30 AM

forbidden_child on (Chapter: 9)
forbidden_childThat was so sad *cries* poor Haelo and his girlfriend whatever her name was. This was intense and totally explains why Haelo is the way he is. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. ^^

forbidden_child on July 26, 2005, 8:09:11 AM

forbidden_child on (Chapter: 8)
forbidden_childYay! It's another chapter this one was great a bit short but oh well u were tired i'm going to read the next chapter now!!! ^^

pinktiger300 on July 21, 2005, 11:48:35 AM

pinktiger300 on (Chapter: 8)
pinktiger300I NEED MORE! *glomps ben*
me:wheeeeeee this is more fun than i thought!

pinktiger300 on July 21, 2005, 11:37:46 AM

pinktiger300 on (Chapter: 7)
pinktiger300I LUV THIS CHAP! MUST READ more! YOU HAV TA DO MORE!

Liedetector16 on July 21, 2005, 11:04:30 AM

Liedetector16 on (Chapter: 8)
Liedetector16You'll be happy to know I have no "suggestions". ^ ^ AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! This chapter... I loved it and hated it at the same time. It was sweet and well written, but something about it irks me. I don't expect that I'll be able to explain. At least I know why things will turn out the way they will now (as in Tear and Healo being together.) The beginning was.... interesting. Internal conflict. Very kool. Very real. Yet somewhat unique for one's own character. O.o I know, I'm speaking non-human now!
Now, where's that story you were gonna put up? The one your teacher read? ^ ^ Keep writing!

pinktiger300 on July 21, 2005, 10:27:44 AM

pinktiger300 on (Chapter: 6)
pinktiger300I LOLVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOO MUCH! SO kyutt!

pinktiger300 on July 21, 2005, 10:01:29 AM

pinktiger300 on (Chapter: 5)
pinktiger300I agee with Liedetector16 but its ur chars. I luff THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!

pinktiger300 on July 21, 2005, 10:01:21 AM

pinktiger300 on (Chapter: 5)
pinktiger300I agee with Liedetector16 but its ur chars. I luff THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!

pinktiger300 on July 21, 2005, 9:35:21 AM

pinktiger300 on (Chapter: 4)
pinktiger300I luff this chapter!! MORRRRRRRRRRRRRE MUST READ MOORE!