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Kingdom Hearts: Hall of Abandon: Part One

After a mysterious hooded man tells of a myterious entrance to Kingdom Hearts, Sora and his friends are launched on another adventure.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Paradise
Submitted: October 10, 2008 • Updated: October 12, 2008
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Chapter 2 - Confrontation
Submitted: October 12, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
Word count: 539 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 151

Chapter 3 - Just a Game...
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
Word count: 487 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 123

Chapter 4 - All in Spite
Submitted: October 15, 2008 • Updated: October 15, 2008
Word count: 348 • Size: 1k • Comments: 2 • views: 139

Chapter 5 - Trinity
Submitted: October 16, 2008 • Updated: October 16, 2008
Word count: 767 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 157

Chapter 6 - The Half Heart Key
Submitted: October 19, 2008 • Updated: October 19, 2008
Word count: 735 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 141

Chapter 7 - Deja Vu
Submitted: October 22, 2008 • Updated: October 22, 2008
Word count: 579 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 141

Chapter 8 - Another one?
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: October 23, 2008
Word count: 581 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 142

Chapter 9 - Love's Regime
Submitted: October 23, 2008 • Updated: October 23, 2008
Word count: 663 • Size: 3k • Comments: 1 • views: 135

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sailoraqua13 on October 23, 2008, 11:21:13 AM

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sailoraqua13Love it! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on October 23, 2008, 6:27:11 AM

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sailoraqua13Cool! I love it! Oh, and Ichigo has a Keyblade of her own, The Lover's Regime. The blade is silver with blue designs on it, the handle is blue butterfly wings, and the pole part of it is pink.

HalfDemonScy on October 22, 2008, 11:23:36 AM

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HalfDemonScyvery interesting

NobodywithaHeart on October 22, 2008, 11:35:23 AM

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NobodywithaHeartYou like?

sailoraqua13 on October 22, 2008, 10:42:24 AM

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sailoraqua13Oh no!

NobodywithaHeart on October 22, 2008, 10:54:14 AM

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NobodywithaHeartwhat is it? =O

NobodywithaHeart on October 22, 2008, 10:56:29 AM

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NobodywithaHeartthe Heartless? o.O

sailoraqua13 on October 22, 2008, 11:13:01 AM

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sailoraqua13Yes, the Heartless! *Pulls out Keyblade* Show me where it is, I shall whack it to death! Other than that, amazing chappie as usual! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on October 22, 2008, 11:24:55 AM

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NobodywithaHeartOh found it! *Pulls out keyblade and swings*
oopsie... dat wus mah pillow, well better keep looking...
-_-

sailoraqua13 on October 22, 2008, 11:29:22 AM

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sailoraqua13LOL

sailoraqua13 on October 21, 2008, 7:46:50 AM

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NobodywithaHeart on October 21, 2008, 8:50:47 AM

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sailoraqua13 on October 21, 2008, 9:11:00 AM

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sailoraqua13Okay! ^U^ *Sits patiently waiting*

NobodywithaHeart on October 21, 2008, 10:06:42 AM

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NobodywithaHeartlol ^.^ *continues working on the next chapter*

sailoraqua13 on October 22, 2008, 6:51:13 AM

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sailoraqua13Awsomeness! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on October 15, 2008, 8:09:44 AM

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sailoraqua13Wow...This is truly an amazing story! Keep going! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on October 15, 2008, 11:56:29 AM

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NobodywithaHeartThanx ^.^
want to be friends?

sailoraqua13 on October 16, 2008, 6:32:57 AM

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sailoraqua13You're welcome! And sure, I love getting new friends! ^U^ Do you have any ocs for KH? Cause I do! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on October 16, 2008, 10:08:18 AM

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NobodywithaHeartI'm not quite sure what an oc is... explain?

sailoraqua13 on October 16, 2008, 10:31:02 AM

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sailoraqua13An oc is a character for a particular game or show or book that belongs to you and their story goes along with that show or game! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on October 16, 2008, 11:43:37 AM

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NobodywithaHeartIn that case I do but he isn't going to be introduced until around chapter ten. His name is Adam. He has spiky red hair, wears a red jacket with black pants, and wears slick black glasses. What's your character?

NobodywithaHeart on October 16, 2008, 11:45:03 AM

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NobodywithaHeartAnd I suppose that Kael and Raenis are also ocs.

NobodywithaHeart on October 16, 2008, 11:53:32 AM

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NobodywithaHeartAnd the mysterious hooded and cloaked nobody ^.^

sailoraqua13 on October 16, 2008, 12:30:28 PM

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sailoraqua13Cool! ^U^ My oc is Ichigo, she is Sora's older sister by four months. But in reality, her world was attacked by Heartless and she was reborn as his sister. But in my story you don't find that out till the middle of the second story in the series! ^^U

NobodywithaHeart on October 17, 2008, 6:16:07 AM

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NobodywithaHeartThat's cool! I read your story and it was definitely a fave! I was wondering, could I incorporate Ichigo into my story?

sailoraqua13 on October 19, 2008, 2:25:52 AM

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sailoraqua13Sure! I can tell you though she has a MAJOR connection with Larxene, if you need to know about that! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on October 15, 2008, 2:40:11 AM

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NobodywithaHeartPlease comment even if you don't like. Will accept criticism.