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When The Stars Don't Shine

When Sasuke finnaly defeats his brother, he comes back to Konoha. But what will Sakura do? Will she choose the path of GOOD..........or EVIL? Read to find out!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Why?
Submitted: February 25, 2007 • Updated: April 12, 2007
Word count: 904 • Size: 5k • Comments: 10 • views: 709

Chapter 2 - ITS PARTY TIME!
Submitted: February 26, 2007 • Updated: April 4, 2007
Word count: 2303 • Size: 12k • Comments: 13 • views: 958

Chapter 3 - Escape!
Submitted: March 12, 2007 • Updated: April 4, 2007
Word count: 1796 • Size: 9k • Comments: 11 • views: 517

Chapter 4 - Can't Go Right...Can't Go Left
Submitted: March 13, 2007 • Updated: April 4, 2007
Word count: 1330 • Size: 7k • Comments: 5 • views: 430

Chapter 5 - The Blossom Returns
Submitted: April 4, 2007 • Updated: April 4, 2007
Word count: 1920 • Size: 10k • Comments: 4 • views: 587

Chapter 6 - The Sakura Flower Blooms
Submitted: April 12, 2007 • Updated: April 12, 2007
Word count: 1579 • Size: 8k • Comments: 7 • views: 691

Chapter 7 - Your Joking, Right?
Submitted: April 29, 2007 • Updated: April 29, 2007
Word count: 1737 • Size: 9k • Comments: 9 • views: 580

Chapter 8 - Traitor
Submitted: June 5, 2007 • Updated: June 5, 2007
Word count: 2431 • Size: 12k • Comments: 5 • views: 554

Chapter 9 - Can We Be Together?
Submitted: June 11, 2007 • Updated: June 11, 2007
Word count: 3604 • Size: 19k • Comments: 10 • views: 544

Chapter 10 - Review And Thanks!
Submitted: June 11, 2007 • Updated: June 22, 2007
Word count: 143 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 450

Comments

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hflp on February 20, 2008, 1:00:32 PM

hflp on (Chapter: 6)
hflpThat was definately unconventional on Sakura's part.

Kwazi on January 19, 2008, 12:59:13 PM

Kwazi on (Chapter: 9)
Kwaziomg!!
your story is so great!!!!!!!
it's so beautiful!!!!!
it made me cry!
but you did great!!
it's awesome!!!

Symphoniaprincess101 on October 12, 2007, 11:52:50 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 9)
Symphoniaprincess101no matter how many times you read this it still gets to you^^

TKxKari224 on October 3, 2007, 7:49:11 AM

TKxKari224 on (Chapter: 1)
TKxKari224nice! ^^

GreyPichu on September 2, 2007, 10:23:45 PM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 10)
GreyPichuThat was the BEST story i've ever read on FAC!!!

GreyPichu on September 2, 2007, 11:15:17 AM

GreyPichu on (Chapter: 4)
GreyPichuawesome!!!You make awesome stories!keep it up!

Hayley864 on August 19, 2007, 10:42:01 AM

Hayley864 on (Chapter: 9)
Hayley864baaa. that was awesome!

xEmotional on August 11, 2007, 5:48:20 AM

xEmotional on (Chapter: 2)
xEmotionalomg omg omg omg omg omg ! -favorites- this is soooo good !

AlleyCat17 on July 22, 2007, 11:50:45 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 9)
AlleyCat17there i read the story again and it is still is as awesome as the first time i read it.

hornetthehedgehog on June 20, 2007, 3:19:29 AM

hornetthehedgehog on (Chapter: 9)
hornetthehedgehogthats was totaly wicked!! i have just finnished it and omg thats the best story i have ever read mega cool faves

hornetthehedgehog on June 19, 2007, 4:43:33 AM

hornetthehedgehog on (Chapter: 5)
hornetthehedgehogooooooooooooo i like the way u bilt up the tenstion

hornetthehedgehog on June 18, 2007, 5:46:42 AM

hornetthehedgehog on (Chapter: 2)
hornetthehedgehogwow u realy no how to right a story

digimonlover06 on June 15, 2007, 2:51:58 AM

digimonlover06 on (Chapter: index)
digimonlover06Great story , loved it its the best story i'v read for a sasusaku story . The best stories i'v read ...

1 Crinsom cherry blossoms [ sakuita and sakudiedara ]
2 when the stars don't shine [ sasusaku by you it rocked ]

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 11, 2007, 10:37:40 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 10)
Symphoniaprincess101Wahhh no more that stinks but this is the most awsomeness story ever!!!!!I think i'm going to go cry in the corner now.

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 11, 2007, 10:35:43 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 9)
Symphoniaprincess101TT^__^TT CUTE!!!!!!

pizza24 on June 11, 2007, 9:25:40 AM

pizza24 on (Chapter: 9)
pizza24*CRIES*THAT WAS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME THE BEST STORY IV READ IN A LONG TIME^^the ending was wonderfully romantic♥

kagome99 on June 11, 2007, 9:00:18 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 10)
kagome99*SNIFF* I feel so luved!!!that is so kind!!i luv your stories!!!i cant wait to see what happensin your other ones!!!!!!
you are the BESTIES!!!!!!!!
~Crazii

kagome99 on June 11, 2007, 8:57:44 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 9)
kagome99AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS A PERFECT ENDING!!!!!!!!!I WAS REALLY STARTING TO TEAR UP OVER THAT!!!!!!!SUCH A GREAT STORY!!!!!!I'LL MISS THIS STORY!!!!I LUV IT!!!!!!!!
~Crazii

vesblondie on June 11, 2007, 6:39:20 AM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 9)
vesblondieOMG! IT'S OVER! Oo' Man...I loved this! Beautiful ending :] So cute! (sorry.I read the tanks befor the ending ^^') *hits myself* NYA! THIS WAS SOOOO AWESOME!

vesblondie on June 11, 2007, 6:34:08 AM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 10)
vesblondie*sniffles* Wow...i feel so loved! SQWEE! I'M THE NEWEST! ^^ I love your stories so much! They keep me hooked. :] I wont stop reading them ^_~ I promise you like you promised me!

AlleyCat17 on June 11, 2007, 6:05:01 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 10)
AlleyCat17*sniff sniff* ok i done crying know and your welcome for all of my support.maybe
if your not to bessy you should make a squeal to this story.and i will always read this story when i remember to :3 ^^ =)

AlleyCat17 on June 11, 2007, 5:58:52 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 9)
AlleyCat17*SNIFF SNIFF* OMG THAT WAS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ I JUSTED LOVED IT SO MUCH AND IM GOING TO MISS READING THIS STORY.WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
*GO'S OF TO CRY EVEN MORE*

vesblondie on June 11, 2007, 2:05:09 AM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 8)
vesblondie*smaks my head off a wall* Nya! i loved this chapter! T-T Twas sad...I can't wait for the next one!!! ^^

vesblondie on June 11, 2007, 1:55:06 AM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 7)
vesblondie>.> Nya! I hate liff hangers. ^^ But I do them all the time! YAY! NEXT CHAPTER! >:D

vesblondie on June 11, 2007, 1:49:17 AM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 6)
vesblondieOOoooooos Wonder what Sakura is thinking! ^^*runs off to next chapter*

vesblondie on June 10, 2007, 1:26:29 PM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 5)
vesblondieUh-oh. This is how Sakura will get Sasuke away...I think Oo' NYA! I love this!

vesblondie on June 10, 2007, 1:15:42 PM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 4)
vesblondieAhhhhhhs. C'mon Sasuke >.o

vesblondie on June 10, 2007, 1:12:25 PM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 3)
vesblondieMeeeeh! I need more! Need to read O.o'

vesblondie on June 10, 2007, 1:06:53 PM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 2)
vesblondieXD Hahaha naruto had to kiss Kiba's foot XDDDD Awwwww Sasuke ^///^ That's, too cute!

vesblondie on June 10, 2007, 12:55:26 PM

vesblondie on (Chapter: 1)
vesblondieOmg...this is an amazing story *faves it*

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 7, 2007, 11:00:36 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 8)
Symphoniaprincess101Sakura has gone crazy!!!!But never the less awsome^^

kagome99 on June 6, 2007, 6:14:26 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 8)
kagome99OMG!!!!!!!!
that was so sad.you had me on the brink of tears.i really gotta know what happens next.

AlleyCat17 on June 6, 2007, 4:23:08 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 8)
AlleyCat17oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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i just loved this chapter soooo much i just have anywords to say about it.and it was a very very very very very very very very very very very very very very
sad chapter.it was soooooo sad that i cryed reading it and also the whole time i was reading this i was shaking like a leaf.because i do that when i read or watch good thing like that.so keep up the good story and im going to hate it when this story ends but once in a while i will read it again.and thank you for the up dateing it.and sorry for all the omg's im still really excited about it:3

pizza24 on June 5, 2007, 3:03:38 PM

pizza24 on (Chapter: 8)
pizza24That was...was so *cries* i love it go on*gos and waits in a corner for more* oh and can i draw some pictures to this story??^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:51:59 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 7)
Symphoniaprincess101-^^-Cool

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:43:50 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 6)
Symphoniaprincess101^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:35:50 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 5)
Symphoniaprincess101-^^-

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:27:14 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 4)
Symphoniaprincess101Cool and sakura u crayz^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:21:36 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 3)
Symphoniaprincess101SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE so good xD must read more^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:10:31 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 2)
Symphoniaprincess101Cute^^

Symphoniaprincess101 on June 2, 2007, 10:00:25 AM

Symphoniaprincess101 on (Chapter: 1)
Symphoniaprincess101awww cute^^

TheGuru on May 28, 2007, 12:04:12 AM

TheGuru on (Chapter: 2)
TheGuruYou must've meant in paragraph 4, "Billboard head", or "Billboard forehead", you were thinkin' about Rock Lee's Naruto-given nickname, "Bushy brow".

SasukesChick on May 27, 2007, 12:33:50 PM

SasukesChick on (Chapter: 7)
SasukesChickCONTINUE!

Saphirewolf on May 15, 2007, 1:48:46 AM

Saphirewolf on (Chapter: 4)
Saphirewolfwow its really good ^^ keep it up xD

Saphirewolf on May 15, 2007, 1:41:33 AM

Saphirewolf on (Chapter: 3)
SaphirewolfSQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE so good xD must read more ^^

Saphirewolf on May 15, 2007, 1:31:35 AM

Saphirewolf on (Chapter: 2)
Saphirewolfomg so GOOD MUST READ MORE XD
favs

Saphirewolf on May 15, 2007, 12:51:35 AM

Saphirewolf on (Chapter: 1)
Saphirewolfwow good ^^ keep it up

abitofdrama on May 7, 2007, 1:41:10 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 7)
abitofdramaYEAH! A clifhangie. Acually if you think about it there sorta was a clifhanger in a clifhanger if you count the dream... Cool. You just relax and let the juices flow in D.C. okie-dokie-artichokie? Ican wait if it's super-nuper-juper- awsome or even just a good is alright with me.

pizza24 on May 5, 2007, 1:51:09 PM

pizza24 on (Chapter: 7)
pizza24on with the show^^this is great

kagome99 on April 30, 2007, 8:14:54 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 7)
kagome99AWESOME CHAPPIE!!!!!1
can't wait for next one!

Hope you have fun on your trip!!

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 30, 2007, 8:16:33 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 7)
sasukeXsakuraforeverThank you so much! You seriously don't know how much you guys mean to me. Cause I don't have very many fans on my stories, and I know that they still need alot of work! *Sniff sniff* YOUR THE BEST! *huggles*

AlleyCat17 on April 29, 2007, 10:46:41 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 7)
AlleyCat17omg i loved that chappy and great cliff hanger.i wonder what she is going to
tell him.poor sakura.but anyways while your in Washington DC you should
take a brake and just realest.and i can wait for the next chappy.

sasukeXsakuraforever on April 30, 2007, 5:15:40 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 7)
sasukeXsakuraforeverHehe, thanx. I really need to relax, but I can't do nothing. Haha, I get more ideas when I'm out of my home town anyways! Lolz! Gives me a chance for some ideas and stuff! Thanx for reading, I'm hoping to get it before I leave, but if not, we'll just see what happens!^^

abitofdrama on April 15, 2007, 12:23:06 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 6)
abitofdramaPure coolness. Ilove you misspellings too! There so random never use spellcheck. Let's band together against spellcheck! *get posters and calls all my friends* NO MORE SPELLCHAECK NOMORE SPELLCHEK *wakes up to reality* Yeah don't worry about having it updated oon I will wait forever all right (okay maybe not that long but you still get my point we all have are reasons for be late or not even visiting FAC)

pizza24 on April 13, 2007, 6:46:58 AM

pizza24 on (Chapter: 6)
pizza24awesome so far uour doing realy good^^MOOOOORRRRREEEEEEE!plz^^

kagome99 on April 13, 2007, 4:43:05 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 6)
kagome99awesome!cant wait for the next chappie!i wonder what Sakura was thinking.more soon!

AlleyCat17 on April 13, 2007, 2:28:27 AM

AlleyCat17 on (Chapter: 6)
AlleyCat17wow i loving this story so far please add more chapters soon.

pizza24 on April 11, 2007, 3:50:59 AM

pizza24 on (Chapter: 2)
pizza24this rocks im on to the next chapter^^

saturn13 on April 5, 2007, 5:18:48 PM

saturn13 on (Chapter: 5)
saturn13good stuff, sakura better be careful

abitofdrama on March 15, 2007, 1:54:01 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 3)
abitofdramaGO AFTER HER!!! Did that kiss really mean nothing??? Huh answer me that Sasuke. Huh? No awnser because you know it did now go after her. *cough cough* Yeah I know what it's like to balance health, schoolwork, friends, family and still try to pull out a good story. It can be hard. Maybe some inspiration may help *gives basket of brownies*

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 16, 2007, 5:11:41 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 3)
sasukeXsakuraforeverI LOVE BROWNIES!! *squee* Takes a bite.....Oo...this brownie....is the best brownie....is the history if brownies....^_^

abitofdrama on March 18, 2007, 8:36:11 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 3)
abitofdramaI thought it was National Brownie Day but that's October 15 not March 15 oh well *gives you pocky insted*

abitofdrama on March 15, 2007, 2:04:34 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 4)
abitofdramaAhhh!! The dark side has gotten Sakura! Keep it up the killer climaxs and I might just have wait in front of my screen til you update. Also Sasuke you better help out Sakura...

kagome99 on March 13, 2007, 4:44:32 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 3)
kagome99Sasuke go after her!your a real baka if you dont!>:O
really good!keep up the good work!write more or no cookie!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAH...(cough)..sorry..hm-hm..MWAHAHAHAHAHA!


IF YOUR HYPER AND YOU KNOW IT CLAP YOUR HANDS!
IF YOUR HYPER AND YOU KNOW IT CLAP YOUR HANDS!
IF YOUR HYPER AND YOU KNOW THEN YOUR FACE WILL SURELY SHOW IT,
IF YOUR HYPER AND YOU KNOW IT CLAP YOUR HANDS!

me:*clapping and singing along*

*favs*

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 13, 2007, 4:46:55 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 3)
sasukeXsakuraforeverWAHHHOO! *claps hands like a mofo.* I don't know what this is for.. BUT WHO CARES!! ZIPP-IDE-DO-DA! YEAH!

kagome99 on March 23, 2007, 7:44:42 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99today at school someone started humming 'if your happy and you know it..'
and i was raelly hyper at the time and i started singing 'if your hyper and you know it...'.by the time i got on the computer i decided to put on with that comment.you can use that in the story if you want.i dont really care,just give some credit to me.


You can call me weird.

kagome99 on March 30, 2007, 5:21:32 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: index)
kagome99i mean u can use it in An ordanary day at school.

saturn13 on March 12, 2007, 6:40:30 PM

saturn13 on (Chapter: 3)
saturn13oooo awesome job sasuke better say something or im gonna go there and bash some sense into him *prepares fists*

Silver_Moon on March 12, 2007, 11:23:09 AM

Silver_Moon on (Chapter: 3)
Silver_MoonDammit Sasuke go after her!! >:O Really good, I demand a lemon!! (just joking :D)

sasukeXsakuraforever on March 12, 2007, 11:44:32 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 3)
sasukeXsakuraforeveryou may have your lemon! *hands you a lemon* LEMONS WOOT!!

leaderakasuki on March 12, 2007, 9:44:07 AM

leaderakasuki on (Chapter: index)
leaderakasukinooooo!!!!! Itachi!!! you can't die!!!! ahhhhh!!!!......ok ok i'll read ur story thing now....

abitofdrama on February 28, 2007, 1:11:13 PM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramaHAHAHA! Funny, never though about Kiba and Naruto or arather Naruto and Kiba's foot. Hehe, there's that whole rumor that he doesn't take baths that often (which I have not one itsy bitty clue weather that's true or not), but stil you made it so funny and aquwierd and cool all at the same time. Can't wait for next!

Silver_Moon on February 28, 2007, 10:57:15 AM

Silver_Moon on (Chapter: 2)
Silver_MoonMooooooreee..... :D

Silver_Moon on February 28, 2007, 10:52:18 AM

Silver_Moon on (Chapter: 1)
Silver_MoonAwww, KAWAII!! Can't wait to see what happens next so...on to the next chappy! X3

kagome99 on February 28, 2007, 4:25:30 AM

kagome99 on (Chapter: 2)
kagome99What happened!?You tell me what happened!Or ELSE!Got it!?Good.Oh by the way,I love it so far!Please write more!If you do,I'll give you a cookie!Do you want the cookie,WELL ADD MORE TO THE STORY!*favs*


(If you haven't already noticed,I'm hyper right now.So,I'm sorry for any rudeness!)

sasukeXsakuraforever on February 28, 2007, 4:31:10 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 2)
sasukeXsakuraforeverGee, Thanx! I'm glad you like it so far, sorry about the misspellings......Don't worrry, I'll have another chappie posted soon. (I would have it now, but school and homework is such a drag!) Should be done March 2. If not, tell me and I will work on it right away! ^_^

abitofdrama on February 26, 2007, 11:51:05 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 2)
abitofdramaAHH What's going to happen?! Also during the whole "none of the guys wanting the bottle to point at them when Sasuke spun it" all I could think about was Naruto and Sasuke kissing that one time. HAHAHA! I couldn't stop laughing. Even though I think you shouldv'e mixed it up a little (like have Ino and Neji kiss that would have been funny as heck) Still can't wait for the next chappie!

sasukeXsakuraforever on February 27, 2007, 4:12:41 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 2)
sasukeXsakuraforeverThanx! Oh, and I edited the story, I took your advice and put the part with Ino and Neji! I hope you like it still! ^_^

saturn13 on February 26, 2007, 3:10:07 PM

saturn13 on (Chapter: 2)
saturn13oooo what happened!?

saturn13 on February 25, 2007, 10:04:40 AM

saturn13 on (Chapter: 1)
saturn13kewlies starting! hope you write more

sasukeXsakuraforever on February 26, 2007, 7:18:31 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 1)
sasukeXsakuraforeverKK! I already finished the second chappie! Read it when you get the chance! ^_^

abitofdrama on February 25, 2007, 11:40:57 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: 1)
abitofdramaOh here it is! Good story, can't wait to see the next. Also ,not to be mean or anything, you had a quire a few misspellings. Try typing it on Word first. Also shyringan is spelt sharingan. Keep on writing. ^__^

sasukeXsakuraforever on February 26, 2007, 7:17:39 AM

sasukeXsakuraforever on (Chapter: 1)
sasukeXsakuraforeverHehe! Thanx! Sorry about the misspellings. I my fingers tend to go faster than my brain is going! lol! My second Chappie is ready to go! ^_^ Whenever you get the chance, you could read it! TTYL!

abitofdrama on February 26, 2007, 11:56:22 AM

abitofdrama on (Chapter: index)
abitofdramaI know how it is , hehehe. This is giving me some inspiration *does cartwheel and lands on grass and is given a 4.5* yeah ttyl too <___>
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