Username   Password  
Remember   Register   |   Forgot your password?

Tachzaruu

Tachzaruu's Profile

Tachzaruu's Profile
Tachzaruu's avatar
Username Tachzaruu Gender Female
Date Joined Location England
Last Updated Occupation
Last visit # Pictures 49
# Comments Given1354

Member Info

Member Info
Tachzaruu's picture
i love drawing and writing about xiaolin showdown. it has completely taken over my soul. chase young is my favourite character, but i also love jack spicer. i wish he was real because it is one of my dreams to have him as a boyfriend.
If you want to read my stories then look up Tachzaruu on fanfiction.net

This is a poem i wrote about why chase young traded his soul and emotions. its called 'Dark Emotions'. i hope you like.

p.s: I am perfectly aware that the rhyming pattern is constantly changing, but that is how i wanted to write it.

p.p.s:I'd really appreciate some feedback so please, please comment...
_______________________________________________________

DARK EMOTIONS

She was gone. Gone.

Vanished without a trace.

She promised that it wouldn’t be long

Before I once again saw her face.

But she lied to me

Bade goodbye to me

And walked into the night.

I cried to her

Whispered goodbye to her

And so vanished the light.

I waited for her promised return

But it soon began to dawn

That no matter how much I yearn

She would be forever gone.

My heart began to blacken

And in anger my fists clenched

My mind began to slacken

Something inside me was wrenched.

The years passed and my strength grew

But even as I battled

My heart still ached right down to

The core and my emotions prattled.

No matter how much I fought

I couldn’t escape even as I sought

Release from the all these writhing feelings

And the rage that dwelled within me.

Emotions pricked and tore at me

Revelling in my red fury

It was unbearable to be like this

This was my ultimate weakness.

When I could bear the pain no longer

I summoned the services of the demon

I did not even sit to ponder

I rashly demanded my freedom

From these emotions which tore inside

The compassion in me I could no longer abide.

I traded my feelings and my soul

For a potion that would grant me eternal life

Without emotions I am an empty hole

Now my pleasure is gained from other’s strife.

My mind is calm, my emotions dead

And now my heart is bound to evil

My enemies my presence dread

The worms, so helpless and so feeble.

When I have no potion, I

Become a fearsome form

For centuries this I have borne

With empty, golden eyes.

Sometimes I still sit and ponder

Why she left, where did she wonder?

Perhaps because she had already seen

The monster that has become me.

__________________________________________
There. I hope you like! :)
__________________________________________
Requests:
I_AM_OPEN_FOR_REQUESTS_._

faves_faves

Favorite Artists' Recent Submissions

Comments

Comments (272)

You are not authorized to comment here. Your must be registered and logged in to comment

Voltra_The_Lively on August 6, 2006, 11:32:06 AM

Voltra_The_Lively on
Voltra_The_LivelyI'm glad you like it! Do you think Jack would have a chance of getting any Shen-Gong-Wu in that form?

starbolt77 on August 6, 2006, 11:16:10 AM

starbolt77 on
starbolt77thanks for the comment

manga_girl623 on July 29, 2006, 6:51:52 AM

manga_girl623 on
manga_girl623^_^thanks 4 the comment!!!

Kickassgirl on July 28, 2006, 1:11:45 PM

Kickassgirl on
KickassgirlThanks. Yeah, I got it from the images and icons menu. I was trying to decide between that, or the one with Ron and the butterflies.

shadowtails88 on July 28, 2006, 1:59:40 AM

shadowtails88 on
shadowtails88Thx for the comment!! Anyway, wanna be friends??
 
Wolfie

katlou303 on July 27, 2006, 6:39:19 AM

katlou303 on
katlou303sorry the contest is over

Haunted-Flower on July 23, 2006, 3:26:30 PM

Haunted-Flower on
Haunted-FlowerI'll draw Jack Spicer.^^

CrAzY_fish101 on July 23, 2006, 12:50:49 PM

CrAzY_fish101 on
CrAzY_fish101Thanks for the comment!!

Haunted-Flower on July 23, 2006, 8:43:09 AM

Haunted-Flower on
Haunted-FlowerThank you for your comment on Kimiko!^_^ I read your profile and yeah Xialon Showdown is a great show! And Jack Spicer is pretty cool! I really wish cartoons were real too. But you never know what's out there.(:

starbolt77 on July 23, 2006, 4:11:37 AM

starbolt77 on
starbolt77thanks for the comment!!!:)

Featured

Featured

Jack Spicer - kittykatsugar

Jack Spicer - kittykatsugar

Fave Users (15)

Koji45Twisted_RebelElenOdd_xoCoStanleyQueen5hybridrainbowavi17usagi_moonToxic_fairyRag_GirlPrincess_Maddienitro_the_loonlove_2_write_stuffHybrid_Sunshinebubblegum_snake

Fans (20)

JazmynMoon21chack11Koji45mrsaturn123naruto202smexygirlfuno6sketcher36spiceXisXnice1513Voltra_The_LivelySkyGirlPuppygirl9Toxic_fairybeyonce_babycakes