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Kingdom Hearts: Hall of Abandon: Part Two

After encountering a Heartless, Sora and crew come across the Hall of Abandon and their journey begins!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Rebirth of Darkness
Submitted: October 24, 2008 • Updated: October 24, 2008
Word count: 630 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 146

Chapter 2 - Dawn of Destiny
Submitted: October 27, 2008 • Updated: October 27, 2008
Word count: 587 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 155

Chapter 3 - The Hall of Abandon
Submitted: October 31, 2008 • Updated: October 31, 2008
Word count: 565 • Size: 3k • Comments: 2 • views: 152

Chapter 4 - The Test
Submitted: November 1, 2008 • Updated: November 1, 2008
Word count: 829 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 134

Chapter 5 - Dark Side
Submitted: November 3, 2008 • Updated: November 3, 2008
Word count: 442 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 160

Chapter 6 - Crossing of the Sixth
Submitted: November 4, 2008 • Updated: November 4, 2008
Word count: 849 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 148

Chapter 7 - Pire of Ruin
Submitted: November 5, 2008 • Updated: November 5, 2008
Word count: 527 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 164

Chapter 8 - Oblivion...
Submitted: November 10, 2008 • Updated: November 10, 2008
Word count: 1038 • Size: 5k • Comments: 2 • views: 140

Chapter 9 - The Clash
Submitted: November 11, 2008 • Updated: November 11, 2008
Word count: 895 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 155

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sailoraqua13 on November 12, 2008, 6:12:05 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 9)
sailoraqua13Woh...Now THAT is unexpected! ^U^ Amazing though! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 12, 2008, 6:45:46 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 9)
NobodywithaHeartthankies!

sailoraqua13 on November 12, 2008, 7:20:28 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Welcome! ^U^ Nice icon! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 12, 2008, 8:25:46 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: index)
NobodywithaHeartthanks! ^.^ I'll prolly start Part III tomorrow

NobodywithaHeart on November 12, 2008, 8:41:18 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: index)
NobodywithaHeartNvm Ima start it now.

sailoraqua13 on November 13, 2008, 6:34:44 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Cool! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on November 10, 2008, 7:08:07 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 8)
sailoraqua13Oh no! Not my brother! NUUUUUUUU!!!! T_T

NobodywithaHeart on November 10, 2008, 7:53:30 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 8)
NobodywithaHeartUh oh... 0.o

sailoraqua13 on November 5, 2008, 9:28:06 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 7)
sailoraqua13Coolness! Who'd of thunk it?!?!? ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 5, 2008, 9:41:55 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 7)
NobodywithaHeartlol yep! One of the deepest plots of my story is beginning to unfold!!! ^.^

sailoraqua13 on November 5, 2008, 9:52:06 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Cool! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2008, 8:42:37 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 6)
sailoraqua13I love it! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 4, 2008, 8:48:49 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 6)
NobodywithaHeartthankies! stay tuned! lol ^.^

sailoraqua13 on November 4, 2008, 11:03:31 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Cool! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2008, 6:15:21 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 5)
sailoraqua13Woh...BIG PLOT TWIST!! ^U^ I love it! ^U^ i can't wait to see if you tie Larxene and ichigo's past into this, THEN it'll get really interesting! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 3, 2008, 6:35:51 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 5)
NobodywithaHeartI just need some basic info for Ichigo, what is her relation to Laxene exactly. This way I can tie her in to the plot.

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2008, 7:27:26 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Ichigo was really from her own world where she was a princess, but the Heartless invaded it and destroyed it, but her mother, Michiru, had her reborn as Sora's sister, though she still remembered what happened on her world. Also, on her world, she had lost her older brother, Alex, her personal guard, Marluia, and her tutor and best friend, Arlene. When she meets up with Larxene, Marluxia, and Axel in Castle Oblivion, she finds out the horrible truth...They were the Nobodies of her brother, guard and tutor. Which is why Larxene hated her, she felt is was Ichigo's fault for her death. But, later in KH2, she comes back during the big Heartless fight in Hollow Bastion (In my CoM story she faked her death) and saves her from dying, showing that she had gotten past her feelings that it was Ichigo's fault for her death and more or less became her guardian angel. Is that enough info? If it isn't just tell me! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 3, 2008, 8:07:13 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: index)
NobodywithaHeartI think it should be enough. If I need anything ese Ill let you know. Thankies! ^.^

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2008, 9:03:44 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Ok, you're welcome! ^U^ Oh, and ichigo wears this crystal rose necklace all the time, it has a little bit of her mother's energy captured in it so she can still feel her mother close to her! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 3, 2008, 9:24:54 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: index)
NobodywithaHeartOkies! I'm all set! ^.^

sailoraqua13 on November 3, 2008, 9:38:21 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Coolness! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on November 1, 2008, 6:52:02 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 4)
sailoraqua13Yes! I'm saved! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 1, 2008, 7:59:14 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 4)
NobodywithaHeartCouldn't have anything happen to you yet! Too early!

sailoraqua13 on November 1, 2008, 8:31:29 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Cool! What are your future plans for the story?

NobodywithaHeart on November 1, 2008, 8:58:10 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: index)
NobodywithaHeartNot 100% sure yet but I'm thinking on adding a few plot twists here and there. The story's about to go in several directions.

sailoraqua13 on November 1, 2008, 9:56:44 AM

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sailoraqua13Cool! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 1, 2008, 2:48:13 AM

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NobodywithaHeart^.^ hold on Ichigo I'm getting there!

sailoraqua13 on November 1, 2008, 4:07:21 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Yeah! ^U^ I shall be saved! ^U^

sailoraqua13 on October 31, 2008, 1:40:32 PM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: 3)
sailoraqua13Sora, stop standing there and HELP ME! T_T Other than that, GREAT CHAPPIE! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on October 31, 2008, 1:53:15 PM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: 3)
NobodywithaHeartlmao XD
Sora: But I can't move! The dumb author has to write the next chapter!
*HEY WHO ARE YOU CALLIN DUMB*
Sora: 0.o oopsie

sailoraqua13 on November 1, 2008, 1:05:22 AM

sailoraqua13 on (Chapter: index)
sailoraqua13Ichigo-...I ain't gonna ask! ^U^

NobodywithaHeart on November 1, 2008, 2:49:56 AM

NobodywithaHeart on (Chapter: index)
NobodywithaHeartOh yeah I'm about halfway done with your pic. It'll be coming soon!